Buffer Posted March 7, 2008 Report Share Posted March 7, 2008 I added two versions which you like better?Here it is the sorta finished workplz rate tell me how it can be improved Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted March 7, 2008 Report Share Posted March 7, 2008 ask a mod to move this to Written Cards... then ill help you.... ill help you make an effect that would baffle the pros lol... just please move it so i can... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
timtheking Posted March 7, 2008 Report Share Posted March 7, 2008 When flipped on your third turn during the standby phase of your own, you may remove this card from play and summons a card of your choice from your hand or deck besides a fusion card.This card can not be destroyed by any monsters during your battle phase. Just a bit of editing and stuff, much like yours..but with some good spelling.And stuff.:| And yes, this needs to be moved. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Buffer Posted March 7, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 7, 2008 But it's not a written card I just need help with the discreption Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Buffer Posted March 7, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 7, 2008 When flipped on your third turn during the standby phase of your own' date=' you may remove this card from play and summons card of your choice from your hand or deck besides a fusion card.This card can not be destroyed by any monsters during your battle phase. Just a bit of editing and stuff, much like yours..but with some good spelling.And stuff.:| And yes, this needs to be moved.[/quote'] i don't think that good do you have a card your basing effect on Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
timtheking Posted March 7, 2008 Report Share Posted March 7, 2008 Actually, he's right.This DOES belong in the written cards because of the fact your working on the card.You need help with it to create it..so basically..It's supposed to be in Written Cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SephirothKirby Posted March 7, 2008 Report Share Posted March 7, 2008 You can flip summon this monster after three turns have passed since you played it. It is removed from play, and you may special summon one "X" card from your hand or deck. This monster may not be destroyed during the Battle Phase. (I'm not entirely sure, I just think so. Get someone else to confirm =\) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
timtheking Posted March 7, 2008 Report Share Posted March 7, 2008 Actually, I was just helping you with your spelling so people could understand you a bit better.I wasn't trying to be rude or anything.:| Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hotfoilcard Posted March 7, 2008 Report Share Posted March 7, 2008 first of all how is a monster gonna survive three standby phases? lets all take a deep breath how is a face up spell gonna do it? solution=make it a normal spell like gold sarcophagus if u want it to activate that deep into the game...or a monster than cannot be destoyed by say BATTLE for the first three turns after its set...IROU much? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted March 7, 2008 Report Share Posted March 7, 2008 i pmed you the correct ocg etc... and again, next time use Written Cards.... regardless of whether or not this card has an image, written cards is used to discuss ideas... not just the actual card.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SephirothKirby Posted March 7, 2008 Report Share Posted March 7, 2008 [EDIT: Nevermind, I thought he just wanted OCG help.] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Buffer Posted March 7, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 7, 2008 Actually' date=' he's right.This DOES belong in the written cards because of the fact your working on the card.You need help with it to create it..so basically..It's supposed to be in Written Cards.[/quote'] But its not just written cuz I've been to that section and the card I have is not just words Its got a pic and everything is done just the discription needs work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hotfoilcard Posted March 7, 2008 Report Share Posted March 7, 2008 wherever it belongs this card is not working as is Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Buffer Posted March 7, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 7, 2008 wait til its finished you will see Its very good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Buffer Posted March 7, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 7, 2008 Tis finished what do you think Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Buffer Posted March 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 8, 2008 *BUMP* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Buffer Posted March 10, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 10, 2008 *Bump* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eliwan Posted March 12, 2008 Report Share Posted March 12, 2008 DO. NOT. EVER. EVER. EVER. DO. A. QUADUPLE. POST. PLEASE. ok.. WHY do people say: '*bump*? ALso, Written cards is for UNFINISHED cards. these cards are UNFINISHED. Please move. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
overheat Posted March 12, 2008 Report Share Posted March 12, 2008 i thing the normal one is better (not by effect ) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Buffer Posted March 12, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 12, 2008 *BUMP* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Faded Posted March 12, 2008 Report Share Posted March 12, 2008 1st cards better- dont have to say "in addition to its normal type" just say its also treated as a spellcaster- cannot be destroyed by battle should be mentioned first, without the in addition part at the beginning- would say "you can" instead of "you may" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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