Collection Of The End

[Anthonest]

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Do you like em'? I'm still working on more of "End" cards, but for now I wanna focus on some more Ancient Gears. Let me know if they need any changes, thanks.

[Doc.]

End Dragon, Fusion.
It cant go to hand.
LoLwHaT

[Anthonest]

[quote name='ウォーグレイモン' timestamp='1342960187' post='5985405']
End Dragon, Fusion.
It cant go to hand.
LoLwHaT
[/quote]

Correction, the "Five Headed Dragon" is a fusion, and it goes in your deck.

[AGATHODAIMON BANGTAIL COW]

Fusions belong in your Extra Deck, not your Deck, and can't [i]ever[/i] get into your Hand. Which makes Beginning of the End pointless (and it's really similar to [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/The_Beginning_of_the_End"]this card[/url]). Even if it worked, you would only get to use it once, then the other copies are dead draws.

As for End Dragon: So -5 Level 8+ Dragons, have a Five Headed Dragon that is completely unaffected by card effects (you said this lasts one turn? The wording on the card is so off that it's hard to understand you.) and wins you the duel in five turns? Even if it is incredibly hard to bring out (inb4 Future Fusion), you made a monster that is invincible to everything except Honest, and cards like this shouldn't really be made. :/

From how the other two cards are worded, you should just make End Dragon be an Effect Monster rather than a Fusion Monster. As for the effect monster: By how you worded it, it should be "End your turn, their turn, your turn, their turn, your turn, you get him." He's really weak for a Level 6, but weak enough to be Special Summoned by Mystic Tomato (and even if he wasn't, there are other Dragon cards that can bring him out). Keeping your Effect Monster guy alive would require your Deck to be much similar to Final Countdown, plus effects to stop effect destruction your your monster.

Tl;dr: End Dragon should be an Effect Monster, and also shouldn't be right at invincible, even if he's right at impossible to get out.
Your Spell Card is a very meh effect, and your other Dragon is really slow and really easy to kill.

Also, Alternate Win Conditions, like what you made with End Dragon, are extremely powerful, and many are broken. It takes a TON of thought in order to balance them so that they aren't broken.