Galaxy Star Call Set (MSE)

[a2707]

This is a Set I'm making using Magic Set Editor, I hope you enjoy the Galaxy monsters (If u find any errors in OCG, warn me about then, but dont forget to say anything else too or u take a warning ._.)

[spoiler='GASC-EN001'][img]http://imageshack.us/a/img692/4094/galaxyconstellation.png[/img]
Lore: [i]These constellations are found everywhere in the Universe. It is said that they contain multiple Galaxies inside them.[/i][/spoiler]
[spoiler='GASC-EN002'][img]http://imageshack.us/a/img843/5376/galaxystarseeder.png[/img]
Lore: When this card is Normal Summoned, place 1 Galaxy Counter on 1 face-up monster you control. (Each Galaxy counter increases a monster's ATK by 200)[/spoiler]
[spoiler='GASC-EN003'][img]http://imageshack.us/a/img94/6262/galaxycomet.png[/img]
Lore: This card gains the following effects based on the number of Galaxy Counters on this card:
*1+: This card gains 400 ATK.
*3+: This card can attack twice during each Battle Phase.
*5+: This card cannot be destroyed by battle or be banished.[/spoiler]
[spoiler='GASC-EN004'][img]http://imageshack.us/a/img821/9392/galaxydrones.png[/img]
Lore: Once per turn: You can target 1 face-up "Galaxy" monster you control; Place 1 Galaxy Counter on it. This card cannot attack during the turn you activated this effect. During the End Phase, if this card is banished; Special Summon it in face-up Attack Position.[/spoiler]
[spoiler='GASC-EN005'][img]http://imageshack.us/a/img18/8669/galaxystardoublesun.png[/img]
Lore: If you Tribute Summon this card by tributing 1 "Galaxy" monster: You can Special Summon 1 "Galaxy Star Double Sun" from your Deck. If this card is Special Summoned, except by the effect of another "Galaxy Star Double Sun: You can target 1 face-up monster you control: It becomes level 6. This card cannot be used for a XYZ Summon, except for a "Galaxy" XYZ monster.[/spoiler]
[spoiler='GASC-EN006'][img]http://imageshack.us/a/img253/1431/galaxystarlings.png[/img]
Lore: FLIP: Special Summon up to 2 "Galaxy Starlings" from your Deck. Once per turn, this card cannot be destroyed by battle. This card cannot be used as an Synchro Material. If this card is used as an XYZ material, that XYZ monster gains 300 ATK.[/spoiler]
[spoiler='GASC-EN007'][img]http://imageshack.us/a/img19/2321/galaxythunderball.png[/img]
Lore: Once per turn, this card cannot be destroyed by battle. If this face-up card is banished: Target 1 face-up card on the field; Place 1 Galaxy Counter on it. During the End Phase; Special Summon this banished card.[/spoiler]
[spoiler='GASC-EN008'][img]http://imageshack.us/a/img69/8717/galaxyringaurora.png[/img]
Lore: Once per turn, you can either: Target 1 face-up "Galaxy" monster you control; equip this card to that target, OR: Unequip this card and Special Summon it in face-up Attack Position. While equipped by this effect, the equipped monster gains 300 ATK and 600 DEF.(A monster can only be equipped with 1 Union Monster at a time. If the equipped monster would be destroyed, destroy this card instead.)[/spoiler]
[spoiler='GASC-EN009'][img]http://imageshack.us/a/img337/6476/galaxynebula697.png[/img]
Lore: 2 level 4 "Galaxy" monsters
Once per turn, you can detatch 1 XYZ Material from this card: Target 1 face-up monster; Place 1 Galaxy Counter on it (Each Galaxy counter increases a monster's ATK by 200). You can detatch 1 XYZ Material from this card and remove 3 Galaxy Counters from anywhere on the field; Target 1 card on the field; Destroy it.[/spoiler]
[spoiler='GASC-EN010'][img]http://imageshack.us/a/img267/7039/galaxystarjudmentomega.png[/img]
