YugiohNewb Posted November 27, 2012 Report Share Posted November 27, 2012 [img]http://i47.tinypic.com/2vdf8dk.jpg[/img] [size=5]Lore:[/size] [size=5]"Black Rose Dragon"+"Red Eyes Black Dragon"[/size] [size=5]This card does piercing damage. When this card is summoned successfully; destroy all cards on the field. You can banish 1 DRAGON type monster in your graveyard to change one monster on your opponents side of the field to face down defense position, reduce its DEF to 0 until the end phase.[/size] [size=5]This card gains 500 ATK points for each DRAGON type monster in your graveyard.[/size] [size=5]Pls may you guys rate this card and give some feed back???ways to help would really be appreciated aswell thanks guys .[/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AGATHODAIMON BANGTAIL COW Posted November 27, 2012 Report Share Posted November 27, 2012 There are a few (actually two) problems with how this card actually works. [list] [*]This card nukes everything upon it being Summoned in any way (it's mandatory), so all of the other effects are pretty irrelevant, but I suppose you meant for it to be optional. It needs to say that you can. [*]A face-down monster can't have 0 DEF unless its original DEF is 0. You could say that its DEF becomes 0 when it's flipped face-up though. It doesn't really make too much sense with it gaining its DEF back during the End Phase though. [/list] Now, since BRD can nuke on its own, this card will hardly be brought out except with Miracle Synchro Fusion. Also, Red-Eyes Black Dragon isn't going to be very useful in its own way, so you're probably going to run a Fusion sub instead. Just saying. The non-nuke effects seem to combine to make this into a pretty powerful piercer that effectively attacks directly. It doesn't take much effort for this to become astonishingly powerful and swing for approximately 4, maybe 5 thousand damage on its own. Given the requirements to get this out, that might be ok, but still... Maybe you could give the ATK boost a maximum amount that it could power this card by. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hauntedflare Posted November 28, 2012 Report Share Posted November 28, 2012 I like how the effect resembles black rose dragon and how the att and def are blalnced. You should add to the beginning "This card can only be summoned by fusion summon" because it wouldn't be realistic for a card to have that effect and can be constantly brought from the grave. Also when it says destroy all cards on the field, you should add "execpt this card" to it or else if someone was dueling with this card they could thing the fusion goes to the graveyard too. But I like the overall idea. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Black Metal Posted November 28, 2012 Report Share Posted November 28, 2012 I used this pic once for a card...lol Anyway, this card is quite overpowered. Maybe you should make it's effect do much less damage to your opponent because this is like a summon-and-win card, which really isn't balanced. You should take away the effect that causes all "cards" on the field to be destroyed and your card will look much better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YugiohNewb Posted November 28, 2012 Author Report Share Posted November 28, 2012 okay guys i can see that i have made many OCG errors but it was like 11:00pm i was really tired haha so i just wasn't really focusing very much on the card sorry haha. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YugiohNewb Posted November 29, 2012 Author Report Share Posted November 29, 2012 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zazubat Posted November 29, 2012 Report Share Posted November 29, 2012 uhhh, was gonna say I kinda like this card, but it gains 500 for each dragon. That makes it already have 2500 the turn it's summoned. Plus the tuner and monster required could easily be dragunity cards which can boost it up ABC, you realize that a simple Poly could summon it, just requiring the synchro. MSF is a good one too, but it may be harder to get Blue Eyes on the field or grave. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YugiohNewb Posted November 29, 2012 Author Report Share Posted November 29, 2012 oh ok thanks lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Twilight Knight Posted November 29, 2012 Report Share Posted November 29, 2012 I love the design. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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