gimmepie Posted October 21, 2012 Report Share Posted October 21, 2012 It has been a [b]LONG[/b] time since I have been here but I'm back with a new archetype. This is my first Banishment themed archetype and I hope they are different from others. Rating and con/crit is welcomed. [img]http://i.imgur.com/5Ixlc.jpg[/img] Effect: When this card is normal summoned you can banish one card in your graveyard; Special summon one banished level four or lower "Monic" monster from your graveyard other than a monster banished by this cards effect this turn. [img]http://i.imgur.com/n6MwY.jpg[/img] Effect: When a banished "Monic" monster is special summoned you can special summon this card from your hand. [img]http://i.imgur.com/o8sC3.jpg[/img] Effect: When this card is normal summoned you can special summon one "Monic" monstr with 1500 or less ATK from your hand. When this card is destroyed by your opponents card (by battle or card effect); remove it from play and add one "Monic" card from your deck to your hand. [img]http://i.imgur.com/0afoD.jpg[/img] Effect: Once per turn you can discard one card from your hand; this card can attack your opponent directly. When this card inflicts damage on your opponent you can special summon one banished "Monic" monster with four or less stars. [img]http://i.imgur.com/fXDcp.jpg[/img] Effect: When this card is sent to the graveyard you can banish it. When this card is banished from the graveyard you can activate one effect: * You gain 1000 life points. *Add one "Monic" card from your deck to your hand. [img]http://i.imgur.com/SmhPg.jpg[/img] Effect: When this card is normal summoned you can banish one monster from your graveyard: Destroy one face-up monster your opponent controls. When this card leaves the field: Special summon a monster banished by this cards effect in face-up defence position. [img]http://i.imgur.com/KPGam.jpg[/img] Effect: When a banished "Monic" monster is special summoned you can special summon this card from your hand, if you activate this effect, when this card is sent from the field to the graveyard: Banish it. [img]http://i.imgur.com/byAvx.jpg[/img] Effect: When this card is normal summoned you can add one banished "Monic" card to the top of your deck and shuffle your deck and draw one card. If you activate this effect banish one card from your graveyard. [img]http://i.imgur.com/f68sZ.jpg[/img] Effect: Once per turn, if this card is banished, you can banish one monster in your graveyard: Special summon this card. [img]http://i.imgur.com/rL2Z7.jpg[/img] Effect: This card cannot be normal summoned or set. This card can only be special summoned my sending the top three cards of your deck to the graveyard. You can tribute this card to special summon as many Banished level four or below "Monic" monsters as possible. These monsters cannot have their effects negated, cannot be tributed and are destroyed in your end phase. In your end phase you take 300 points of damage for each monster summoned by this effect that is used as synchro material. [img]http://i.imgur.com/GApFb.jpg[/img] Effect: Return three banished "Monic" monsters to your deck, then draw two cards. During your opponents main phase you can banish this card from your graveyard; both players draw one card. [img]http://i.imgur.com/Nj1QL.jpg[/img] Effect: Both players banish one card from their deck, shuffle their decks and draw one card. [img]http://i.imgur.com/qZ8wI.jpg[/img] Effect: Return one banished "Monic" monster to your deck. Your opponent cannot activate trap cards until the end-phase of the turn this card was activated. [img]http://i.imgur.com/u5plY.jpg[/img] Effect: Banish one card in your graveyard: Target one monster your opponent controls and take control of it until the end-phase. The targeted monster cannot attack. [img]http://i.imgur.com/wb1Ot.jpg[/img] Effect: Your opponent draws one card. Special summon one level five or lower "Monic" monster from your graveyard. [img]http://i.imgur.com/nYIZj.jpg[/img] Effect: Shuffle two spell cards from your graveyard into your deck and draw two cards. If one is a monster: Banish it. [img]http://i.imgur.com/eWJjS.jpg[/img] Effect: Activate this card when a "Monic" monster is sent from the field to the graveyard: Both players banish one monster from their graveyard. [img]http://i.imgur.com/ggY2v.jpg[/img] Effect: This card can only be activated on your opponents turn. All face-up "Monic" monsters gain 200 ATK for each banished "Monic" monster until the end-phase of the turn this card is activated. [img]http://i.imgur.com/j25qj.jpg[/img] Effect: 1 Monic Tuner + 1 or more non-tuner monsters When this card is synchro summoned; gain 300 life points for each of your banished monsters. When this card is sent from the field to the graveyard special summon one banished "Monic" monster with 2000 ATK or less. [img]http://i.imgur.com/Yt00W.jpg[/img] Effect: 1 "Monic" Tuner + 1 "Monic" non-tuner monster Once per turn you can banish one "Monic" monster from your deck. For each banished "Monic" monster this card gains 200 ATK. If this card is targeted by an opponents spell or trap card you can send this card to the extra deck and add one banished "Monic" monster to your hand. [img]http://i.imgur.com/JqvMx.jpg[/img] Effect: 1 "Monic" tuner + 1 or more non-tuner monsters When this card is synchro summoned you can special summon one level three or lower "Monic" monster from your hand. When a monster special summoned by this effect is sent from the field to the graveyard it is banished instead. [img]http://i.imgur.com/Ogfpj.jpg[/img] Effect: 1 "Monic" tuner + 1 or more non-tuner monsters When this card is synchro summoned banish one "Monic" monster from your hand or deck. When this card leaves the field special summon that card in face-up defence position. [img]http://i.imgur.com/V5Mlv.jpg[/img] Effect: 2 "Monic" synchro tuner monster + 1 or more "Monic" non-tuner monsters When this card is synchro summoned shuffle all banished cards back into your deck: for each "Monic" monster returned to your deck this way you can destroy one card on the field. This card cannot attack directly on the turn it is summoned. When an opponents card effect targets this card you can banish one card on your side of the field to negate it. [img]http://i.imgur.com/tEa9y.jpg[/img] Effect: 2 Level 3 "Monic" Monsters Once per turn you can detach one Xyz material from this card; Banish one card from your graveyard and special summon one "Monic" monster from your deck. [img]http://i.imgur.com/DQwTu.jpg[/img] Effect: 2 Level 3 "Monic" monsters Once per turn you can detach two Xyz materials from this card: Special summon up to two banished level three or lower "Monic" monsters. Monsters summoned by this effect cannot be used as synchro material and your opponent draws one card for each monster summoned by this card's effect. Template from Zextra Hopefully more on the way. