Hezelmon Lingtsworn Champion

[Mattemuppen]

[font=times new roman,times,serif][size=4]This is my first card i've ever posted up on the forums so be honest and tell me is i did something wrong. Enjoy [/size][/font]
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[Nghtwing]

Please, add the image to the post by putting the link between [img*] [/img*] and remove the *'s
Anyways, The idea is good but, this card can easily be destroyed by torrential tribute since it will resolve first in a chain, I would make it "When Summoned: Negate the activation of all Trap Cards in your opponent's field and destroy them". But it's just my opinion.
And the drawback is just Suicidal, I mean, at each turn, you draw 1 card and discard the top 4 cards, in this rithym, you would lose for not having cards in your Deck in less than 6/7 turns! (Considering a 40 cards Deck.)


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[Aerion Brightflame]

[quote name='Nghtwing' timestamp='1344259331' post='5998714']
And the drawback is just Suicidal, I mean, at each turn, you draw 1 card and discard the top 4 cards, in this rithym, you would lose for not having cards in your Deck in less than 6/7 turns! (Considering a 40 cards Deck.)
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Umm... Nightwing.

Lightsworns are a self milling archetype. They gain benifits for millings there own deck. So, it isn't a drawback here.

OT: The card itself seems UP. It's 2700 ATK that is probably harder to summon than the 3000 ATK Judgement Dragon lightsworns already have. And its effect is worse. I would change it to, and i'm unsure of the wording, but soething along the lines of: 'When this card is summoned, destroy all spells and traps on the field. Cards may not be activated in response to this effect.' That way people can't chain there face downs to the effect. This could also be increased by around 600 ATK. Since its a non generic level 9 synchro, with an underwhelming effect, it should have some beatdown properties. Oh, and i think it needs to be 2 or more Lightsworm non tuners, so it matches mist Wurm, and Triulisha for the summoning conditions.

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[Nghtwing]

[quote name='HiveNet' timestamp='1344260476' post='5998722']
Umm... Nightwing.

Lightsworns are a self milling archetype. They gain benifits for millings there own deck. So, it isn't a drawback here.
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Sry, didn't know hehe.. I'm totally out of these new archetypes ... But I really think that 4 cards are too much if they don't have "Adding from the graveyards" Effects

[宇佐見 蓮子@C94]

Wait, does Lightsworns even run Tuners? Or maybe I'm just remembering the 2008 Format Lightsworns.

Anyway, yeah. It's UP'd. For something with such summoning conditions, it needs a better effect. Something more in the line of SS-ing Lightsworns from the grave (Massively useful in Lightsworns) or making the destruction effect more powerful like HiveNet suggested. The mill effect is miles better than Judgement Dragon's since this is an actual Lightsworn, meaning that several effects that can't be activated via JD's effect can be triggered with this. The ATK is also pathetically low considering it's weak effect and tough summoning condition, so I might recommend bumping it up to 3200, which at that point, in can run over BLS and other pesky nuisances. That aside, it's a pretty amazing card for a newbie, so kudos for that. I look forward to seeing your next cards.