More Cards From New Series: Dragon's Grave Rise Again

[cyberhypo]

Ok so I have 4 cards so far And here they are:




[spoiler='Monsters'] [img]http://i.imgur.com/SzlDt.jpg[/img]


EFF: This card cannot be normal summon or set. This card can only be special summoned by tributing 1 "Blue Eyes White Dragon" and by removing from play 2 Zombie-Type monsters on the field. This card is treated as an Zombie-Type and Dragon-Type monster on the field, graveyard and hand. You can tribute this monster to special summon up to 3 level 6 (and under) Zombie-Type monsters that are removed from play. If this card is destroyed by battle, you can special summon this card at the end-phase. If you do, this card's ATK is 2000.




http://www.yugiohcardmaker.net/ycmaker/createcard.php?name=Underground%20Choas%20Dragon&cardtype=Monster&subtype=effect&attribute=Dark&level=4&magictraptype=None&rarity=Rare&picture=http://www.smashingapps.com/wp-content/uploads/2010/02/Dragon-Artworks/dragon_20.jpg&set1=DGRA&set2=EN004&inset=true&type=Dragon&description=This%20card%20can%20attack%20directly%20if%20your%20opponent%20has%201%20more%20more%20monsters%20on%20the%20field.%20This%20card%20cannot%20be%20targeted%20by%20traps.&circulation=&atk=1700&def=100&creator=Cyber%20Hypo&year=2012&serial=30122309



EFF: This card can attack directly if your opponent has 1 more more monsters on the field. When this card declares an attack to a monster, decrease the attack of the target. This card cannot be targeted by traps.






[img]http://i.imgur.com/teSIP.jpg[/img]


EFF: This card can only be summoned by the effect of the ritual "Sky's Grave" and with at least 1 Dragon-Type and Zombie-Type monster's that equal to the amount of stars of this card. This card is treated as an Zombie-Type and a Dragon-Type monster on the field, graveyard and hand.[/spoiler]




Spells:

[spoiler='Spells'] [img]http://i.imgur.com/ZNaWH.jpg[/img]


EFF: This card is used to ritual summon "Zombie Sky Dragon". You must also send to the graveyard (from your field or hand) 1 Dragon-Type and 1 Zombie-Type monster whose level's equal to "Zombie Sky Dragon".[/spoiler]

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Blue Eyes: The effort you need to Summon this card is obscene enough to allow it to have the normally broken effect of SSing up to 3 of your banished Level 6- Zombies. As for the effect that SSes itself: A monster with 3500 ATK will scarcely ever be destroyed in battle (though it is possible with cards such as Honest), so this won't happen very often. More often than not, your opponent will get rid of this with a Trap card such as Bottomless Trap Hole, Solemn Warning, or Torrential Tribute.

Underground Chaos Dragon: A 1700 direct attacker is new, and honestly, isn't really a problem. The immunity from being targeted by Traps is nice. As for the effect where you attack a monster, how much do you decrease the ATK of the other monster? These values have to be included so people don't just turn everything to 0 ATK.

Zombie Sky (and the Ritual Spell): Wait, are you supposed to Tribute 1 Level 6 Zombie and 1 Level 6 Dragon? And even if you don't have to, Dragons and Zombies don't mix together that well. Plus, the ATK of this card is low, and the effect of being both a Zombie and a Dragon will not help it much, so this isn't really worth running.

[cyberhypo]

[quote name='A Background Character' timestamp='1351958251' post='6060266']
Blue Eyes: The effort you need to Summon this card is obscene enough to allow it to have the normally broken effect of SSing up to 3 of your banished Level 6- Zombies. As for the effect that SSes itself: A monster with 3500 ATK will scarcely ever be destroyed in battle (though it is possible with cards such as Honest), so this won't happen very often. More often than not, your opponent will get rid of this with a Trap card such as Bottomless Trap Hole, Solemn Warning, or Torrential Tribute.

Underground Chaos Dragon: A 1700 direct attacker is new, and honestly, isn't really a problem. The immunity from being targeted by Traps is nice. As for the effect where you attack a monster, how much do you decrease the ATK of the other monster? These values have to be included so people don't just turn everything to 0 ATK.

Zombie Sky (and the Ritual Spell): Wait, are you supposed to Tribute 1 Level 6 Zombie and 1 Level 6 Dragon? And even if you don't have to, Dragons and Zombies don't mix together that well. Plus, the ATK of this card is low, and the effect of being both a Zombie and a Dragon will not help it much, so this isn't really worth running.
[/quote] Thanks for telling me some tips! Sorry, new to making this kind of "cards". I would like to change it. Thanks for telling me!