hotfoilcard Posted March 6, 2008 Report Share Posted March 6, 2008 are these too broken? should i change their effects at all?[attachment=24911][attachment=24912] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Black Fang Posted March 6, 2008 Report Share Posted March 6, 2008 i think teh 2nd one, should have to be a choice of only one of the three monsters. the first one is basicaly an upgraded scar... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SOUL Posted March 6, 2008 Report Share Posted March 6, 2008 Errors, Good Pics, Geisha needs to be Capalized, Overall: 7/10Very good Effort for a New Member (so far)!!! :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kid Posted March 6, 2008 Report Share Posted March 6, 2008 few error's but pretty good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted March 6, 2008 Report Share Posted March 6, 2008 Good wrok, you put some god effort into them ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hotfoilcard Posted March 6, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 6, 2008 thanks guys as far as it being an upgraded scar buzzz it gets a discard effect when its discarded as a cost...so what dw monster wished would happen i mean it IS sort of an upgraded scar... better feedback on these than my WMC counters XD so other than the typos and punctuation is there any tweaks that should be done...i was gonna enter these in a contest for making female monsters if they are relatively balanced/useful.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atomix Posted March 6, 2008 Report Share Posted March 6, 2008 Use IMG tags Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hotfoilcard Posted March 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 9, 2008 edited the main so u guys can see the cards without clicking Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted March 9, 2008 Report Share Posted March 9, 2008 They are a little broken, but still they are nice cards. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Slade Posted March 9, 2008 Report Share Posted March 9, 2008 Huh, how did you compress the text for the name of Redd? (I use the downloaded version. Is that a feature on the online version or something?) Oh, and the effects should read:For Redd, it would go: If this card is sent to the Graveyard to fulfill a cost, add 2 "Dark World" monsters from your deck to your hand.For the Geisha:When this card is sent from the Field to the Graveyard as a result of battle, add one "Great Shogun Shien", "Grandmaster of the Six Samurai", or "Enishi, Shien's Chancellor" from your deck to your hand. I wasn't entirely sure about Geisha, but I checked Arsenal Summoner's effect for a reference. That's essentially how it would be done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hotfoilcard Posted March 10, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 10, 2008 i tried to put quotation marks and parentheses but they didnt show up on the card...=/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hotfoilcard Posted March 12, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 12, 2008 bump.....overpowered? how can i make them more balanced? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grayall Posted March 12, 2008 Report Share Posted March 12, 2008 They got big OCG probs// Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hotfoilcard Posted March 12, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 12, 2008 They got big OCG probs// so help me fix em or else your post = useless Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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