//::..MECHA DRAGON..::\\

[DarkS33d]

[center][color=#ff0000][b][size=5]//::..MECHA DRAGON..::\\[/size][/b][/color][/center]


[center][b]My first card I made here on YCM. I used old OCG best I could. ( I don't really understand the new OCG.) If you can, give me some OCG corrections.[/b][/center]




[center][img]http://i.imgur.com/BK7P6.jpg[/img][/center]


[center][i]If this card is Special Summoned, you may pay 500 Life Points to attack your opponent directly.[/i][/center]

[center][b]I think that this effect is rather effective and balanced. I kept the ATK rather low so the Direct Attack isn't so OP and the DEF is slightly high because, you know, it's a dragon... made of meta[/b]l.[/center]

[center][u][i][size=3]Image credit -- JazinKay on Photobucket[/size][/i][/u][/center]
[center][b][color=#ff0000]COMMENT AND RATE...TELL ME HOW TO BECOME BETTER[/color][/b][/center]

[Rehva]

Its a little bland, and why is the text so small? anyways, It's okay, for a first card i guess.

[Ren✧]

OCG help:
If this card is Special Summoned: You can pay 500 Life Points; this card can attack your opponent directly.

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I wasn't sure if you wanted it so that the card could only attack directly on the turn it is summoned or for the rest of its time on the field...which I don't foresee being a prolonged period of time...

To put it bluntly, this card is fairly bland. Balanced? Probably, but unimagitive and probably wouldn't get much use. You take 500 damage, opponent takes 1200 damage, more than a fair trade off...but still don't know if it would be worth deck space it would take up...

Perhaps add another effect that takes effect when this card deals direct damage, such as milling your opponent's deck, destroy a S/T, or banishing a monster. Whatever you think fits the card best, but whatever you choose just make sure it adds some flare to the card.

Don't get discouraged, I am guessing this is your first card...and everybody's card more or less sucks. This is definitely not the worst first try I have ever seen.

6.5/10

[DarkS33d]

Yeah it is a bland effect, but I would really like to learn new OCG before making more in depth effects. I also believe that I might have pressed Enter a few times by mistake in the card maker, that explaining the small text.

EDIT: Thanks for helping me Renegade. I'll look into adding some kind of extra effect. (I'm trying to keep it along the lines of it "fire breathing".)

[Theoncastillo]

Card is way underpowered.

Wattgiraffe does everything this card does, with no summoning restriction or cost.

[Ren✧]

The new OCG goes like this.

[color=#0000cd][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)]Condition:[/background][/size][/font][/color][color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)] [/background][/size][/font][/color][color=#ff0000][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)]Cost;[/background][/size][/font][/color][color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)] [/background][/size][/font][/color][color=#00ff00][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)]Effect[/background][/size][/font][/color][color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)].[/background][/size][/font][/color]

[color=#0000cd]Once per turn: [/color][color=#ff0000]You can pay 500 Life Points; [/color][color="#00ff00"]discard 1 card in your opponent's hand.[/color]

If there is no condition then that part would be left, same goes for the cost portion. Of course an effect needs to have 1 or the other...or both.

Removed from play has been changed to banish. I believe there is some controversy on what the removed from play zone is now called, I call Banished Zone, but that may not be correct. I know select has been changed to Target, which I find strange, but whatever.