R3mixKillah Posted September 9, 2012 Report Share Posted September 9, 2012 Havent posted here in a while, and i thought i should get back to the card making business. This is a mini-archetype i came up with after scrolling through jazinkay's pics not much. Needless to say they are somewhat like constellars and Hieratics combined. but...yeah. also forgive and correct my poor OCG please? havent made a card in a long time yah know. [url="http://yugico.com/user/21359-R3mixKillah/card/28317-Angelic_Warriors/109399-Zethylon__Divine_Angelic_Warrior"][img]http://yugico.com/customcard/109399.jpg[/img][/url] [color=#000000][font=Verdana, Geneva, sans-serif][size=3]3 level 5 LIGHT monsters[/size][/font][/color] [color=#000000][font=Verdana, Geneva, sans-serif][size=3]You can also Xyz summon this card by using 1 Rank 5 LIGHT Xyz monster you control as the Xyz material (Xyz materials attached to that monster also becomes Xyz materials of this card). [b]Once per turn[/b], when a LIGHT monster you control leaves the field you can detach 1 Xyz material from this card: Special Summon 1 LIGHT monster from your deck with the same level.[/size][/font][/color] [url="http://yugico.com/user/21359-R3mixKillah/card/28317-Angelic_Warriors/109401-Seraphim__Holy_Angelic_Warrior"][img]http://yugico.com/customcard/109401.jpg[/img][/url] [color=#000000][font=Verdana, Geneva, sans-serif][size=3]If you control a face-up level 5 LIGHT monster, you can Special Summon this card from your hand. This card cannot attack during the turn its Special Summoned by this effect. When a LIGHT monster you control leaves the field you can tribute this card; Return that monster to your hand instead.[/size][/font][/color] [url="http://yugico.com/user/21359-R3mixKillah/card/28317-Angelic_Warriors/109404-Cherubim__Perfect_Angelic_Warrior"][img]http://yugico.com/customcard/109404.jpg[/img][/url] [color=#000000][font=Verdana, Geneva, sans-serif][size=3]If your opponent controls a monster, while you control no cards, you can Special Summon this card from your hand in face-up defense position. You must have atleast 2 LIGHT monsters in your graveyard to [url="http://yugico.com/user/21359-R3mixKillah/card/28317-Angelic_Warriors/109404-Cherubim__Perfect_Angelic_Warrior#"]activate[/url]and to resolve this effect. Once per turn, You can tribute 1 level 5 LIGHT monster to target 1 card on your opponents side of the field or on your opponents hand: banish that target.[/size][/font][/color] [url="http://yugico.com/user/21359-R3mixKillah/card/28317-Angelic_Warriors/109408-Polaris__Eclipse_Angelic_Warrior"][img]http://yugico.com/customcard/109408.jpg[/img][/url] [color=#000000][font=Verdana, Geneva, sans-serif][size=3]You can Special Summon this card (from your hand) by sending 1 level 5 or higher LIGHT monster from your hand to the graveyard. If this card on the field is destroyed and sent to the graveyard, target 1 "Angelic Warrior" in your graveyard; Special Summon that target.[/size][/font][/color] [url="http://yugico.com/user/21359-R3mixKillah/card/28317-Angelic_Warriors/109410-Solaris__Bright_Angelic_Warrior"][img]http://yugico.com/customcard/109410.jpg[/img][/url] [color=#000000][font=Verdana, Geneva, sans-serif][size=3]If this card was sent to the graveyard for the Special Summon of a LIGHT monster, you can add 1 "Angelic Warrior" monster from your deck to your hand. This card cannot be Special Summoned, except from the graveyard.[/size][/font][/color] [url="http://yugico.com/user/21359-R3mixKillah/card/28317-Angelic_Warriors/109413-Triumphim__Immortal_Angelic_Warrior"][img]http://yugico.com/customcard/109413.jpg[/img][/url] [color=#000000][font=Verdana, Geneva, sans-serif][size=3]When a LIGHT monster is Special Summoned from the graveyard; you can Special Summon this card from your hand. You can only active this effect of "Triumphim, Immortal Angelic Warrior" once per turn. Once per turn, when a LIGHT monster is sent from the field to the graveyard, you can target 1 card your opponent controls; destroy that target.[/size][/font][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlueEyes White Dragon Posted September 9, 2012 Report Share Posted September 9, 2012 .....overpowered xyz. not much to say. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
R3mixKillah Posted September 9, 2012 Author Report Share Posted September 9, 2012 [quote name='BlueEyes White Dragon' timestamp='1347169405' post='6021988'] .....overpowered xyz. not much to say. [/quote] maybe you should start by saying "why" the Xyz is overpowered, or comment on my other cards. It's called "Constructive Criticism". Hope you learn it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
R3mixKillah Posted September 10, 2012 Author Report Share Posted September 10, 2012 bump. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
R3mixKillah Posted September 29, 2012 Author Report Share Posted September 29, 2012 i guess i can put another bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sora1499 Posted September 29, 2012 Report Share Posted September 29, 2012 I think that what oh so eloquent blue-eyes here is trying to say is that the XYZ just swaps out your monsters: it rewards you for sending them to the graveyard, then summons another one so you can activate the effect AGAIN.So, basically, the XYZ is a summon factory that also supplied you with effects. And, that other card allows you to destroy cards whenever a card is sent to the graveyard. But all you need to do to balance this effect is add "Once per turn".Edit: Triphium's effect only activates once per turn, my mistake. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
R3mixKillah Posted September 29, 2012 Author Report Share Posted September 29, 2012 I see what you're trying to say. I honestly didnt think of it until now. The part in bolded is the new added effect, which is the once per turn clause. Any other suggestions about the Xyz? or the other monsters at this point? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sora1499 Posted September 30, 2012 Report Share Posted September 30, 2012 Hmm... They look more life Fairies than Spellcasters to me, but that's just me being pedantic. Triphium could potentially be abused if a LIGHT monster is used, for example, as synchro material. At that point, this is a free summon. Other than that, it looks fine to me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aix Posted September 30, 2012 Report Share Posted September 30, 2012 the other overpowered thing about it is that you can overlay over a rank 4 and instantly gives you a 2700 atk beatstick with an effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sora1499 Posted September 30, 2012 Report Share Posted September 30, 2012 Oh yeah, you could just burn out Utopia's effect and then bring this out. In that case, restricting it to rank 5 XYZ should balance it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
R3mixKillah Posted September 30, 2012 Author Report Share Posted September 30, 2012 Seems reasonable so i toke out the Rank 4 part of the effect. i just dont feel comfortable with it only being rank 5 since Tiras is the only LIGHT rank 5 monster i know off atm. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sora1499 Posted September 30, 2012 Report Share Posted September 30, 2012 Then this deck would probably run Tiras. I think it's fine Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
R3mixKillah Posted October 1, 2012 Author Report Share Posted October 1, 2012 1 last bump for this post. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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