Dharc Posted October 15, 2012 Report Share Posted October 15, 2012 [url="http://yugico.com/user/18042-Justified/card/11147-Dark_Eternity/73295-Ruin_Mage_Lucius"][img]http://yugico.com/customcard/73295.jpg[/img][/url] [quote]Once per turn: You can discard 1 card from your hand; return 1 banished LIGHT or DARK monster to your Graveyard.[/quote] [url="http://yugico.com/user/18042-Justified/card/11147-Dark_Eternity/73296-Ruin_Mage_Tenebros"][img]http://yugico.com/customcard/73296.jpg[/img][/url] [quote]Once per turn: You can banish 1 card from your Graveyard; add 1 LIGHT or DARK monster from your Graveyard to your hand.[/quote] [url="http://yugico.com/user/18042-Justified/card/11147-Dark_Eternity/73321-Absolix__Bringer_of_Eternal_Ruin"][img]http://yugico.com/customcard/73321.jpg[/img][/url] [quote]Cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. Must first be Special Summoned (from the hand) by banishing 1 LIGHT and 1 DARK monster you control. Once per turn, during either player's turn: You can banish any amount of cards you control (including at least 1 "Absolix, Bringer of Eternal Ruin"), and select an amount of cards your opponent controls equal to the total amount of banished monsters; banish the selected cards. You can return this banished card to your Graveyard: Special Summon 1 Level 6 or lower LIGHT or DARK monster from your Graveyard, except "Absolix, Bringer of Eternal Ruin".[/quote] So, basically, the first two are meant to help Chaos decks recover cards, and Absolix is meant to be another card in the vein of BLS and CED. I haven't made cards in a while, so I don't know how OP'ed these might be. Please, evaluate my cards, if you don't mind. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aix Posted October 15, 2012 Report Share Posted October 15, 2012 The ruin mages are fine IMO Absolix: i personally think the Special Summon 1 LIGHT and 1 DARK (especially since it has no limits to what it could summon) is OP'ed. Absolix could be banished with stuff like Allure of Darkness and still activate its effect. Absolix could be just sent to the Graveyard and then be repeatedly used for chaos summoning while swarming the field. I would suggest just let it summon 1 Level 4 or lower LIGHT or DARK monster and it can only be used once per turn. My suggested wording: [color=#9BA2A9][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3]Cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. Must first be Special Summoned (from the hand) by banishing 1 LIGHT and 1 DARK monster you control. Once per turn, during either player's turn: You can banish any amount of cards you control and target an amount of cards your opponent controls equal to the total amount of banished monsters; banish the selected cards. Once per turn, you can return this banished card to your Graveyard; Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower LIGHT or DARK monster from your Graveyard, except "Absolix, Bringer of Eternal Ruin".[/size][/font][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dharc Posted October 16, 2012 Author Report Share Posted October 16, 2012 I edited Absolix's effect, so he now summons a Level 6 or lower Light or Dark. I actually didn't realize that his effect still read "1 LIGHT and 1 DARK," I had thought that I had edited that before. Thanks for pointing that out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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