twistedproto00 Posted December 6, 2012 Report Share Posted December 6, 2012 [size=6]Heres the 1st card i made for my Dragusstridos Deck[/size] [img]http://img404.imageshack.us/img404/9898/drgstdsdrkrdeyes.jpg[/img] [center][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)][size=5]Please tell me if its good and if i need to edit it a little![/size][/background][/center] [center][color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)][size=5]THANKS![/size][/background][/size][/font][/color][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SynchroTuner Posted December 6, 2012 Report Share Posted December 6, 2012 Cannot say anything without the set. IMO This card, in itself is extremely, extremely situational and would almost never be used, except if your deck revolves around Red-Eyes and its destruction, treating other monsters as red-eyes. The atk is ok for level 8, but tributing 2 monsters just to summon this, seems like a waste. Try to put another summon option like banishing a monster from the graveyard, discarding, etc. Also, is the effect compulsory? Seeing as how you have put it, we would tribute a monster regardless of whether we want or not.Your OCG(Official Card Grammar) needs to be fixed. Here it is- Once per turn: Tribute 1 DARK monster; Destroy 1 "Red-Eyes B. Dragon", if able. If you wanted to make the effect optional- Once per turn: You can tribute 1 DARK monster; Destroy 1 "Red-Eyes B. Dragon", if able. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aix Posted December 6, 2012 Report Share Posted December 6, 2012 This card is really useless. No one ever uses Red-Eyes B. Dragon. Why the heck would you want Red-Eyes? It's a vanilla 2400 ATK monster that requires 2 Tributes to Summon! Even Level 6's have more ATK than that! I don't quite understand why anyone would ever want to use this card, unless they were playing a friend who had made a Red-Eyes Deck for fun. I don't have much else to say about this card. If you want to make cards that would actually be used, I suggest you try playing Yu-Gi-Oh! a bit to get a feel for the game. Go on [url="http://www.duelingnetwork.com"]www.duelingnetwork.com[/url] and create a Deck there and play for at least a week or two in Rated before you make more cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SynchroTuner Posted December 6, 2012 Report Share Posted December 6, 2012 [quote name='AixDivadis' timestamp='1354796918' post='6086678'] This card is really useless. No one ever uses Red-Eyes B. Dragon. Why the heck would you want Red-Eyes? It's a vanilla 2400 ATK monster that requires 2 Tributes to Summon! Even Level 6's have more ATK than that! I don't quite understand why anyone would ever want to use this card, unless they were playing a friend who had made a Red-Eyes Deck for fun. I don't have much else to say about this card. If you want to make cards that would actually be used, I suggest you try playing Yu-Gi-Oh! a bit to get a feel for the game. Go on [url="http://www.duelingnetwork.com"]www.duelingnetwork.com[/url] and create a Deck there and play for at least a week or two in Rated before you make more cards. [/quote] Dude, give the guy some space. You can see that he is new. Instead of posting like that, you could be more polite. Perhaps he is making a deck which revolves around destroying our own red-eyes and using Spell/Trap card's effect. I know you are right, but still. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gawayn Posted December 7, 2012 Report Share Posted December 7, 2012 don't use that picture Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
twistedproto00 Posted December 7, 2012 Author Report Share Posted December 7, 2012 uh.. why? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SynchroTuner Posted December 7, 2012 Report Share Posted December 7, 2012 I see you edited your card, but you must mention the place from where you can summon the card and the place from whreer you can banish the card to summon it.-- Can be Special Summoned(from your hand) by banishing 1 "Dragusstridos" monster from your hand or Graveyard. Once per turn:--- @Gawayn Your review is pretty much useless. Try to say the reason for which you are saying that the card should not use that as the picture. Did you did not like it, or something else? Try to post something which can help the person's card. If you ever get above 100 posts, you will have to post reviews more tha 45 words long, so get into the habit of that right now. Read the Advance Clause and the rules. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Marouanos Posted December 7, 2012 Report Share Posted December 7, 2012 Hey all ^^ ^^ ^^ ^^ ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
twistedproto00 Posted December 7, 2012 Author Report Share Posted December 7, 2012 OK... im editing it right now. Im putting in an optional effect in to just in case there is No red eyes b. The back up effect is destroying 1 LIGHT MONSTER on the field. Better? I also edited the OCG Also check out my Gate Keeper supports but make sure to pick the one with the arrow pointing at it on its right saying THIS ONE [size=6]or.. [/size] Link to my [size=5][font=arial, helvetica, sans-serif][url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/293986-gate-keeper-support-this-one/"]Gate Keeper supports[/url][/font][/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VictorSempra Posted December 7, 2012 Report Share Posted December 7, 2012 [quote name='Marouanos' timestamp='1354878850' post='6087479'] Hey all ^^ ^^ ^^ ^^ ^^ [/quote]Don't try to thread-jack. Make your own thread for your cards please.And now, to rate the card. I can't say I'm overly fond of this card. For the awesome Red-Eyes art (And I beleive you were the one who posted the metal one as well? Correct me if I'm wrong), it's actually an anti-Red Eyes card. The problem with that is, nobody in the current meta touches Red Eyes or anything related to it, really. Seeing support for it would be awesome, because I'm a Red Eyes FANATIC (I still have my Red Eyes/Burn deck somewhere, it actually works for the most part). I would say either remove that part completely, or have it in some way be a Red Eyes support. UNLESS this card is made for a fanfic in which it's directly opposing a Red Eyes deck, then this would be fine. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
