Super Chaos Sonic Posted November 22, 2012 Report Share Posted November 22, 2012 [center]Alright, I've finally gone back to card making...somewhat LOL. Anyway, this happens to be my first ever Xyz monster EVER! And what type of cards better to make, than cards for the HERO archetype.[/center] [center]Comment, Rate, Enjoy![/center] [center][b][u]Elemental HERO Core Steel[/u][/b][/center] [center][img]http://yugico.com/customcard/141785.jpg[/img][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sora1499 Posted November 23, 2012 Report Share Posted November 23, 2012 ...No. First of all, the effect is inherently broken in ANY context: extra deck monsters paying for themselves is bad design and practically baiting out loops. But it's even worse in the HERO context because of our good OP buddy stratos. I'm not sure if rulings would say that this card needs a target in the grave to activate, but otherwise you could grab a stratos from grave, get stratos's effect, grab bubble man, special bubble man, make another one of these, revive stratos and repeat. This would be called a loop-de-loop, and HEROs don't need a crappy loop. If this card would need a target in the grave to activate, its still bad design because this doesn't die too easily and you can just detach stratos, grab another HERO, then summon stratos and make another one of these, etc. If you want to balance this card, then you have to add this clause: "...but it's effect(s) are negated." This prevents the stratos loop I've just mentioned. After that is added in, I still don't like this card, but its not too horrible. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Chaos Sonic Posted November 23, 2012 Author Report Share Posted November 23, 2012 I edited the effect a bit, but not sure if its worded correctly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alice Moonflowyr Posted November 23, 2012 Report Share Posted November 23, 2012 Yeah, this is a bit OP. With the effect negation, Stratos loop is prevented but that still leaves room for shenanigans with Gemini Spark and Neos Alius if you have multiple Spark on hand. It's pretty good though, but I might reduce the ATK by maybe 200 so it's on par with Gear Gigant X. Otherwise this looks pretty f***ing awesome. Good job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Chaos Sonic Posted November 23, 2012 Author Report Share Posted November 23, 2012 Well I wouldn't use this with Gemini Spark, mainly cause I never use it much. But reducing the atk by 200 will do. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
liavcol Posted November 23, 2012 Report Share Posted November 23, 2012 i like the concept of the card, i love E HEROES but i think u should replace the picture. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ren✧ Posted November 23, 2012 Report Share Posted November 23, 2012 I really don't like the picture. It is too power ranger-ish...or is it Kamen Rider...either way, I don't like it, but that is a small matter. It seems like you have worked on the effect, judging the card from the previous posts, but it is fairly bland. Not bad, just boring. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Chaos Sonic Posted November 23, 2012 Author Report Share Posted November 23, 2012 The effect, I came up with that way it would be another quick Fusion or Xyz. Mainly cause that's what HEROs are for, quick fusions and what not. As for the pic, I honestly didn't know what else to use so I just went with a Kamen Rider pic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Justice Master Posted November 23, 2012 Report Share Posted November 23, 2012 It's a well made card. The attack does need a bit of a nerf, but it seems you're already on that. My only problem with it is that it's an Elemental HERO. E-HEROes that aren't fusion have always bugged me for one huge reason. It breaks the realism of the card. I am convinced that there will(hopefully) NEVER be an Extra Deck monster with the name "Elemental HERO" that isn't a Fusion monster. Besides that, I commend you. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Chaos Sonic Posted November 23, 2012 Author Report Share Posted November 23, 2012 Thanks Justice, but I wanted to have the HEROs bridge out from just the Fusions. I did before with making 3 Synchro HEROs...but that's beside the point XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Chaos Sonic Posted November 24, 2012 Author Report Share Posted November 24, 2012 BUMP Any other reviews? Critiques? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Chaos Sonic Posted November 25, 2012 Author Report Share Posted November 25, 2012 Another BUMP! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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