My first 2 cards!What do you guys think

[Reidom]

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This is my first post so what do you think of these 2 cards?
Dont forget to reply and give me a rating and opinion .

[Thar]

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No thumbnails, please. They're icky.

A bit tipsy with Sora's effect. There are some memory issues with the counters, cause cards can be activated pretty quickly and the chance of forgetting to put counters on it, and activating the effects when you reach a certain amount, will increase.

Roxas is better. Grammar issues here and there, but if you fix Sora's effect, the two could go very well together.

[Reidom]

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No thumbnails, please. They're icky.

A bit tipsy with Sora's effect. There are some memory issues with the counters, cause cards can be activated pretty quickly and the chance of forgetting to put counters on it, and activating the effects when you reach a certain amount, will increase.

Roxas is better. Grammar issues here and there, but if you fix Sora's effect, the two could go very well together.
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I changed Sora's effect to:Once per turn,if this card would be destroyed it is not.When this card is summoned put one drive counter on it.Each time a spell card is activated add one drive counter to this card.
3 counters:Summon Sora, Valor Form or Sora, Wisdom Form
4 counters:Summon Sora, Limit Form
5 counters:Summon Sora, Anti Form or Sora, Master Form
7 counters:Summon Sora, Final Form