Garthfunkle Vii Backwards Posted November 2, 2012 Report Share Posted November 2, 2012 This set has 3 major things about it: this set help Xyz Summon Rank 1 Xyz monster that's right! now slightly more managable to summon these helpfull buggers like Galaxy Queen! Second, These guys can Xyz Summoon nearly any Generic Xyz monster except for Rank 9 and 10! Lastly, Massive Synchro Summon fun for those 5Ds Fans out there! enjoy!: [Spoiler=Main Deck] [img]http://i758.photobucket.com/albums/xx221/judedudemud3/mac%20n%20bloo/01.jpg[/img] If you control a Level 1 non-Tuner monster, you can Special Summon this card (from your hand or Graveyard) in Defense Position. You can banish this card from your Graveyard and banish 1 Level 4 or lower Synchro Monster from your Extra Deck; Your opponent send 1 card from their hand to the Graveyard. This card can not be used for the Synchro Summoning of "Formula Synchron". [img]http://i.imgur.com/Rxh4X.jpg[/img] When this card is Normal Summon add 1 Level 1 "Slag-Ore" monster from your Deck to your hand except for "Slag-Ore Carrier". While this card is in the Graveyard and you control a Level 1 Tuner, you can banish this card to Special Summon 1 "Slag-Ore Carrier" from your Deck. You can only activate the effect of "Slag-Ore Carrier" once per turn. [img]http://i758.photobucket.com/albums/xx221/judedudemud3/mac%20n%20bloo/03.jpg[/img] When this card is Normal Summoned: You can Special Summon 1 Level 1 LIGHT or DARK Rock-Type monster from your hand or Deck. Its effects are negated. If this card is used as Synchro material for a Synchro monster, draw 1 card. This card can not be used for the Synchro Summoning of "Formula Synchron". [img]http://i758.photobucket.com/albums/xx221/judedudemud3/mac%20n%20bloo/04.jpg[/img] If you have 3 or less cards in your hand, you can Special Summon this card (from your hand) with 0 ATK and DEF. If this card is used as Synchro Material for a Synchro Summon, both players must banish 1 Synchro monster from their Extra Deck, if they can not they lose 100 Life Points for each card in their Extra Deck then, you can Target 1 banished Level 1 monster; Return it to the Graveyard. [img]http://i758.photobucket.com/albums/xx221/judedudemud3/mac%20n%20bloo/05.jpg[/img] When this card is Normal or Special Summoned: You can add 1 "Slag-Ore" monster from your Deck to your hand. [img]http://i758.photobucket.com/albums/xx221/judedudemud3/mac%20n%20bloo/06.jpg[/img] When this card is Normal or Special Summmoned: this card gain this effect: Up to twice per turn: You can target 1 "Slag-Ore" monster on the field; Increase that target's Level by 1 or, Reduce that target's Level by 1. [img]http://i758.photobucket.com/albums/xx221/judedudemud3/mac%20n%20bloo/07.jpg[/img] Cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. Must be Special Summoned (from your hand or Graveyard) by having "Slag-Ore Skull", "Slag-Ore Black Ice Body Golem", "Slag-Ore Left Palm of the Beginning", "Slag-Ore Right Palm of the End" and, "Slag-Ore Gaint Kicker" banished in your banish pile and cannot be Special Summoned by other ways. This card can not attack directly. This card cannot be destroyed by card effects. During your oponent's End Phase this card loses 1000ATK. [img]http://i758.photobucket.com/albums/xx221/judedudemud3/mac%20n%20bloo/00-2.jpg[/img] Banish 1 Level 1 monster from your hand, then add 1 monster card from your Deck with the same name as the card that was banish by this card's effect, if you can not you lose 800 Life Points. During the turn you activate this card when you Normal Summon 1 Level 1 monster you can Special Summon 1 Level monster from your Hand. You can only activate 1 "Gang of Weaklings Gathers!" per turn. [/Spoiler] [Spoiler=Extra Deck] [img]http://i758.photobucket.com/albums/xx221/judedudemud3/mac%20n%20bloo/10.jpg[/img] 1 Level 1 Tuner Monster + 1 Level non-Tuner monster When this card is Synchro Summon you can banish 1 Level LIGHT "Slag-Ore" monster and 1 Level DARK "Slag-Ore" monster from your Deck to Special Summon 1 Level 2 Synchro monster from your Extra Deck, its effects on the Field are negated. This card gains ATK equal to the combined Oringial ATK of the Synchro Material used to Synchro Summon this card. [img]http://i758.photobucket.com/albums/xx221/judedudemud3/mac%20n%20bloo/09.jpg[/img] 1 Level 1 Tuner Monster + 1 Level non-Tuner monster Once per turn during your Main Phase 1 while this card is in the Graveyard, you can banish 1 "Slag-Ore" monster from your Graveyard to Special Summon 1 non-Tuner "Slag-Ore" monster from your Graveyard. Once per turn during your opponent's Main phase 1 while this card is in the Graveyard, you can return 1 banished "Slag-Ore" monster to your Graveyard