AGATHODAIMON BANGTAIL COW Posted November 6, 2012 Report Share Posted November 6, 2012 [img]http://i.imgur.com/iZrFN.jpg[/img] This is what I see Interdimensional Matter Teleporter should be. The SSing sentence is supposed to be like how Last Will lets you Special Summon your monster whenever (granted you fill the requirements), so you can bring your monster back during the Battle Phase, when it ends, or in response to some card activating. I also made it where the target doesn't become a double-beater since that sounds borqued. The picture (from JazinKay for those of you who really care about stuff like that) looked like the thing could have just appeared suddenly, so I chose this after looking for 15-so minutes. And if you can't read the effect, please jump out of a really high window. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AGATHODAIMON BANGTAIL COW Posted November 8, 2012 Author Report Share Posted November 8, 2012 Bump because people don't ever tell me things unless I make blatantly broken cards. Oh, and this is blatantly broken too. Probably. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
newhat Posted November 8, 2012 Report Share Posted November 8, 2012 The last effect should be Optional rather than Mandatory. I see how you can use this to blink your card out against Dimensional Prison, Dark Hole, an attack, etc. It can also be used for an extra attack, to reset negative Conditions (Barbaros to 3000), and to trigger on-Summon effects. You can also use it to remove the drawbacks of Mind Control. The only disadvantage I can see is that this removes Xyz Material. This is as solid and usable as Book of Moon; it needs some kind of Cost. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AGATHODAIMON BANGTAIL COW Posted November 8, 2012 Author Report Share Posted November 8, 2012 [quote name='newhat' timestamp='1352348825' post='6063643'] The last effect should be Optional rather than Mandatory.[/quote] There aren't really going to be too many situations where you don't want to get your monster back, but fine. [quote]It can also be used for an extra attack,[/quote] Now that's not supposed to happen. I'm getting rid of that. [quote]it needs some kind of Cost.[/quote] I need to start using more different costs than "discard, lose LP somehow, and banish from your Grave" as costs, but done. Hopefully, it won't be too much or too little to burn yourself based on its DEF. Also, rarity bump for lolaesthetics. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
newhat Posted November 8, 2012 Report Share Posted November 8, 2012 That attack-wording is strange as it would cease to be the same monster that performed the first attack. No matter. if the card says it works then it does. The colon after "During this turn" should be moved to replace the semicolon. That effect doesn't target. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AGATHODAIMON BANGTAIL COW Posted November 8, 2012 Author Report Share Posted November 8, 2012 The only semicolon on the card was the one before taking damage, which I was sure is supposed to be there. Anyway, since I got really befuddled, I changed the sentence to where it says the same thing, but worded where it can make sense with one colon. It's still the one after "During this turn" though. :/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AGATHODAIMON BANGTAIL COW Posted November 10, 2012 Author Report Share Posted November 10, 2012 Bump out of tiredness. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AGATHODAIMON BANGTAIL COW Posted November 14, 2012 Author Report Share Posted November 14, 2012 Bump because I'm going to be lulzy and not bump my WC thread. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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