NPNJoe Posted August 25, 2012 Report Share Posted August 25, 2012 This is my first card in about 3/4 years LOL, sorry for any mistakes, I haven't played YGO in ages any feedback appreciated [img]http://i.imgur.com/rpdfp.jpg[/img] Effect: When this card is Summoned, Special Summoned or flipped Face-Up, Special Summon up to 3 Succubi from your Graveyard Face-Up on your opponent's side of the Field. At the end of your opponent's turn, your opponent loses 500 HP for each Face-Up Succubi on their side of the Field. The owner of this card gains the same amount of HP. When this card is sent to the Graveyard, destroy all Face-Up Succubi on the Field. [img]http://i.imgur.com/l7TjG.jpg[/img] Effect: Decrease the ATK and DEF of all Face-Up DARK monsters on your opponent's side of the Field by 400 for each Face-Up Succubi on your side of the Field. My reasoning behind these cards: This set up is really quite balanced in my opinion, as, for the ideal set up, you will need 3 succubi already in your graveyard. Succubus Queen is also a level 5 monster, so it is a little harder to summon. The effect of succubus queen states that "At the end of your opponent's turn", so that gives the opponent plenty of time to destroy Succubus Queen, which has a low ATK/DEF, which is further nerfed by Succubi's effect. In the circumstance that the opponent does not destroy Succubus Queen, the opponent loses a considerable amount of HP. However, the owner of the cards cannot hit the opponent directly during their turn, so it is not over powered. Also, if there are 3 Succubi on the opponent's side of the field, Succubus Queen cannot destroy Succubi, which the opponent can use to his/her advantage. Finally, if Succubus Queen is destroyed, so are the Succubi, which makes it easier to restart the process if Succubus Queen is special summoned. That's about it xD If you think it's unbalanced or have any OCG amendments you would like to point out, feel free Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
宇佐見 蓮子@C94 Posted August 25, 2012 Report Share Posted August 25, 2012 It's... Weak. Well, with 3 Succubi on the opponent's field, it's ATK is 300. Plus, a 1500 burn and 1500 heal isn't too great, considering your opponent can use the Succubi to Synchro, Tribute or Xyz Summon something. Ojama Trio is a better version for this, IMO. Succubus Queen needs at least 2400 ATK to be worth using and the Succubi need an effect that would prevent them from being used to your disadvantage. But yeah, pretty neat idea and it shows just how old your card is. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NPNJoe Posted August 25, 2012 Author Report Share Posted August 25, 2012 yeah, I kinda overdid it trying to make it a bit weak xD and the fact that it could be used to my disadvantage was one of the key points lol xD never mind then also, yeah, I haven't played yugioh is AGES, I just had the random urge to make one today I'll work on fixing it and thanks for the feed back Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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