flyboyissac1 Posted July 23, 2012 Report Share Posted July 23, 2012 Rate comment subscribe lol. But seriouly i think its a little better than the last card i posted tell me the negetive parts of this card. [img]http://i.imgur.com/2W2F7.jpg[/img] [spoiler='Effect']Once per turn, You can discard 1 spell card from your hand, to place 1 Spell Counter on this card. You can remove any number of Spell Counters from this card to add 1 monsters with 1500 atk and less from your graveyard to your hand.[/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thar Posted July 23, 2012 Report Share Posted July 23, 2012 I do not like the noisy image of Jace Beleren one bit, let alone how it puts a crater in the card's originality. [u]OCG Fix:[/u] [i]Once per turn[color=#ff0000][b]:[/b][/color] You [color=#ff0000][b]may[/b][/color] discard 1 Spell card from your hand[color=#ff0000][b];[/b][/color] place 1 Spell counter on this card[b][color=#ff0000];[/color][/b] you [color=#ff0000][b]may[/b][/color] remove any number of Spell counters from this card[color=#ff0000][b]:[/b][/color] Add 1 monster with 1500 or less ATK from your graveyard to your hand.[/i] ... "...[i]you may remove any number of Spell Counters from this card: Add 1 monster with 1500 or less ATK from your graveyard to your hand.[/i]" ^ This threw me off. You mention in the effect that you may remove any amount of Spell counters to get a monster from your graveyard. What good is stating "any amount" when there's only one outcome? Fix this, please. And again, that image of Jace...change it. It's already been used in Magic: the Gathering, and it's too small for the card to fit in without making it appear noisy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
flyboyissac1 Posted July 23, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 23, 2012 interesting --- thank you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gojira/Godzilla Posted July 23, 2012 Report Share Posted July 23, 2012 [color=#000000][b]Originality 1/10[/b][/color] [color=#000000][b]Effect: I would make it go like this:[/b] [/color]Once per turn[b]:[/b] You [b]may[/b] discard 1 Spell card from your hand[b];[/b] place 1 Spell counter on this card[b];[/b] you [b]may[/b] remove any number of Spell counters (Max. 3) from this card[b]:[/b] Add a number of monsters with 1500 or less ATK from your graveyard to your hand. equal to the number of Spell counters removed. This effect can only be activated Once per Turn. [color=#000000][b]Overall: You need to Find better image sources, and make sure they are large enough to fit in the card without it being blurred.[/b][/color] [color=#000000][b]Overall rating: 6/10[/b][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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