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gimmepie Posted October 22, 2012 Author Report Share Posted October 22, 2012 Bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gimmepie Posted October 23, 2012 Author Report Share Posted October 23, 2012 bump....again o.O Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aix Posted October 23, 2012 Report Share Posted October 23, 2012 Its a nice low-level swarming archetype, besides maybe needing more support, like having a beatstick or card remover, there is no big problem with the current cards (in my opinion). Though Monic Serple maybe should have like "decrease this card's attack by 500 until the End Phase" when it attacks directly; and it's supposed to be "Level 4 or lower monster" not "monster with 4 or less stars". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gimmepie Posted October 23, 2012 Author Report Share Posted October 23, 2012 The archetype isn't done yet don't worry about that. I'll probably fix the OCG later also. Edit: Frostle, Foongle, Niddle, Chirple, Wyvle, Worm Hole, Monic Thunder, Muskerlin, Mowlin and Tri-Monic Draklin added. More still to come. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gimmepie Posted October 24, 2012 Author Report Share Posted October 24, 2012 Bump Soul Jewels, Monic Healing, Jewel Shuffle and Valkylin added. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackRose0202 Posted October 24, 2012 Report Share Posted October 24, 2012 [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)]Valkylin has a little OP problem, not only can it Special Summon 2 level 3 or lower monsters once but it can do it for as many as it has XYZ material. The drawing is a good addition to balance the card out but the fact that in 2 turns you can summon up to 3 Exceed monsters. Tri-Monic is also OP since it gives you a free 3700 hit to your opponents Life Points, not including any other monsters you control. Try adding "You cannot conduct your Battle Phase the turn this card is Summoned." [/background][/size][/font][/color][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)][font="tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif"][color="#5a5a5a"][size=3]Muskerlin is also OP because the turn its Summoned you can Synchro once again to a Level 8 aka Stardust, ect..... Gryphlin is OP because you get a quick Exceed to a Level 4 or 5 if you make new cards in your Deck. Shuffle is OP because it gives 2 cards, to balance it out you should make it only be able to draw 1. Healing is OP because all your opponent gets is 1 card and it's a Quick Play. It's kinda like "Premature Burial" on steroids. "Wyvle" is so OP because you get up to 3 easy Exceed cards. Frostles effect is kinda OP for a Level 4 monster, either change it or make it a lvl 5 with higher ATK. Serple needs to be change in either ATK or get rid of the attack directly part cause for that effect 1500 ATK is a bit much. Frawgle is OP unless you change Special Summon to the hand instead of Deck. Birlde is OP because it gives you a free Synchro for lvl 5 to 8 the same turn its Summoned. Thats all i got for you and why does it feel like these are Pokemon names lol.[/size][/color][/font][/background] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gimmepie Posted October 25, 2012 Author Report Share Posted October 25, 2012 I get where you're coming from on most of those, but several of the ones you said are OP for giving an easy summon really aren't that different from the synchro abilities of Dragunity monsters. The whole point of the archetype is to spam low level monsters for quick Xyz and synchro summons in a different way to other archetypes. I'll get onto fixing the majority of these up soon however because I do agree with you for a lot of them. Note: Wyvle's effect was intended to be similar to Super-Ancient Deepsea King Coelacanth. I'm inerested in any suggestions you have to keep it to true to this without mirroring it. Edit: Many changes made. I'm not going to be changing Muskerlin, Frostle or Shuffle since at this point I feel they are perfectly reasonable. Birdle was OPed but not for the reason you have said, that's been fixed. I am yet to change Wyvle because I am having trouble creating an alternative yet similar effect. All other changes have been made. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gimmepie Posted October 29, 2012 Author Report Share Posted October 29, 2012 Still no love for Monics people? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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raaabr Posted November 2, 2012 Report Share Posted November 2, 2012 An interesting idea. I guess this forgoes the general "Banish monsters until you can summon golden Homunculus or one of the Helios monsters" in favor of "Spam multiple tiny monsters"? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gimmepie Posted November 2, 2012 Author Report Share Posted November 2, 2012 That is pretty much it, far faster than Psychics that work in a similar way though. I'm concerned with trying to make Wyvle playable/balanced mostly I think everything else is fairly well balanced all though I'm open to opinions. As a side note: Welcome back XD I haven't seen you for a long time. You should probably read up on the advance clause too, or you'll get in trouble with the mods. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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