Chaos Elf -

[Neutrality Man]

I got bored today while reading the wikia page on Dark Counterparts. Then I checked the claim that Dark Elf and Mystical Elf look like ME got a tan and new clothes to make DE... it's pretty true, then I did this to fix my boredom. Enjoy it.
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Mystical Elf + Dark Elf
Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can send 1 LIGHT or DARK Monster the Graveyard to activate one of the following effects:
• Increase your Life Points by the DEF of the sent Monster .
• Banish one Monster your opponent controls. If you use this effect, this monster cannot attack your opponent directly this turn.
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[Deustodo]

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Let's see... first of all, very well done. A good card as whole. But let me point out some things that I think will help you improve in your future cards: I believe that "Banish the monster" is not the correct ocg, but it could be replaced for "Remove from play", and I do believe that "one" should have been written as "1', just like you did at the begining of the card's effect.
I think I have spotted some other errors as well, but since I'm not sure about them due to my abstinence on this forum, I will not comment about them.

If I was to give a rate for this card, I would give it an 8/10.

[B3lly N3rd]

i think u missed the "to" in the first line between "monster" and "the" and didnt specify where the monster supposed to be sent from so thats abuseable somewhat
like the pic and ATK could be lower like 1400 or 1600 mabye and idkk if it would be over the top to add a effect where she goes back to def position after attacking
i like it

[Neutrality Man]

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Let's see... first of all, very well done. A good card as whole. But let me point out some things that I think will help you improve in your future cards: I believe that "Banish the monster" is not the correct ocg, but it could be replaced for "Remove from play", and I do believe that "one" should have been written as "1', just like you did at the begining of the card's effect.
I think I have spotted some other errors as well, but since I'm not sure about them due to my abstinence on this forum, I will not comment about them.

If I was to give a rate for this card, I would give it an 8/10.
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I used to say RFP, but then I bought a Dragons Collide Structure Deck and found out that "Banish" is the new term for that mechanic through Eclipse Wyvern. I shall look at similar effects to check on that 1/one thing.

[quote name='B3lly N3rd' timestamp='1345249962' post='6009628']
I think you missed the "to" in the first line between "monster" and "the" and didnt specify where the monster supposed to be sent from so thats abuseable somewhat
like the pic and ATK could be lower like 1400 or 1600 mabye and idk if it would be over the top to add a effect where she goes back to def position after attacking
i like it
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Hmm... I agree to fix my typo, but I'm staying on the ATK/DEF simply because that's th sum stat total of the Fusion Material Monsters. Personally, on top of both being a Banisher and increasing the user's LP depending on their choice of effect... a "switch to DEF" effect would push her outside my comfort zone for Level 8.

[img]http://i.imgur.com/buCoR.png[/img]
Mystical Elf + Dark Elf
Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can send 1 LIGHT or DARK Monster to the Graveyard to activate 1 of the following effects:
• Increase your Life Points by the DEF of the sent Monster .
• Banish one Monster your opponent controls. If you use this effect, this monster cannot attack your opponent directly this turn.