Blackhawk101391 Posted October 27, 2012 Report Share Posted October 27, 2012 All criticisms and/or reviews are welcomed. This set is FAR from finished and hopefully, soon, I will ahve quite a collection of DBZ themed cards in this thread. [spoiler='Goku']Goku [img]http://i.imgur.com/NpPAt.jpg[/img] If a monster on your side of the field would be destroyed (except this monster) you can tribute this monster and special summon 1 "Super Saiyan Goku" from your hand or deck. [img]http://i.imgur.com/VQaHY.jpg[/img] If this card is special summoned from your hand by the effect of "Goku" target 1 card on your opponents side of the field and destroy it. If this card was special summoned from your deck by the effect of "Goku" it gains 500 attack until the end of this turn. [img]http://i.imgur.com/1MaGv.jpg[/img] This card can be special summoned from the hand, during either players turn, by banishing 1 face up "Super Saiyan Goku". When this card is special summoned you can add one card with "Goku" in its name from your deck to your hand. This card cannot be destroyed by battle the turn it was summoned. [img]http://i.imgur.com/3yBWa.jpg[/img] This card cannot be normal summoned or set. This card must first be special summoned by sending one face-up "Super Saiyan 2 Goku" you control to the graveyard. Your opponent cannot activate any spell or trap cards the turn this card is special summoned. [img]http://i.imgur.com/X9TeO.jpg[/img] This card is used to ritual summon "Super Saiyan 4 Goku" You must tribute a face-up "Super Saiyan 3 Goku" you control to activate this card. [img]http://i.imgur.com/1JRJa.jpg[/img] This card can only be summoned with the Ritual Spell Card "Ritual of the Golden Great Ape" and cannot be special summoned by other ways. This card cannot be destroyed by the effects of spell or trap cards or be tributed for the effects of spell or trap cards. Once per turn during either players turn, you can banish one monster with "Goku" in its name from your graveyard to negate the normal or special summon of a level 4 or lower monster. [/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HulkTySSJ2 Posted October 28, 2012 Report Share Posted October 28, 2012 Good to see more DBZ fans here. Right now it's a 5/10. I recommend finding good pics on deviantart.com or at least find ones that aren't blurry. Try to figure out more about OCG, then re-edit your cards. For example on Super Saiyan 3 Goku it would be: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card must first be Special Summoned by sending one face-up "Super Saiyan 2 Goku" you control to the Graveyard. Your opponent cannot activate any Spell/Trap cards during the turn this card is Special Summoned. Also, people here complain about fake Types AKA Saiyan, but I still think it's okay if you put it as a 2nd type like this: Warrior / Saiyan / Effect. Check out my set when you get the chance here --> [url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/231560-dragonball-the-eternal-journey-best-dragonball-gallery-on-ycm-ever-updated-102312-167/"]http://forum.yugiohc...ted-102312-167/[/url] Another thing...if your interested in making Secret Rare cards, then I suggest using GIMP for editing your pics. Let me know when you fix your cards and I'll re-rate them. Hope you keep up with it and don't quit soon like most. I've been working on mine for almost 5 years now, hehe. Good luck! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackhawk101391 Posted October 29, 2012 Author Report Share Posted October 29, 2012 [quote name='hulkty' timestamp='1351461542' post='6055928'] Good to see more DBZ fans here. Right now it's a 5/10. I recommend finding good pics on deviantart.com or at least find ones that aren't blurry. Try to figure out more about OCG, then re-edit your cards. For example on Super Saiyan 3 Goku it would be: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card must first be Special Summoned by sending one face-up "Super Saiyan 2 Goku" you control to the Graveyard. Your opponent cannot activate any Spell/Trap cards during the turn this card is Special Summoned. Also, people here complain about fake Types AKA Saiyan, but I still think it's okay if you put it as a 2nd type like this: Warrior / Saiyan / Effect. Check out my set when you get the chance here --> [url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/231560-dragonball-the-eternal-journey-best-dragonball-gallery-on-ycm-ever-updated-102312-167/"]http://forum.yugiohc...ted-102312-167/[/url] Another thing...if your interested in making Secret Rare cards, then I suggest using GIMP for editing your pics. Let me know when you fix your cards and I'll re-rate them. Hope you keep up with it and don't quit soon like most. I've been working on mine for almost 5 years now, hehe. Good luck! [/quote] Thank you for your input, I'll get right on editing these cards making them better. I originally made these on the Yu-Gi-Co website