Hanako-chan's Second Card! <333

[Hanako-chan]

Yay! I'm starting to love card making, so expect to see much from me from now on!
[img]http://i.imgur.com/CaVP2.jpg[/img]



So, this is basically a TGU for Rank 2 monsters, which isn't very threatening actually. Also, thanks to Striker-san, I found the Yugico page and made this Rank 2 for TGH:

[img]http://i46.tinypic.com/6s9nxi.jpg[/img]

[~Marluxia~]

I like it. 10/ 10. And I don't know why XYZ isn't an option in card making.

[Nathanael D. Striker]

http://yugico.com/yugioh-card-creator

Now, for your cards. TGH is intetesting. I can't think of a Level 2 Fairy on the top of my head, but I think this may see use in Agents. I doubt it'll get TGU use though.

Card Grammar: 10/10
Balance: 9/10
Viability: 8/10
Total: 27/30

For your Xyz, it can turn into a huge beater or a huge wall that can't be destroyed by battle. Uh, iffy from a Rank 2. I do like the effort though. Very good effort.

Card Grammar: 9.75/10
Balance: 8.25/10
Viability: 8.5/10
Total: 26.5/30

[Suibon]

[center]It's a +1 and an instant Rank 2 upon Summon.[/center]

[center]Unless you can proffer proof why Tour Guide from the Underworld should be anyone's model of good card design, I am deeming this broken.[/center]

[Hanako-chan]

[quote name='Striker' timestamp='1344138557' post='5997766']
[url="http://yugico.com/yugioh-card-creator"]http://yugico.com/yugioh-card-creator[/url]

Now, for your cards. TGH is intetesting. I can't think of a Level 2 Fairy on the top of my head, but I think this may see use in Agents. I doubt it'll get TGU use though.

Card Grammar: 10/10
Balance: 9/10
Viability: 8/10
Total: 27/30

For your Xyz, it can turn into a huge beater or a huge wall [b]that can't be destroyed by battle.[/b] Uh, iffy from a Rank 2. I do like the effort though. Very good effort.

Card Grammar: 9.75/10
Balance: 7.75/10
Viability: 8.5/10
Total: 26/30
[/quote]

No, no. It says that it cannot destroy monsters by battle, which prevents him from becoming a huge wall/beater. Also, forgot the until the End Phase part, which I just added. Also, thanks for the page, I'll edit my post when I remake the card.


[quote name='Suibon' timestamp='1344138632' post='5997767']
[center]It's a +1 and an instant Rank 2 upon Summon.[/center]
[center]Unless you can proffer proof why Tour Guide from the Underworld should be anyone's model of good card design, I am deeming this broken.[/center]
[/quote]

Well first of all this can't go into Leviar or 17. Also, this can't summon Sangan either. The biggest thing this can go into is Gachi Gachi. I think it all depends on how you look at it.


PS: I added Daemon Barrel as a card, thanks Striker!

[Nathanael D. Striker]

[quote name='Suibon' timestamp='1344138632' post='5997767']
[center]It's a +1 and an instant Rank 2 upon Summon.[/center]
[center]Unless you can proffer proof why Tour Guide from the Underworld should be anyone's model of good card design, I am deeming this broken.[/center]
[/quote]

Rank 2 monsters aren't as bad as Rank 3. So, argument invalid.

Edit: Glad I read that wrong. Score updated.