Aix Posted November 1, 2012 Report Share Posted November 1, 2012 I really liked "Tour Guide From the Underworld" and always wanted to make an archetype surrounding her, though I never could find cool pics for it. Browsing through JazinKay's Demon album, I found some stuff that seemed close enough. I also have always wanted to make some kind of clown or circus archetype, so I decided to combine both the "From the Underworld" and "Circus", besides, some of the cards were suitable the combined theme. [spoiler='Level 3 DARK Fiend-Type monsters'] [img]http://yugico.com/customcard/129462.jpg[/img] [img]http://yugico.com/customcard/129498.jpg[/img] [img]http://yugico.com/customcard/129466.jpg[/img] [img]http://yugico.com/customcard/129500.jpg[/img] [img]http://yugico.com/customcard/129505.jpg[/img] [/spoiler] [spoiler='The only Support Trap (No Spells)'] [img]http://yugico.com/customcard/130198.jpg[/img] [/spoiler] [spoiler='Extra Deck'] [img]http://yugico.com/customcard/129507.jpg[/img] [img]http://yugico.com/customcard/129617.jpg[/img] [img]http://yugico.com/customcard/130236.jpg[/img] [img]http://yugico.com/customcard/130196.jpg[/img] [img]http://yugico.com/customcard/130238.jpg[/img] [/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Donvermicelli Posted November 1, 2012 Report Share Posted November 1, 2012 you beat me to it, I was actually planning on doing something similar with the same images even. Oh well saves me the trouble, I like what you did with them, I think I have a few more if you plan on expanding this. If you want them lemme know Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aix Posted November 1, 2012 Author Report Share Posted November 1, 2012 Sure, I'd love some more ideas. I'm stumped on what else to add, I feel that the current cards already form a quite powerful archetype, so if I add anything else to help with the swarm, it can get a little overpowered. I also can't think of what to do with the musical trio. [spoiler='Musical Trio'] The guy in the middle, I don't think he's actually a part of this, but he's playing some sort of horn... [img]http://i825.photobucket.com/albums/zz178/JazinKay/Demons/bvsjvdfs.jpg[/img] [img]http://i825.photobucket.com/albums/zz178/JazinKay/Demons/vghcvhtcvh.jpg[/img] [img]http://i825.photobucket.com/albums/zz178/JazinKay/Demons/gfdhfgbxt.jpg[/img] [/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Donvermicelli Posted November 1, 2012 Report Share Posted November 1, 2012 Idea for the top and bottom guy: have them replicate spell/trap cards respectively, once while on the field. give them response speed ex: you have top guy on the field, opponent plays compulsory(or whatever) you activate effect and copy his card, sending one of his monsters(or your own for that matter) back. Gives the little guys a bit more spice by themselves in my opinion. Alternate idea: make top guy and bot guy a lock pair for either spells OR traps OR attacks. Might give you a bit of time to recover from a bad hand etc. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sora1499 Posted November 1, 2012 Report Share Posted November 1, 2012 Okey dokes, let's go through em 1 by 1: 1. Basically an evilswarm castor for this deck that can't be veiler'd. Meh, not bad, me gusta 2. I take it this is the main searcher for the deck? It's effect is useful, as it can be an easy exchange monster or a sangan, so that makes it more versatile. Not bad, me gusta. 3. Super-splashable wind-up shark for the deck. Except, I don't like the target-switch ability... It seems a bit too much. I'd cut it down to only restricting attack targets. 4. So basically it's a super-splashable seacher basically for free? Overkill maybe? Especially given warrior's effect... I'd restrict it to splashing, and cut out the search. 5. Combos well with dancer. Not bad. 6. Basically an easy-kill card for underworlds. It could help propel them to a higher tier, but I think a free -1 for the opponent that pisses on stardust and zenmaines is a bit much. I'd make it destroy cards at the least, and even then this card is semi-broken in design. I can see it being semi'd due to abuse. 7. This card fills in what Xyz monsters have yet to do to the same extent as their synchro counterparts: easy-kill effects. It's pretty potent, but I'd say not a bad reward for running underworlds. Powerful, but not quite broken. 8. ...My gawd, this card is broken. It can attain something like 3k ATK pretty easily, just for being an easy-summon rank 3. THEN it swarms. Cut out the 300 ATK boost per fiend in the grave. The first boost effect is ok, and the swarm is fair. 9. It's decently difficult to summon, but not nearly impossible given the nature of the deck. It can be either a pseudo-DAD for a turn, which isn't horrible, it can search out tiny warrior to later reutnr and splash, or splash aforementioned tiny warrior. It's powerful, but not really broken. 10. Mixed feelings about this card... It's near impossible to summon, but if you do, it's a win condition. So, um, it's not bad I guess. Overall, cool cards, me gusta, 8.5/10 And Inzektor Hornet will be visiting you tonight... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aix Posted November 2, 2012 Author Report Share Posted November 2, 2012 Thanks for the review. I changed some of the cards. Bump. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aix Posted November 4, 2012 Author Report Share Posted November 4, 2012 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aix Posted November 4, 2012 Author Report Share Posted November 4, 2012 bump, I'm going to be using this in my Roleplay. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aix Posted November 5, 2012 Author Report Share Posted November 5, 2012 [size=5][b]BUMP!![/b][/size] Does no one like my cards?! T_T [spoiler='BUMP!'] [img]http://yugico.com/customcard/131631.jpg[/img] [/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Donvermicelli Posted November 6, 2012 Report Share Posted November 6, 2012 maybe they are just too good/balanced Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aix Posted November 6, 2012 Author Report Share Posted November 6, 2012 :/ maybe... cuz the views counter goes up, but no comments! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Supertramp Posted November 13, 2012 Report Share Posted November 13, 2012 I just had to look at the hole set when I saw your signature card I really like how they work together and that most of the effects are not only limited to "From the Underworld Circus" cards. They seem to be quite powerful but not too much IMO, good job. Furthermore, I love the artwork, especially of Showmaster, Jester, Dancer and Tiny warrior. [s]I'm just not sure if you did this on purpose that some cards are not "From the Underworld Circus" but "From the Underworld". This is kind of confusing and actually only Jester refers to "From the Underworld Circus" cards, so this doesn't make much sense to me.[/s] <-- edit: Ok, I should also read the posts, too, not only the cards ^^' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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