which let me alter size and sharpness of the pictures. I copied the same ones over and none of them are the right size and they all look dull. I really do have to find some better ones xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HulkTySSJ2 Posted October 29, 2012 Report Share Posted October 29, 2012 [quote name='Blackhawk101391' timestamp='1351486540' post='6056179'] Thank you for your input, I'll get right on editing these cards making them better. I originally made these on the Yu-Gi-Co website which let me alter size and sharpness of the pictures. I copied the same ones over and none of them are the right size and they all look dull. I really do have to find some better ones xD [/quote] No prob. If you need more tips, then just ask on my own thread. There's a link to it in my last message and in my Sig it you haven't visited it yet. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackhawk101391 Posted December 10, 2012 Author Report Share Posted December 10, 2012 Card posting is not working right now, can someone help? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghost-Hatake26 Posted December 31, 2012 Report Share Posted December 31, 2012 Awesome. But you cant use a spell in a synchro, and why are they all tuners? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackhawk101391 Posted January 4, 2013 Author Report Share Posted January 4, 2013 [quote name='Ghost-Hatake26' timestamp='1356926389' post='6106760'] Awesome. But you cant use a spell in a synchro, and why are they all tuners? [/quote] None of them are tuners and the spell card is a ritual spell card used to summon a ritual monster. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NoshpalStefan Posted January 4, 2013 Report Share Posted January 4, 2013 Honestly, I haven't seen DBZ cards on this website for some time, nice to see a resurgence of an amazing show. Anyhow, a lot of us are having problems with the YCM card posting, so I suggest you go to a website called Yugico (as most of us do) and create your cards there, and then post the Forum URL or whatever it's called on this website. Yugico has better templates anyway so the cards will look better. Additionally, choose other pictures. These are honestly the most overused ones for DBZ cards and they have become bland and tasteless, so just go the DeviantArt and choose some other ones. Finally, I think you need to get familiar with some of the TCG texts of existing cards because here you have a number of mistakes in the text, of which the most obvious are commas. Just look at some other texts and try to fix these. Overall, I like the effects and I generally like the cards, but a number of things can be fixed. Also, for these Attack Stats, you need to lower the levels. For Goku and his first form, 4 and 6 are good levels. But for the 2nd and 3rd form, considering their attacks are 2500 and 2600, consider making their levels 7 (2nd form) and 8 (3rd form). But for now, I think they deserve a 6/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackhawk101391 Posted January 5, 2013 Author Report Share Posted January 5, 2013 [quote name='LiteratureDude96' timestamp='1357308391' post='6110917'] Honestly, I haven't seen DBZ cards on this website for some time, nice to see a resurgence of an amazing show. Anyhow, a lot of us are having problems with the YCM card posting, so I suggest you go to a website called Yugico (as most of us do) and create your cards there, and then post the Forum URL or whatever it's called on this website. Yugico has better templates anyway so the cards will look better. Additionally, choose other pictures. These are honestly the most overused ones for DBZ cards and they have become bland and tasteless, so just go the DeviantArt and choose some other ones. Finally, I think you need to get familiar with some of the TCG texts of existing cards because here you have a number of mistakes in the text, of which the most obvious are commas. Just look at some other texts and try to fix these. Overall, I like the effects and I generally like the cards, but a number of things can be fixed. Also, for these Attack Stats, you need to lower the levels. For Goku and his first form, 4 and 6 are good levels. But for the 2nd and 3rd form, considering their attacks are 2500 and 2600, consider making their levels 7 (2nd form) and 8 (3rd form). But for now, I think they deserve a 6/10. [/quote] Card text is very confusing to me for a couple of reasons. I am a very familiar with many card texts as I am still an active player of the game but writing my own cards out is much more difficult than I thought. Can you provide a link to an area that provides all the information I would need to edit the text in my cards to make them TCG accurate? I can't seem to find a source that has all these rules in one place. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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