Garthfunkle Vii Backwards Posted September 11, 2012 Report Share Posted September 11, 2012 [center]a unsual card that allows you to draw cards, that would be great in DRAW ENGINES ! do i need to say more .... ?[/center] [center][IMG]http://i758.photobucket.com/albums/xx221/judedudemud3/Quick-DrawMcLaw-1.jpg[/IMG][/center] [center]When this card is activated, You lose 800 Life Points then Special Summon 1 "Quick-Draw McLaw Warrior" Token (Warrior-Type/EARTH/Level 1/ATK 0/DEF 0) in Defense Position then Special Summon 1 "Quick-Draw McLaw Warrior" Token (Warrior-Type/EARTH/Level 1/ATK 0/DEF 0) in Defense Position for every "Quick-Draw Mclaw" in your Graveyard. When 1 "Quick-Draw McLaw" Token is removed from your side of the Field, Draw 1 card. These Token cannot be Tributed or used for Synchro Material. During the turn this card is activated you can not Summon or Set any monsters except for token monsters. When this card is sent to the Graveyard, send 1 "Quick-Draw McLaw" from your Deck or banish pile to top of your Deck. Once Per Turn during any player's turn while this card is in your Graveyard when you have 3 "Quick-Draw McLaw" in your Graveyard you can return 1 "Quick-Draw McLaw" in your Graveyard to your Deck then shuffle your Deck. During the 4th End Phase after the turn you activated this card, destory this card. If this card is destoryed by your Oponent's card effects destory all face-up Quick-Draw McLaw Warrior" Tokens you control. you can only activate 1 "Quick-Draw McLaw" per turn.[/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Sander Posted September 11, 2012 Report Share Posted September 11, 2012 Oh look, you're reposting the same bad card you have posted numerous times before. Guess what? It's not getting any better. First of all, you would have to have at least 2 in your hand + some way of discarding at least 1 of them so you could at least get off the first effect when you activate it. Oh, and let's get to the token effect, shall we? Or better, let's take this effect for example, [i]"When this card is activated you can not Summon or Set any monsters.". [/i]You should be able to figure out what's the problem here by yourself. tl;dr: Card doesn't serve any purpose other than giving you a big handy cap and possibly 1-2 tokens that will be destroyed at no time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Garthfunkle Vii Backwards Posted September 11, 2012 Author Report Share Posted September 11, 2012 so an error wiith the wording of the effect which was fix i spent weeks trying to make a good draw card that is not broke or can be easily broken [Spoiler=again you are trolling if you do not like my cards just stay of my threads again NO ONE IS FORCING YOU to post on my thread] [/Spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted September 12, 2012 Report Share Posted September 12, 2012 [quote name='Garthfunkle Vii Backwards' timestamp='1347404689' post='6023510'] i spent weeks trying to make a good draw card that is not broke or can be easily broken [/quote] The problem here is that you gave the card a stupid drawback. A drawback like that should at least give you something in return, but slow drawing like this isn't good. Shard of Greed, on the other hand, is decent and not broken as it's balanced. A bit slow, mind you, but not breakable, and if your opponent doesn't MST it, you draw from it, but if they do, you don't really lose any advantage, as they used up one of their MST's. This card, however, fattens your deck if it gets MST'd, Heavy Stormed / etc. which is really, really bad in the case of this card. |: [quote name='Garthfunkle Vii Backwards' timestamp='1347404689' post='6023510'] again you are trolling if you do not like my cards just stay of my threads again NO ONE IS FORCING YOU to post on my thread [/quote] Oh look, you're thinking just because I don't like the card I'm criticizing, I'm automatically trolling. Look, don't post your cards here if all you hope to see is "this crd is so gud, 10/10". You're posting your cards up for review and to receive criticism. Deal with it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Garthfunkle Vii Backwards Posted September 13, 2012 Author Report Share Posted September 13, 2012 [quote name='Zanda Panda' timestamp='1347453132' post='6023791'] Oh look, you're thinking just because I don't like the card I'm criticizing, I'm automatically trolling. Look, don't post your cards here if all you hope to see is "this crd is so gud, 10/10". You're posting your cards up for review and to receive criticism. Deal with it. [/quote] there a way to review and give criticism which is good and there way to review and give criticism which is bad deal with it this card is intented for draw engine decks it is slow for a reason as it helps surport other draw cards and help set up to help draw when and or if your draw speed is slow down activate this then have anthor card to draw some more like trade in cards from above for example if you manage to to remove the face-up quick draw mc law like double cyclone then you are set next turn if you can keep it in your hand Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted September 13, 2012 Report Share Posted September 13, 2012 [quote name='Garthfunkle Vii Backwards' timestamp='1347509720' post='6024346'] there a way to review and give criticism which is good and there way to review and give criticism which is bad deal with it [/quote] Hey, I'm not the one who is calling other people trolls because of criticism. You need to learn that you're posting the card up for review, whether it be the good or bad kind. [quote name='Garthfunkle Vii Backwards' timestamp='1347509720' post='6024346'] this card is intented for draw engine decks it is slow for a reason as it helps surport other draw cards and help set up to help draw when and or if your draw speed is slow down activate this then have anthor card to draw some more like trade in cards from above for example if you manage to to remove the face-up quick draw mc law like double cyclone then you are set next turn if you can keep it in your hand [/quote] Decks that use draw cards as an engine would loathe this card, as it takes up a lot of deck space and an ungodly amount of dedication to remove it from the field yourself. The only decent part of the card is that it can be used in a stall deck if there is deck space available, but usually, there isn't. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Garthfunkle Vii Backwards Posted September 13, 2012 Author Report Share Posted September 13, 2012 [quote name='Zanda Panda' timestamp='1347519232' post='6024434'] Decks that use draw cards as an engine would loathe this card, as it takes up a lot of deck space and an ungodly amount of dedication to remove it from the field yourself. The only decent part of the card is that it can be used in a stall deck if there is deck space available, but usually, there isn't. [/quote] there would be no dedication to remove it just throw it if it gets destory by your opponent oh well i get to draw 1 or more and then can put anthor copy on top of your deck dowm to add a token on the field and a face-up spell card which help draw engines and stall draw engine require def to keep your opponent off of your life points most draw engine do not fill up their spell and trap zone like stall deck make your opponent think twice using mst and hs stall deck well goes with out staying Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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