Donvermicelli Posted November 22, 2012 Report Share Posted November 22, 2012 Ok so I used these cards for a tournament and ended up last, Initially I made these cards a lot stronger but I feared of them being unfair and overpowered, so instead I decided to nerf them (albeit I nerfed them too hard). I'd appreciate some constructive feedback on how to improve some of the cards. [spoiler=Vampires] [spoiler=Vampire Bat] [img]http://img843.imageshack.us/img843/7324/vampirebat.png[/img] [/spoiler] [spoiler= Vampire Baroness] [img]http://img24.imageshack.us/img24/3356/vampirebaroness.png[/img] [/spoiler] [spoiler=Feeding Frenzy] [img]http://img689.imageshack.us/img689/103/feedingfrenzy.png[/img] [/spoiler] [spoiler=Bloody Lies] [img]http://img441.imageshack.us/img441/3122/bloodyliesd.png[/img] [/spoiler] [spoiler=Vampire Warlord] [img]http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/8886/vampirewarlord.png[/img] [/spoiler] [spoiler=Bat Bitten] [img]http://img843.imageshack.us/img843/6715/batbitten.png[/img] [/spoiler] [spoiler=Vampiric Stronghold] [img]http://img687.imageshack.us/img687/6027/vampiricstronghold.png[/img] [/spoiler] [spoiler=Vampire Aristocrat] [img]http://img837.imageshack.us/img837/112/vampirearistocrat.png[/img] [/spoiler] [spoiler=Aggravated Vampire] [img]http://img4.imageshack.us/img4/2760/aggrevatedvampire.png[/img] [/spoiler] [spoiler=Vampire Duke] [img]http://img208.imageshack.us/img208/2633/vampireduke.png[/img] [/spoiler] [/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Donvermicelli Posted November 24, 2012 Author Report Share Posted November 24, 2012 BUMP Because I really want to improve them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Donvermicelli Posted November 25, 2012 Author Report Share Posted November 25, 2012 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Donvermicelli Posted December 1, 2012 Author Report Share Posted December 1, 2012 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Donvermicelli Posted December 9, 2012 Author Report Share Posted December 9, 2012 bump, some feedback please? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sullyvanj93 Posted December 9, 2012 Report Share Posted December 9, 2012 i like em for the most part. quick question though, about the "bat bitten". Is it either graveyard? cause otherwise the first effect... not so handy dandy.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Donvermicelli Posted December 10, 2012 Author Report Share Posted December 10, 2012 yes it is either graveyard, catch is that it has to have been destroyed by a vampire monster. Doesn't matter if your opponent was the one who controlled it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
seattleite Posted December 11, 2012 Report Share Posted December 11, 2012 It is important to remember that for most decks, the Graveyard is like a mana pool. Many decks want cards in the Grave, so for a mill deck, you have to minimize this effect whenever possible. Vampire Baroness - What if you searched through your opponent's deck and sent a monster, instead of them choosing? Bloody Lies lets your opponent pretty much get what they need when they need it. Having you select may make it Overpowered, so I suggest finding a way around that. Vampire Warlord - Is still a little slow, what if it was 2 cards instead of 1? Bat Bitten's second effect is pretty lame. How about 2 cards per monster destroyed, and banish instead of mill? If this is your whole deck, Vampire Aristocrat has very few ways of activatng the first effect. I'd make it "Summoned", and mill 3 instead. Aggravated Vampire could use some more ATK, maybe 1100-1300 If Vampire Aristocrat is your only lv5, Vampire Duke can only be summoned with two of those. They only have 2000 ATK and are not easily Special Summoned which makes this card painfully slow. You could make it Rank 4, with "2 Level 4 Vampire Monsters", but you'd need some more Level 4 Vampires. ----- For all of them, if you find the mill still helping the opponent too much, make it banish instead. ---- That can get you started. Btw, nice pics. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
twistedproto00 Posted December 11, 2012 Report Share Posted December 11, 2012 i know that this is quite obvious but you need a synchro or a trap card that can be treated as a monster. something like that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RoaringSilence0 Posted December 11, 2012 Report Share Posted December 11, 2012 I've only read the first one and I've found about 5 grammar mistakes. You've got the right idea with the words, but nowadays they use all those colons and semicolons... I know, I hate it too Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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