Saiba Aisu Posted March 5, 2008 Report Share Posted March 5, 2008 Hey, guys. Me here (again!). I continued to delve into Jess's Image Gallery, and I must say I'm impressed. Great job, Jessica! Using another image of hers, here's another one of my cards-it's the second of three specific Archetype supporters. Thanks. NOTE: I do not own the artwork used for this card, nor do I claim to possess any rights, legal or otherwise to reproduce it without permission of the artist. This is a disclaimer, so there. [align=center]Vengeful Vampiress Card Lore:"This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. When a Zombie-Type monster with an ATK of 2000 or more is Special Summoned from your Deck to the field, by sending the Special Summoned monster from your side of the field to the Graveyard, you can Special Summon this card from your hand to your side of the field. If this card is Special Summoned this way, its original ATK and DEF become 2300, and it gains the following effect: When a Zombie-Type monster(s) is Special Summoned from your Graveyard, place 1 Vengeance Counter on this card (max 3). When a Zombie-Type monster you control would be destroyed by an effect controlled by your opponent, you can remove 1 Counter from this card to negate that effect."[/align] === All comments and suggestions welcome. :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atomix Posted March 5, 2008 Report Share Posted March 5, 2008 Not bad 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saiba Aisu Posted March 5, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 5, 2008 Thanks, really, I'm flattered-but I can't help but notice that's the exact same thing you posted on my other Thread, too. Please don't do that, and especially on my Threads. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
casaditymaker Posted March 5, 2008 Report Share Posted March 5, 2008 Nice picture and effect! 10/10 :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saiba Aisu Posted March 5, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 5, 2008 Thanks for the high rating, Casadity. Love your siggie, btw. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted March 5, 2008 Report Share Posted March 5, 2008 Great card Cyber, love the image and the effect. ^_^You only get better and better... 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saiba Aisu Posted March 5, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 5, 2008 Thanks, Static. Glad you like it-and you want to know my secret? Practice, practice, practice!!! T_T It took forever to find good bats for her-the original image didn't have them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chevalier Posted March 5, 2008 Report Share Posted March 5, 2008 The image is great but the effect is fantastic! Zombie decks would see new light. Nice job, two great cards in two days. Youz' on fire. XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parting Shot Posted March 5, 2008 Report Share Posted March 5, 2008 since the only way to special summon her is by tributing a different special summoned monster, her effect of "if this card was special summoned by this effect...." will always activate (at least i think so). in that case, wouldn't it be easier to just have her starting stats at 2300, and take out the line of "if this card was...."? plus, it would make the amount of text smaller and more readable. just a thought, though.... overall - very nice card!! ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God of Cadillacs Posted March 5, 2008 Report Share Posted March 5, 2008 Very cool card. Image is too. 10/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saiba Aisu Posted March 5, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 5, 2008 *slaps self on head* You're totally right, Browarod. I'll fix the effect. Thanks Org13, and thanks Lambo-you're always really nice when it comes to my cards. :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Black Fang Posted March 5, 2008 Report Share Posted March 5, 2008 very nice i say again.. 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted March 5, 2008 Report Share Posted March 5, 2008 the effect, and stats are good, but the picture just doesnt click with the card, sorry9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saiba Aisu Posted March 5, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 5, 2008 Effect fixed! Thanks for rating guys-and Bloodrun, you're kind of right, unless you really zoom in you can't see her fangs. :[ I like Madam Mantis better, don't you? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted March 5, 2008 Report Share Posted March 5, 2008 Effect fixed! Thanks for rating guys-and Bloodrun' date=' you're kind of right, unless you really zoom in you can't see her fangs. :[ I like Madam Mantis better, don't you?[/quote'] Yes i agree with you ^^_ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Dark Master Posted March 5, 2008 Report Share Posted March 5, 2008 wow...im amazed...awesomeness...10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saiba Aisu Posted March 5, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 5, 2008 Ah, thanks-that's sweet of you. However, I think you should also check out Madam Mantis-she's better in my opinion. Thanks for the high rating! :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
arpeejajo Posted March 5, 2008 Report Share Posted March 5, 2008 Thanks' date=' really, I'm flattered-but I can't help but notice that's the exact same thing you posted on my other Thread, too. Please don't do that, and especially on [i']my[/i] Threads. Lol, i hate comments like that. Name: 7.8/10 It's good, but it could use an actual name with it. With an effect like that, a name would definitely make it cooler.Picture: 6.5/10 Great picture. The only problem is, the background, it really needs one.OCG: 9.5/10 I see nothing wrong with it, except for the double "T" in the first word.Balance: 9.3 The effect balances very well with an ATK like that. The conditions to summon it also balance it out, quite nicely.Effect: 9.2/10 Very good effect, if can really save your monsters from cards like Man-Eater Bug or Sakuretsu Armor. Total: 3.9+9.75+23.75+23.25+27.6=88.25/1008.825/10 Excellent Card To see how I rated it, check my sig. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saiba Aisu Posted March 6, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 6, 2008 Thanks Arp. Glad you like it. For the records, though, it does have a background-maybe I overdid the opacity a bit. And yes, maybe I should change the name...it's an idea. Thanks for the ratings! /Edit: GAH-The card doesn't have "TT;" I just typed an extra "T." Fixed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultima™ Posted March 6, 2008 Report Share Posted March 6, 2008 11/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LightAndDarknessDragon Posted March 6, 2008 Report Share Posted March 6, 2008 really good card.kinda creepy too, but thats good- 9.5/10just one question, though. when will a zombie be sp.summoned from the deck? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted March 6, 2008 Report Share Posted March 6, 2008 Love the card, but i'm not a fan of he pic =/Still, nice ^_^8.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kid Posted March 6, 2008 Report Share Posted March 6, 2008 pretty good, commander :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saiba Aisu Posted March 6, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 6, 2008 Thanks for the ratings guys. A Zombie may be summoned from the Deck via the effect of Pyramid Turtle, or by the effect of Spirit of the Pharaoh (and the Zombies must be 2000 ATK and up). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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