Sora1499 Posted September 16, 2012 Report Share Posted September 16, 2012 I've been making Xyz on yugico.com, but posting their images here has been kinda iffy. So please let me know if you can actually see this card. If so, then constructive criticism is requested, and I hope you like the card! Edit: I've cut out the secondary effect, so now it should be more balanced. [img]http://i48.tinypic.com/6hj7us.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sora1499 Posted September 17, 2012 Author Report Share Posted September 17, 2012 I HAVE COMMENTED! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AGATHODAIMON BANGTAIL COW Posted September 17, 2012 Report Share Posted September 17, 2012 Yes, I can see your card, and I don't want to anymore. This makes the Evolzar bosses cry about how inferior they are to this card, and that is literally at the opposite end of "a good thing." First, Rank 3s are incredibly easy to make (especially generic ones like this, as you have things like Tour Guide, Marauding Captain, and a whole ton of other stuff), and this already has a very decent ATK score. The Ancient Gear clause is cool, but the second effect, was your mind functional when you made that? You negate a card effect by detaching [b]one[/b] Material, which lets you get basically a double-free-Solemn Judgement/Divine Wrath. Sure, you have the 500 burn for yourself if it has no materials, but that is just a feather trying to counterbalance the weight that is the potential double-free-Solemn/Divine Wrath. The card would be perfectly fine if that effect was disintegrated and never thought up of again. In fact, if you did that, you could also get rid of the 500 burn that you get at the End Phase, though I'm getting the feeling you put that in there for attention. All in all, this boosts any Deck that can get out a Rank 3 out fast to the point of tier -1, leaving the rest in the dust. And even if it helped EVERY Deck, it shouldn't exist for the same reason Pot of Greed should not exist. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sora1499 Posted September 17, 2012 Author Report Share Posted September 17, 2012 Dude, chill out, this is my second Xyz card EVER. I'm bound to make mistakes. I'll cut out the effect that allows you to detach the material to negate the effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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