then your opponent gains 800 Life Points. [img]http://i758.photobucket.com/albums/xx221/judedudemud3/mac%20n%20bloo/11.jpg[/img] 1 Tuner Monster + 1 or more non-Tuner monster During the turn this card was Normal Summoned, you can Normal Summon 1 "Slag-Ore" monster in addition to your Normal Summon/Set. (You can only gain this effect once per turn.) [img]http://i.imgur.com/93gme.jpg[/img] 1 Tuner Monster + 1 non-Tuner monster When this card is Synchro Summon, Special Summon 1 banished level 4 or lower "Slag-Ore" monster in Defense Position. [img]http://i758.photobucket.com/albums/xx221/judedudemud3/mac%20n%20bloo/12.jpg[/img] 1 "Slag-Ore" Tuner Synchro Monster + 1 or more non-Tuner Synchro Monsters When this card is Synchro Summon, halve both player's Life Points. This card gains 100 ATK for every LIGHT and DARK monster in both Graveyard and banish piles. This card can not attack directly the turn it was Summoned. Once per turn during any player's turn, if this card would be removed the Field (by any means) it's not instead. Once per turn you can banish 2 LIGHT monsters in your Graveyard to destory 1 card on the Field. Once per turn you can banish 2 DARK monsters in your Graveyard to select 1 card in your opponent's hand then the selected card is shuffled into your opponent's Deck. [/Spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Organized Chaos Posted November 6, 2012 Report Share Posted November 6, 2012 Can I just say now that it is great that your OCG has improved. Honestly, I thought it would never be better to be honest but you have really shown me something. I'll review the cards individually now. Slag-Ore Core: This card is a bit OP'ed with the fact it can Special Summon itself from the graveyard continuously for a relatively simple cost. i would add "If you Special Summon this card from the graveyard using this effect, it cannot be used as Xyz Material and is banished when it leaves the field. Also, i would reccomend changing the cost of the banishing effect to Level 3 or lower Synchro from the Extra Deck to fit in with the archetype. Besides that very original and plain awesome. Slag-Ore Carrier: Please change the searching effect to add 1 "Slag-Ore" monster from your Deck or else it would be Exodia spam everywhere. I would also change the 2nd effect so you can only activate it if you control a Level 1 Tuner or else it will be quiet broke. Also, there is an OCG error. "When this card is Normal Summon[u]ed[/u]" But besides that, an awesome card for the archetype. Slag-Ore Skull is perfect. honestly, I have no complaints. Except, maybe limit it to simply Deck. Hand or Deck just feels crazy for me. Also, I think it might be "used as Synchro material for a Synchro Summon." I'm not sure. Slag-Ore Crest Guardian: Again perfect, works with loss of hand advantage produced by Deck. Again, might be "used as Synchro Material for a Synchro Summon." I have no idea. Either way, card is great. Slag-Ore Bear Pillar: I really ahve no complaints for this card. These are some awesome cards you've done and I'm sorry I'm not being constructive enough. Slag-Ore Gaint kicker: You don't really need the thing about being Normal Summoned. It will be fine without. Slag-Ore Lord, Gemzel Ogre: Situational boss is situational. I doubt it will be summoned, besides for lulz. It's surprisingly balanced for a mega boss. Also I think you mean "This card cannot be destroyed by card effects." Gang of Weakless Gatherers: I like this card a lot actually. Once again, it's quite balanced but quite good. Maybe change it to "You can Normal Summon 1 "Slag-Ore" monster in addition to your Normal Summon or Set." Either way, quite good. Slag-Ore Right Palm: Maybe add in an effect that you can't use the Summoned monster for Xyz Purposes. Also do you mean the banished cards to be Level 1? Besides that, good card. Slag-Ore Ice Body Golem: pretty much used to be summoned by palm, summon Archangel then use it's effect for shenanigans. Left Palm, I don't understand. Do you mean Special Summoned because Synchros can't be Normal Summoned. Archangel: Add an effect that you can't use the Special Summoned monster for Synchros this turn. And also do you mean "Special Summon 1 banished level 4 or lower "Slag-Ore" monster in Defense Position." Ocho of Dark Virtue should require a "Slag-Ore" Synchro tuner monster. otherwise it's a bit OP'ed. Also, maybe reduce the lifepoint halving effect and change the banishing effect to destroy card to "Once per turn: You can banish 1 LIGHT and DARK monster from your graveyard; Destroy 1 card on the field." Just to make it a bit more balanced because hand destruction is always really evil. All in all, a brilliant set. Almost flawless grammar, original