Galkin Posted November 10, 2012 Report Share Posted November 10, 2012 [img]http://i.imgur.com/Hwtiy.jpg[/img] [quote]You can Special Summon this banished card by discarding 1 Fairy-Type monster from your hand. If this card is Special Summoned and your Life Points are higher than 8000: Add 1 "Angelic Senator" card from your Deck to your hand. If a Fairy-Type monster is banished: Gain 1500 Life Points. Each of the effect(s) of "Angelic Senator - Luena" can only be activated once per turn.[/quote] [img]http://i.imgur.com/W7hf1.jpg[/img] [quote]If your Life Points are higher than 8000: You can Normal Summon this card without tributing. When this card is Normal Summoned: Draw 2 cards and reveal them; banish 1 of the drawn cards, then if the banished card was a Monster Card: Gain Life Points equal to its ATK or DEF.[/quote] [img]http://i.imgur.com/6lWhW.jpg[/img] [quote]Cannot be Special Summoned. If your Life Points are 10,000 or higher: You can Tribute Summon this card with 1 tribute. While this card is face-up on the field: The level of all face-up Fairy-Type monsters become 10. If this card is removed from the field: Banish it and 1 "Angelic Senator" card from your Deck; gain 3000 Life Points. [/quote] [img]http://i.imgur.com/7IPH4.jpg[/img] [quote]Pay 5000 Life Points and send 1 "Angelic Senator" Monster Card from your side of the field to the Graveyard; inflict damage to your opponent's Life Points equal to half of your current Life Points. You cannot conduct your Battle Phase during the turn you activate this card.[/quote] [img]http://i.imgur.com/qzCCq.jpg[/img] [quote]3 Level 10 Fairy-Type monsters When this card is XYZ Summoned: Increase your Life Points by 4000. During each End Phase: Banish 1 XYZ Material from this card; add 1 of your banished Fairy-Type monsters to your hand. While this card has XYZ Materials: It is unaffected by your opponent's card effects. If this card has no XYZ Materials: Return it to the Extra Deck.[/quote] [img]http://i.imgur.com/O5lgo.jpg[/img] [quote]During either player's turn, you can banish this card (Either from your hand or your Graveyard) to activate one of the following effects (You must control a face-up "Angelic Senator" to activate and resolve this effect): *Negate all Battle Damage you take this turn and gain Life Points equal to the damage you would have taken instead. *Banish any number of Fairy-Type monsters in your Graveyard or your hand, then add banished "Angelic Senator" monsters (Except "Angelic Senator - Zion") to your hand equal to the number of Fairy-Type monsters you banished.[/quote] Okay, not much to say, but the obvious "Angelic Downfall" being the painful core around these cards, right? ...And God Senator being a total tide turner. BTW, changes were made Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aix Posted November 10, 2012 Report Share Posted November 10, 2012 I like the idea of Life Points increase, it's not used much in the current game. Though for your archetype to work, you have to be on top of things from the very start (unless you bring God Senator out, I suppose). Luena: She doesn't seem very good, you would have to banish at least 4 monsters to get a good "profit" from this card. I'd say make the cost less, like 2000, since making the LP gain more could easily be OP, or make some Senators that benefit from being banished other than Corona's effect. BTW there's a typo in the Lore, "each" not "eadh". Rena: What happens to the other card drawn? I'd say make it so that [i]you[/i] should get to choose and then it may possibly combo with Luena (which is good). Corona: Well, she's almost like a boss, I suppose, but her massive LP gain ability makes it so that Decks may simply focus on having her around and Summoning her. Maybe a requirement for Tributing a "Angelic Senator"? God Senator: There isn't much support for this archetype, it would be nice if you made more, and if there were, God Senator would probably be really OP. I would suggest make the thing lower, like 7000 and then have something like "If you have 7000 or more gain 3000 Life Points instead." The limit of 5000 is really unnecessary or you should make the limit higher, it'd be cool to see an archetype with a boss with INSANELY HIGH ATK and not afraid of something like Magic Cylinder, though I suppose you should lessen its Life Point gain effect. Downfall: I would personally change the wording to "lose" instead of "inflict damage" to get around stuff. Suggestion? Make an Ultimate Offering-esque thing but that requires A LOT more LP to use (and remove the Battle Phase Summons) and has a limit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Galkin Posted November 10, 2012 Author Report Share Posted November 10, 2012 Changed Luena, Rena was changed (and the other drawn card is kept. It was drawn, not picked up) [size=1][Don'tnoticethetypedon'tnoticethetypo][/size] Downfall was...kept the same. There is absolutely no defense against "losing" life points and that is overpowered. Pazuk was changed to drastically Corona was changed and now we have Zion, which either makes or breaks this archtype in-between with Luena searching. (Breaks it) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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