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[font=courier new,courier,monospace][b][i]I am very new at this and need help on the little things for my cards. I need opinion on the grammar and how much more improvement on the illustrations I created... Help?[/i][/b][/font]

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The first line should be like Contract With the Abyss: This card can be used to [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Ritual_Summon"]Ritual Summon[/url] any [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/DARK"]DARK[/url] [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Ritual_Monster"]Ritual Monster[/url]. (Replace DARK Ritual Monster with the name of your card.) The text about the Level should be similar to "You must also [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Tribute"]Tribute[/url] [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Monster_Card"]monsters[/url] from your [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Hand"]hand[/url] or [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Playing_Field"]field[/url] whose total [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Level"]Levels[/url] equal 8 or more."

The other effect could probably be like Dawn of the Herald's text: When "Herald of Perfection" is Ritual Summoned by this card's [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Card_effect"]effect[/url]: You can [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Banish"]banish[/url] this card from your [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Graveyard"]Graveyard[/url] to [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Target"]target[/url] 1 of the monsters in your Graveyard that was Tributed for that Ritual Summon; [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Return"]return[/url] that target to your hand. (Replace Herald of Perfection with your monster, and the effect to return a monster to your hand with "target 1 face-up card on the field; destroy that target." Removing the banish cost is optional.)

Now, for someone to judge the card, we would need to see the Ritual Monster and what it can do. This card is interesting in the fact that it does more than Ritual Summon only one monster in the entire game, since usually, they're Ritual Summoned with Advanced Ritual Art instead (or are Gishkis). The effect that destroys a card doesn't look like it could be broken unless the Ritual Monster very powerful for something that requires so much effort to get out.

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Haha, I would love to show you the rest, I planned on posting seven more cards (including its Ritual monster) but they don't seem to be showing up... By the way, any issues with the picture itself?