Phantasy Dreamz Posted November 22, 2012 Report Share Posted November 22, 2012 [center]Well, here's just another random.[/center] [center]Just thought I'd share it.[/center] [center]But do examine it, and tell me it's flaws.[/center] [center]Thought I'd make it's effect as STUN.[/center] [center]But it ended up as DESTROYING as well.[/center] [center]Lololololololololololololololololol...[/center] [center][IMG]http://i47.tinypic.com/2i0wzmu.jpg[/IMG][/center] [center][u][b]Card text:[/b][/u] Cannot be Special Summoned. Must be Tribute Summoned by Tributing up to 3 WATER monsters. This card gains 1000 per monster used to Tribute Summon this card. When this card is Normal Summoned: Reveal all Set cards (Spell/Trap Cards remain face-up on the field during this turn); negate the effects of all other face-up cards. Then, during your End Phase: destroy all the revealed Spell/Trap Cards.[/center] [i]~Dreamz[/i] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ren✧ Posted November 22, 2012 Report Share Posted November 22, 2012 I definitely like the card. It has a pretty original effect. I noticed a small OCG mistake- [quote=OCG] Cannot be Special Summoned. Can also be Tribute Summon by Tributing 1 or 3 monsters. If this card is to be Tribute Summon, the Tribute(s) must be WATER. This card gains 1000 ATK for each Tributed monster. When this card is Summon[b]ed[/b]: Change all Face-down cards to Face-up (Spell/Trap Cards are consider Continuous); negate the effects of all other Face-up cards on the field, until the End Phase. During the End Phase, destroy all Spell/Trap Cards that were affected by this effect. [/quote] -there may be more, I definitely not the best at OCG. I know this is a pretty crappy review, I've been gone for a few months and I am feeling a little rusty. But, I do like the card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantasy Dreamz Posted November 23, 2012 Author Report Share Posted November 23, 2012 Lol, thanks Oh, and if it isn't too much trouble Could you point out my OCG mistake? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JACMaker Posted November 23, 2012 Report Share Posted November 23, 2012 I like this effect. Though, it could use a few minor changes. Such as the part making spells and traps continuous. Also, the part about negating the effects. The OCG does have mistakes and they are minor ones to me. [spoiler=How I'd write the OCG for this card.] Cannot be Special Summoned. Must be Tribute Summoned by Tributing up to 3 WATER monsters. Increase this card's ATK by 1000 per monster used to Tribute Summon this card. When this card is Normal Summoned: all Set cards are revealed to both players. Then, during your End Phase: destroy all the revealed Spell/Trap Cards.[/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ren✧ Posted November 23, 2012 Report Share Posted November 23, 2012 [quote name='Phantasy Dreamz' timestamp='1353651525' post='6076049'] Lol, thanks Oh, and if it isn't too much trouble Could you point out my OCG mistake? [/quote] Oh, I guess it is kinda hard to see in the quote. You put Summon instead of Summoned. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantasy Dreamz Posted November 23, 2012 Author Report Share Posted November 23, 2012 ~Edit Thanks guys @JAC - I think keeping the negating effect was the whole purpose of this card's effect (stun), so I'll keep it as it. Thanks though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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