宇佐見 蓮子@C94 Posted September 23, 2012 Report Share Posted September 23, 2012 [size=4][font=arial, helvetica, sans-serif]"What will USER do?" >REVIEW >CRITIC >ITEM >CARD Okay, I'm terrible at these jokes. Anyway, here's my next Xyz Single. Nothing can go wrong, right? [color=#D3D3D3]Except for every single imaginable thing when it comes to card making, of course.[/color][/font][/size] [url="http://yugico.com/user/29408-Toyo-tan/card/24197-Toyo-tan/114443-Songstress_Magician"][img]http://yugico.com/customcard/114443.jpg[/img][/url] [spoiler=[font="arial, helvetica, sans-serif"]It's Miku, isn't it?[/font]] [color=#000000][font=Verdana, Geneva, sans-serif][size=3]2 Level 4 Spellcaster-type Monsters[/size][/font][/color] [color=#000000][font=Verdana, Geneva, sans-serif][size=3]During either player's turn: You can Detach 1 Xyz Material and remove 2 Spell Counters from this card and Target 1 Monster on the field; The target's effect(s) are Negated. This turn, the Targeted Monster can attack the opponent Directly. When this card is Destroyed by battle: Special Summon 1 Level 4 or Lower Spellcaster-type Monster from your Graveyard. The Special Summoned Monster has it's level reduced to 1 and it's Effect(s) are Negated.[/size][/font][/color][font=arial,helvetica,sans-serif][color=#000000][size=3][/spoiler][/size][/color][/font] [font=arial,helvetica,sans-serif][color=#000000]For me personally, It has 2 main uses. One, to negate a potentially game-winning effect (Like Veiler does) and two, to deal massive damage to the enemy by attacking it's weak point. I may need to add a "The target's ATK is halved" in order to better balance it, but I'm not so sure. Explanation done, critic away, YCM.[/color][/font] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aerion Brightflame Posted September 23, 2012 Report Share Posted September 23, 2012 Shouldn't it say remove two spell counters? Just being picky. Now, lets run through all this. Firstly, its not generic which is good. Or not good but it means its less abusable which is a good thing. I need to ramble less. Its effect seems like an offensive version of Photoknight's. Since it can either lock down opponents monsters at the cost of an attack directly, or it can let you strike directly. And the last effect means that it helps restore card advantage when you lose it. And it has a low attack meaning, that it can't be used as a good beatstick. Although... I'm wondering if the spell counters are really needed... It isn't overpowered. Photoknight can be considered a much better version of this, due to it letting you also cut down what you negate, this is probably a more versatile card to play, but then they are used in mostly different decks. I think the halving attack idea would actually make this overpowered, since you are weakening your opponents offence. It should stop effects, not stop the monsters themselves from doing anything. So yeah, in my view it doesn't need any changes. Side note. How would this stop Vieler? Vieler should never really be on the field for this to target. Or did you mean stop cards as vieler does? Just something I'm wondering. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
宇佐見 蓮子@C94 Posted September 23, 2012 Author Report Share Posted September 23, 2012 It stops effects like Veiler does. Also, I think this is a bit better (albeit less universal) than Photoknight, since it can negate effects during your opponent's turn as well, meaning it can negate Rabbit, Excalibur, Blade Armor Ninja, Stratos, etcetera etcetera. Also, I did a minor wording change. You might want to check that out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sora1499 Posted September 23, 2012 Report Share Posted September 23, 2012 Is that your submission to my contest? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
宇佐見 蓮子@C94 Posted September 23, 2012 Author Report Share Posted September 23, 2012 I guess so, yeah. You can put this in your Xyz Contest. (I'm too lazy to copy paste it there lol) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sora1499 Posted September 24, 2012 Report Share Posted September 24, 2012 Cool Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Love of Ghibli Posted September 24, 2012 Report Share Posted September 24, 2012 I actually like the card it provides decent support for the spell counter archetype and its summoning conditions balance out the fact that it is a floating veiler. I actually like it better than Photoknight because you can easily give it to one of your big beefy spell casters and get cheap hits in. Third it has a detach effect which is good seeing as most of your xyz for some odd reason don't have those. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
宇佐見 蓮子@C94 Posted September 26, 2012 Author Report Share Posted September 26, 2012 Since apparently my newer cards are lower quality than this, I'll just be bumping this one, if you don't mind. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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