Lore: 2 level 6 "Galaxy" monsters
You can also Xyz Summon this card by using a Rank 3 or 4 "Galaxy" Xyz Monster you control as the Xyz Material. (Xyz Materials attached to that monster also become Xyz Materials on this card.) Once per turn, you can target 1 monster on the field with a Galaxy Counter(s): It loses 600 ATK for each Galaxy Counter on it. If the target's ATK reaches 0 by this effect: Destroy it. You can detatch 1 XYZ Material from this card: Target 1 face-up monster on the field; Place 2 Galaxy Counters on it.[/spoiler]
[spoiler='GASC-EN011'][img]http://imageshack.us/a/img690/6554/galaxyspacestargenerato.png[/img]
Lore: There can only be 1 face-up "Galaxy Space" card on the field. You can send 1 face-up "Galaxy Space" card you control to the Graveyard to activate this card. Each time a "Galaxy" monster(s) is Normal or Special Summoned, place 1 Galaxy Counter on this card. You can remove any number of Galaxy Counters from this card; Special Summon 1 "Galaxy" monster from your hand which level is equal to the number of removed Galaxy Counters.[/spoiler]
[spoiler='GASC-EN012'][img]http://imageshack.us/a/img209/3121/galaxystarcall.png[/img]
Lore: Add 1 "Galaxy" or "Star" monster from your Deck to your hand.[/spoiler]
[spoiler='GASC-EN013'][img]http://imageshack.us/a/img3/6637/galaxyworld.png[/img]
Lore: Face-up "Galaxy" monsters gain 400 ATK and DEF. Once per turn: You can target 1 card you control; Banish it until the End Phase and place 1 Galaxy Counter on this card. When this card is destroyed, place the Galaxy Counters that were on this card on 1 face-up monster you control.[/spoiler]
[spoiler='GASC-EN014'][img]http://imageshack.us/a/img513/7239/starbreaker.png[/img]
Lore: During the Battle Phase: Tribute 1 face-up "Galaxy" monster you control; Select and activate 1 of these effects.
*Target 1 face-up "Galaxy" monster you control; It can attack twice during each Battle Phase this turn.
*Target 1 Spell/Trap card on the field; Destroy that target.[/spoiler]
[spoiler='GASC-EN015'][img]http://imageshack.us/a/img145/6799/starstorm.png[/img]
Lore: Target 1 face-up "Galaxy" monster you control; It cannot be destroyed by battle or by card effects this turn. After this card effect resolves, place 1 Galaxy Counter on each face-up monster you control.[/spoiler]
[spoiler='GASC-EN016'][img]http://imageshack.us/a/img189/893/galaxytrapzone.png[/img]
Lore: Once per turn, while you control a face-up "Galaxy" monster: You can target 1 face-up monster on the field; That target cannot attack while this card is face-up on the field. During each of your Standby Phases, place 1 Galaxy Counter on each monster affected by this card effect (Opponent monsters with Galaxy Counter lose 200 ATK for each Galaxy Counter). When this card is destroyed, destroy all monsters affected by this card effect with 3 or more Galaxy Counters.[/spoiler]
[spoiler='GASC-EN017'][img]http://imageshack.us/a/img812/9642/planetshininghope.png[/img]
Lore: When a opponent monster declares an attack against 1 face-up "Galaxy" monster you control; Special Summon 1 level 4 or lower "Galaxy" monster from your Deck, then switch the attack target to the that monster.[/spoiler]
[spoiler='GASC-EN018'][img]http://imageshack.us/a/img801/8230/wormhole.png[/img]
Lore: When a "Galaxy" monster you control is destroyed by an opponent's card (either by battle or by card effects) and sent to the Graveyard: Pay 1000 life points; Banish the card that destroyed the "Galaxy" monster and 1 face-up monster your opponent controls.[/spoiler]

