宇佐見 蓮子@C94 Posted July 28, 2012 Report Share Posted July 28, 2012 3+ Weeks of Xyz Daily. I'm proud of myself. Also, I'm very tired while making this so my following card may not make sense. [IMG]http://i49.tinypic.com/25f35tz.jpg[/IMG] [spoiler=This Ultra Complicated effect brought to you by lack of sleep.] 2 Level 4 Spellcaster-type Monsters When a Spell Card is activated; place 1 Spell Counter on a card on the field. During the start of your Main Phase 1, declare 1 Attribute. This card's Attribute becomes the Attribute you declared. Once per turn; you can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card to have this card gain the following effect(s) depending on this card's Attribute until the start of your next Main Phase. FIRE: When a Trap Card is activated, you can negate it's activation and deal 1000 Damage to your opponent's life points. WATER: When a Monster you control is destroyed, you can Special Summon 1 "Mercury Token" (WATER/Spellcaster/Level 4) to your side of the field. It's ATK and DEF is equal to the ATK and DEF of the destroyed monster. EARTH: When this card destroys a monster by battle, you can attach the destroyed Monster to this card as Xyz Material. WIND: All Xyz Monsters you control except this card can activate it's effects without detaching an Xyz Material. LIGHT: Effects that activate in the Graveyard is negated. DARK: Effects that activate in the Hand is negated. During your 7th Standby Phase after this card is Xyz Summoned, Banish it. [/spoiler] OCG is terribad, I know. So fixing that is necessary. Other than that, I think it's fairly balanced since, well, it's fairly balanced. It acts as a Swiss Army Knife (Or in this case, Cute Lolita Girl) that can stop multiple things and do multiple things. So rate, fix [s]my terrrrrrrrrrribbbbbleeee OCG[/s] if broken and CnC is more than appreciated. (Useless random card fact of the day: It's the 69th card I've made in Yugico. :Ifyouknowwhatimean:) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thekazu4u Posted July 28, 2012 Report Share Posted July 28, 2012 [quote] 2 Level 4 Spellcaster-type Monsters When a Spell Card is activated; place 1 Spell Counter on a card on the field. During the start of your Main Phase 1, declare 1 Attribute. This card's Attribute becomes the Attribute you declared. Once per turn; you can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card to have this card gain the following effect(s) depending on this card's Attribute until the start of your next Main Phase. FIRE: When a Trap Card is activated, you can negate it's activation and deal 1000 Damage to your opponent's life points. WATER: When a Monster you control is destroyed, you can Special Summon 1 "Mercury Token" (WATER/Spellcaster/Level 4) to your side of the field. It's ATK and DEF is equal to the ATK and DEF of the destroyed monster. EARTH: When this card destroys a monster by battle, you can attach the destroyed Monster to this card as Xyz Material. WIND: All Xyz Monsters you control except this card can activate it's effects without detaching an Xyz Material. LIGHT: Effects that activate in the Graveyard is negated. DARK: Effects that activate in the Hand is negated. During your 7th Standby Phase after this card is Xyz Summoned, Banish it. [/quote] The only thing i'd say you would maybe want to do is make the effects make a little bit more sense when paired with the attribute. For example, maybe put the Graveyard effect with DARK. Also, I would remove the effect "Effects that activate in the Hand is negated." (also, it should be "are" not "is.") The problem with this effect is that an extraordinarily small number of effects activate from the hand. Maxx "C", Effect Veiler, Swift Scarecrow... these all activate in the Graveyard, not the hand. Cyber Dragon, Grandmaster of the Six Samurai... these are not effects, but summoning conditions. About the only effects that activate from the hand are Golden Ladybug, Gorz, and Battle Fader. I honestly cannot think of any other. Having an effect that only negates 3 cards in the entire game does seem a bit too specific. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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