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My first card. Can you rate it?


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Psst, you forgot to change the Type. They're all Pyro-Types.

The FIRE one is ok. It's tied as the strongest Normal monster in the game, but having it be Level 7 hurts it since it's better to make them Level 8 instead. The Level thing goes for the rest of them too.

The EARTH one is too.

The WATER one is weak, though being Level 7 makes it Tribute-Summonable with only one Tribute with A Legendary Ocean, but there are stronger targets. It could do with a bit more ATK.

The WIND one isn't too broken, but people are going to complain about it being over 3000 ATK. If you want, it could be 3200 ATK, but 3500 is a tad bit over the top.

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[quote name='LukefonFabre4' timestamp='1343855718' post='5994746']
I wouldn't have used the word, "aliveness", mainly cause it isn't a word. So, I would probably change it to something like, "A fire so hot, your body is burnt down to your very soul, leaving nothing but ashes." But that's just my opinion. Other than that, it's nearly perfect. It's a [b]great[/b] first card! And it's nice and overpowered, which is exactly what this Thread is for. :) It's name, picture, attribute, type, and lore all fit together nicely.
I give this card an 8/10. For a first-card-rating, though, I give it a 9/10.
[/quote] thanyyou for rating it so nicely. Im going to fix them up and make a spell card and then post the cards again.

[quote name='A Background Character' timestamp='1343855758' post='5994747']
Psst, you forgot to change the Type. They're all Pyro-Types.

The FIRE one is ok. It's tied as the strongest Normal monster in the game, but having it be Level 7 hurts it since it's better to make them Level 8 instead. The Level thing goes for the rest of them too.

The EARTH one is too.

The WATER one is weak, though being Level 7 makes it Tribute-Summonable with only one Tribute with A Legendary Ocean, but there are stronger targets. It could do with a bit more ATK.

The WIND one isn't too broken, but people are going to complain about it being over 3000 ATK. If you want, it could be 3200 ATK, but 3500 is a tad bit over the top.
[/quote] Ok well ill fix them up and make them different then just pyros. Oops!!

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