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Chale, chale, I'll do it. Geez...

Well, despite the OCG fail, this card seems to be a good shot.

Small fixes:

Problem Solving Card Text states "selected as an attack target" should be "targeted for an attack". Also, conditions must be before the effect and denoted with colon (":") and monsters "in your side of the field", by PSCT, are now monsters "you control"

The first part of the second sentence is in wrong order, the "but" is not OCG at all, and the last part of the sentence had been also replaced in OCG. Also, ATK and DEF must be all in caps and, when you state a type of monster, you must declare it "[Type]-type".

Lemme fix it for you:


[quote]
[b]Hatsune Miku[/b]
LIGHT/Lv. 9
[Spellcaster/Effect]
[i]While you control other monsters: this card cannot be targeted for an attack. This card gains 500 ATK and DEF for every Spellcaster-type monster you control and other Spellcaster-type monsters lose ATK and DEF by the same amount.[/i]
ATK/1500 DEF/1700
[/quote]

There, that's the best I can do.

About the other card, I think it's a good shot.

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