twistedproto00 Posted December 7, 2012 Author Report Share Posted December 7, 2012 [quote name='Maxxion' timestamp='1354894466' post='6087539'] Don't try to thread-jack. Make your own thread for your cards please. And now, to rate the card. I can't say I'm overly fond of this card. For the awesome Red-Eyes art (And I beleive you were the one who posted the metal one as well? Correct me if I'm wrong), it's actually an anti-Red Eyes card. The problem with that is, nobody in the current meta touches Red Eyes or anything related to it, really. Seeing support for it would be awesome, because I'm a Red Eyes FANATIC (I still have my Red Eyes/Burn deck somewhere, it actually works for the most part). I would say either remove that part completely, or have it in some way be a Red Eyes support. UNLESS this card is made for a fanfic in which it's directly opposing a Red Eyes deck, then this would be fine. [/quote] Well, its DARK RED EYES not just plain old red eyes. And yes the thread maybe a messed up a little bit beacuse im new here. And yes again, i made and posted the [url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/293918-red-eyes-metal-dragon/page__p__6087162#entry6087162"]Reds Eyes Metal Dragon[/url]. Well those 2 cards are in seperate decks that im making. Just to correct you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
twistedproto00 Posted December 11, 2012 Author Report Share Posted December 11, 2012 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Agro Posted December 11, 2012 Report Share Posted December 11, 2012 Wow this thread is bad. I'm going to talk on a post by post basis for this one Post #1. It's impossible to judge this card based upon the fact that you have posted ZERO "Dragusstridos" cards. We don't know what it can do until you show is the Archetype it's in. Also, that image is already an ACTUAL card art for Red-Eyes B. Dragon, but that's hardly relevant. Most importantly, why would I ever want to destroy "Red-Eyes B. Dragon"? What point is there to that? The LIGHT part of it is pretty mediocre too. Ally of Justices do the same thing better and they are TERRIBLE. Post #2. This is a decent post #3. They'd learn faster in TCG or the Deck section than Duelingnetwork. Also Hieratics can play REBD if they want, so yeah. #4. He's being fairy lax in his criticism. Everything- virtually everything- he said was correct. It doesn't matter what it's SUPPOSED to do if there's no actual need to do it. #5. You're not helping. #6. Because it's already card art for a real card. Behold the original Red-Eyes B. Dragon: [img]http://images1.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20101013203743/yugioh/images/thumb/a/ad/RedEyesBDragon-T3-JP-UR.jpg/321px-RedEyesBDragon-T3-JP-UR.jpg[/img] #7. Oh right, I forgot to do all the OCG fixes for this card. Here you are: [indent=1]"You can Special Summon this card (from your hand) by banishing 1 face-up "Dragusstridos" monster you control. Once per turn: You can tribute 1 DARK monster to target 1 face-up "Red-Eyes B. Dragon" or 1 face-up LIGHT monster on the field; destroy it."[/indent] #8. Die in a fire. Then read all the pinned rules and tutorials. Then try posting again. #9. Don't advertise for another of your threads here. People will get to them if they see them. My opinion on the edited effect has already been stated. #10. Oh, it's you. Again, I'm going to point out that none of us should even be rating/commenting/givingsuggestionsfor this card until we can see the set it was made to be played in. #11. Red-Eyes is already Dark. :\ #12. A bump. That's actually the most sensible post in this thread. Most important responses are numbers 1, 3, 7, & 9 if you thought it was tl;dr. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
twistedproto00 Posted December 18, 2012 Author Report Share Posted December 18, 2012 1st of all, im going to be not going to be here FOR A LONG WHILE because im playing W.O.T<---------got clan wars: [url="http://www.worldoftanks.com"]www.worldoftanks.com[/url] and i cant update anything right now. SOOOOO.. if you need anything to tell me about my topics give me a MESSAGE..[quote name='Agro' timestamp='1355212419' post='6090509'] Wow this thread is bad. I'm going to talk on a post by post basis for this one Post #1. It's impossible to judge this card based upon the fact that you have posted ZERO "Dragusstridos" cards. We don't know what it can do until you show is the Archetype it's in. Also, that image is already an ACTUAL card art for Red-Eyes B. Dragon, but that's hardly relevant. Most importantly, why would I ever want to destroy "Red-Eyes B. Dragon"? What point is there to that? The LIGHT part of it is pretty mediocre too. Ally of Justices do the same thing better and they are TERRIBLE. Post #2. This is a decent post #3. They'd learn faster in TCG or the Deck section than Duelingnetwork. Also Hieratics can play REBD if they want, so yeah. #4. He's being fairy lax in his criticism. Everything- virtually everything- he said was correct. It doesn't matter what it's SUPPOSED to do if there's no actual need to do it. #5. You're not helping. #6. Because it's already card art for a real card. Behold the original Red-Eyes B. Dragon: [img]http://images1.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20101013203743/yugioh/images/thumb/a/ad/RedEyesBDragon-T3-JP-UR.jpg/321px-RedEyesBDragon-T3-JP-UR.jpg[/img] #7. Oh right, I forgot to do all the OCG fixes for this card. Here you are: [indent=1]"You can Special Summon this card (from your hand) by banishing 1 face-up "Dragusstridos" monster you control. Once per turn: You can tribute 1 DARK monster to target 1 face-up "Red-Eyes B. Dragon" or 1 face-up LIGHT monster on the field; destroy it."[/indent] #8. Die in a fire. Then read all the pinned rules and tutorials. Then try posting again. #9. Don't advertise for another of your threads here. People will get to them if they see them. My opinion on the edited effect has already been stated. #10. Oh, it's you. Again, I'm going to point out that none of us should even be rating/commenting/givingsuggestionsfor this card until we can see the set it was made to be played in. #11. Red-Eyes is already Dark. :\ #12. A bump. That's actually the most sensible post in this thread. Most important responses are numbers 1, 3, 7, & 9 if you thought it was tl;dr. [/quote] BESIDES I POSTED THIS WHEN I STARTED THIS CM. HOW WOULD I KNOW! CAPS? WTVR! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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