card designs and some new concepts. Well done indeed. This is a fantastic piece of work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Garthfunkle Vii Backwards Posted November 7, 2012 Author Report Share Posted November 7, 2012 [Spoiler=Endless Nightmares] [quote name='Endless Nightmares' timestamp='1352244076' post='6062521'] Can I just say now that it is great that your OCG has improved. Honestly, I thought it would never be better to be honest but you have really shown me something. I'll review the cards individually now. Slag-Ore Core: This card is a bit OP'ed with the fact it can Special Summon itself from the graveyard continuously for a relatively simple cost. i would add "If you Special Summon this card from the graveyard using this effect, it cannot be used as Xyz Material and is banished when it leaves the field. Also, i would reccomend changing the cost of the banishing effect to Level 3 or lower Synchro from the Extra Deck to fit in with the archetype. Besides that very original and plain awesome. Slag-Ore Carrier: Please change the searching effect to add 1 "Slag-Ore" monster from your Deck or else it would be Exodia spam everywhere. I would also change the 2nd effect so you can only activate it if you control a Level 1 Tuner or else it will be quiet broke. Also, there is an OCG error. "When this card is Normal Summon[u]ed[/u]" But besides that, an awesome card for the archetype. Slag-Ore Skull is perfect. honestly, I have no complaints. Except, maybe limit it to simply Deck. Hand or Deck just feels crazy for me. Also, I think it might be "used as Synchro material for a Synchro Summon." I'm not sure. Slag-Ore Crest Guardian: Again perfect, works with loss of hand advantage produced by Deck. Again, might be "used as Synchro Material for a Synchro Summon." I have no idea. Either way, card is great. Slag-Ore Bear Pillar: I really ahve no complaints for this card. These are some awesome cards you've done and I'm sorry I'm not being constructive enough. Slag-Ore Gaint kicker: You don't really need the thing about being Normal Summoned. It will be fine without. Slag-Ore Lord, Gemzel Ogre: Situational boss is situational. I doubt it will be summoned, besides for lulz. It's surprisingly balanced for a mega boss. Also I think you mean "This card cannot be destroyed by card effects." Gang of Weakless Gatherers: I like this card a lot actually. Once again, it's quite balanced but quite good. Maybe change it to "You can Normal Summon 1 "Slag-Ore" monster in addition to your Normal Summon or Set." Either way, quite good. Slag-Ore Right Palm: Maybe add in an effect that you can't use the Summoned monster for Xyz Purposes. Also do you mean the banished cards to be Level 1? Besides that, good card. Slag-Ore Ice Body Golem: pretty much used to be summoned by palm, summon Archangel then use it's effect for shenanigans. Left Palm, I don't understand. Do you mean Special Summoned because Synchros can't be Normal Summoned. Archangel: Add an effect that you can't use the Special Summoned monster for Synchros this turn. And also do you mean "Special Summon 1 banished level 4 or lower "Slag-Ore" monster in Defense Position." Ocho of Dark Virtue should require a "Slag-Ore" Synchro tuner monster. otherwise it's a bit OP'ed. Also, maybe reduce the lifepoint halving effect and change the banishing effect to destroy card to "Once per turn: You can banish 1 LIGHT and DARK monster from your graveyard; Destroy 1 card on the field." Just to make it a bit more balanced because hand destruction is always really evil. All in all, a brilliant set. Almost flawless grammar, original card designs and some new concepts. Well done indeed. This is a fantastic piece of work. [/quote] [/Spoiler] [Spoiler=response] Core: I would like to support Rank 1 Xyz monsters so nah, bra! Gemzel Ogre: Is super-easy to summon follow the way to summon "Ocho" most should be banished by now or use Ocho's effect to complete or nearly complete the 5 monsters needed to summon him! blam 2 powerhouses with 1 destruction Gang of Weakless Gatherers: It's suposed to support Rank 1 Xyz monster so limiting it to one group will not help the Rank 1 Xyz monstera Right Palm: You are susposed to used the synchros as xyz materials. For 2 specifc monsters in your deck you can special summon a lv 2 synchro monster Left Palm You are susposed to used the synchros as xyz materials. its allows you to normal summon a "Slag-Ore" monster from your hand Archangel that would slow it down so nope, but would help intice synchro for xyz material fodder concept [/Spoiler] I have edited the effects some! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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