hotfoilcard Posted March 6, 2008 Report Share Posted March 6, 2008 i know these arent that original but i run an uber stall exodia that gets PWNED when they side in jinzos and RD..let me know what u think..[attachment=24924][attachment=24925] yasuragi means peace in japanese as far as i can tell... i didnt like the way the above looked Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted March 6, 2008 Report Share Posted March 6, 2008 Some grammar problems, and they are a bit basic, but good effort ^_^7.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hotfoilcard Posted March 6, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 6, 2008 grammer problems? those fxs are basically copy past from threatening roar and waboku? thanks for the rating and comment tho :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrabHelmet Posted March 6, 2008 Report Share Posted March 6, 2008 Some grammar problems The only OCG error is that the names aren't capitalized. Everything else is perfect, primarily because it was copypasta'd directly from Waboku and Threatening Roar. 4/10 You took two existing traps and made them Quick-Play Spells. Originality, please? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted March 6, 2008 Report Share Posted March 6, 2008 Well, I typicly don't see card have "you" in it, like, You take no damage.But w/e, maybe I use the new OCG too much =/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrabHelmet Posted March 6, 2008 Report Share Posted March 6, 2008 Well' date=' I typicly don't see card have "you" in it, like, You take no damage.But w/e, maybe I use the new OCG too much =/[/quote'] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted March 6, 2008 Report Share Posted March 6, 2008 Wierd, I never saw that, all the wobaku's I have don't say that 0_oBut w/e =/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrabHelmet Posted March 6, 2008 Report Share Posted March 6, 2008 Wierd' date=' I never saw that, all the wobaku's I have don't say that 0_oBut w/e =/[/quote'] You have an older version of Waboku. Old Card Lore: Any damage inflicted by an opponent's monster is decreased to 0 during the turn this card is activated. New Card Lore: You take no Battle Damage this turn. Your monsters cannot be destroyed as a result of battle this turn. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Ruby Posted March 6, 2008 Report Share Posted March 6, 2008 dont see originality but great effort, 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted March 6, 2008 Report Share Posted March 6, 2008 Yeah, lol, I got the old 1, ok, sry for the mistake man Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hotfoilcard Posted March 6, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 6, 2008 again as far as originality goes giant rat isnt much different than mystic tomato...but who cares. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God of Cadillacs Posted March 6, 2008 Report Share Posted March 6, 2008 Some grammar problems but they are ok. 7/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon Master Posted March 6, 2008 Report Share Posted March 6, 2008 bad gram but other than that ok 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parting Shot Posted March 6, 2008 Report Share Posted March 6, 2008 I think the grammar is fine, but they aren't very original. The pics are great, but you should use them to make all-new, super awesome cards. overall - 9.99/13.69 for the effort Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squall19 Posted March 6, 2008 Report Share Posted March 6, 2008 yes the cards are not very originalbut he said that he wanted to create cards that could be used if your opponent uses Jinzoand if that was his intention then these cards are goodI personally think they are ok 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hotfoilcard Posted March 6, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 6, 2008 yes the cards are not very originalbut he said that he wanted to create cards that could be used if your opponent uses Jinzoand if that was his intention then these cards are goodI personally think they are ok 7/10 thanks like i said i run a fun uber stall exodia that can be pwned as soon as they side in jinzo. i made these cuz it would be nice to have more options...esp with the new tripple jinzo i dont see why there arent more playable quck plays anyway Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted March 6, 2008 Report Share Posted March 6, 2008 These cards would be just about perfect if you improved on the overall quality of the cards effects and pictures; uniqueness and complexity wise. ^_^Besides that nice ideas, well done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cardlorda.j2 Posted March 6, 2008 Report Share Posted March 6, 2008 Hotfoilcard said that giant rat and mystic tomato are basicly the same, but them to are monster's who have differences, but these card's have no difference except there Spell's not Traps, so without being horrible i think you should try again, and do something that dosn't copy other card's that are made already. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hotfoilcard Posted March 6, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 6, 2008 thats cool and all and i know im taking hits for origionality (i finally read some of the "rules" for posting in this section) but these cards are not meant to be complex or unique...they are simply alternatives for players who are sick of getting their decks locked down by jinzo and love stall. i mean i would be upset if you told me a waboku/threatening roar quick play was posted here yesterday... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hotfoilcard Posted March 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 9, 2008 bump................. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FateTheSeer Posted March 9, 2008 Report Share Posted March 9, 2008 they have the same effects as threening roar and waboko but there good cards for using against jinzo and sorcerer of dark magic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mad Hopz Posted March 9, 2008 Report Share Posted March 9, 2008 i like originality. so not ur cards. but 7/10 for effort. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Slade Posted March 9, 2008 Report Share Posted March 9, 2008 Wierd' date=' I never saw that, all the wobaku's I have don't say that 0_oBut w/e =/[/quote'] That's called a card errata. Because effect "All battle damage you take this turn becomes 0." wasn't very clear on how it protects your monsters. That's why they changed it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Faded Posted March 9, 2008 Report Share Posted March 9, 2008 3/10 originality none Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SephirothKirby Posted March 9, 2008 Report Share Posted March 9, 2008 again as far as originality goes giant rat isnt much different than mystic tomato...but who cares. Giant Rat: When this card is sent to the Graveyard as a result of battle, you can Special Summon 1 EARTH monster with an ATK of 1500 or less in face-up Attack Position from your Deck. Then shuffle your Deck Mystic Tomato: When this card is sent to the Graveyard as a result of battle, you can Special Summon 1 DARK monster with an ATK of 1500 or less in face-up Attack Position from your Deck. Then shuffle your Deck. No, those are entirely different cards. Your statement makes no sense. And as you can see, we *do* care about difference. Your cards are exactly the same as Threatening Roar and Waboku, nothing original there. 2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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