Any tips about how to improve my cards and about OCG are welcome.

UPDATED 20-09-2012 21:48

[a2707]

Bump! Please comment something, it would be really appreciated.

[PrimeAceJohn]

Wow. Honest to say, this set fascinated me a lot. Everything is great. I usually write a lot of criticism but everything seems almost perfect...

The cards, OCG, and pics are just great.

Though, (This is a very, VERY minor thing and is REALLY stupid), I would kinda imagine the Xyz more ass spell cards. But I like em as xyz's too.

Great and fantastic set: 10/10

[a2707]

Thanks for the reply! I'll be making more Galaxies and I'll upload them there soon.

[a2707]

BUMP

[richie123]

Very nice! I like the cards, although some seem a bit OP'd, especially Dark Dimension, since there's no cost to banishing a monster on the field. I would add a cost, such as tributing one monster on your side of the field, or discarding a card from your hand. I don't think a LP cost would work; IMO it'd still be OP'd.
Just my 2 cents. But overall, great, interesting and most importantly PLAYABLE set. 8.5/10, great job!

P.S. My favorite is Galaxy Star Double Sun. The possibilities are endless with that guy.

EDIT: OCG.

[a2707]

Thanks for the feedback, richie123! Dark Dimension's drawback is that the removal lasts only until the End Phase, Junk Archer and Wattphesant do the same thing... however this banishes any card and is easier to come in play/use the effect. So I will rework it to have a different effect more Theme-fitting.

[yannic0070]

Hmm... Well to be honest I expected something different when I read Galaxy star... But anyways, great set. I think I read no OCG mistakes, though I'm dyslectic so I wouldn't know. For my criticism... Hard to think of something, may I ask what Nebula 697 means? Also, if you plan to continue this set, you might try to specify your cards. I mean selecting galaxy entities that people "know" because right know, you need some astrological skill to understand them all.

[a2707]

[b]Status Update [/b][b]20-09-12[/b]

*Updated card errata;
*Changed card name, art and effect (Dark Dimension -> Galaxy World);
*Added Galaxy Thunderball, Galaxy Drones, Galaxy Starlings, Galaxy Starcall, Star Breaker and Worm Hole.

So mainly I changed their field which now banishes your own monsters just to get counters... which can also be used to protect them from Mirror Forces, as they come back during the End Phase. Even when they dont, I added some new "Galaxies" that get effects when they are banished, and come back during the End Phase. They might be a good adiction to Dimensional Decks. Soon I will create more banish cards for them so Thunderball/Drones' effects can be used to bring them back when they would not.

[quote name='yannic0070' timestamp='1348172152' post='6028831']
Hmm... Well to be honest I expected something different when I read Galaxy star... But anyways, great set. I think I read no OCG mistakes, though I'm dyslectic so I wouldn't know. For my criticism... Hard to think of something, may I ask what Nebula 697 means? Also, if you plan to continue this set, you might try to specify your cards. I mean selecting galaxy entities that people "know" because right know, you need some astrological skill to understand them all.
[/quote]
Thanks for the feedback. You may be right, but the first ones I made were just random picks from the google, the "Animish" ones are from Jazinkay's Album (such as the Galaxy World and the Star Breaker). I wanted more Anime-like instead of those realistic ones, they dont fit Yu-gi-oh style that much. About the Nebula 697, its just a random reference number to identify the Nebula, cientistics often do that I think (the number is invented of course =D). If you look closer, the card number at the bottom left corner ends with 697, just an easter egg.

[a2707]

BUMP

[a2707]

No more comments? Last Try Bump!

[Sora1499]

I'd like to give constructive criticism, but there's really nothing to criticize! Great set. very useful and creative. The only thing that's kinda iffy for me is the artwork. 9/10

[a2707]

Thanks for the info, I agree with the artwork part, it was taken from Google pics, not the best. The new cards got their artwork from Jazinkay Album, which is awesome! I will make future cards with it's artwork.

[Sora1499]

Awesome.

[DrunkenSage69]

I like the archetype overall for what I skimmed. The Magic Set Editor YGO cardmaker isn't as bad as I thought it would be, however (just cause I'm anal about these stupid things) using the card maker here or from Yugico (which is much better, unfortunately for this is a better site) because it makes the card lore and settings more realistic. The pictures on your some of your cards could use some work but that's because it was from Google images. Very few OCG errors but there are still some. I will edit this post later when I am actually awake since it is 3 am here.

[color=#ff0000][size=5][u][i][b]Overall: 7.5/10[/b][/i][/u][/size][/color]

[7swords]

Um galaxy monsters as an archetype already exist. but beside that 9/10 because they need better artwork.

[a2707]

Thanks for the feedback. I personally think the Magic Set Editor makes the most realistic cards of all the 3. About the OCG error, I would be thankful if u point which OCG error I got, once u wake up .

[a2707]

Bump