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You have done an amazing job with these cards. I would go through each one, but that would take up too much time. Not that I don't want to, but I did give each one a quick glance, and they seem fine. I noticed you matched the effects with their super powers. I really like that. Well you seem like pro card maker, so I'm not going to even look for corrections. I will review the last card you made.

Moon Knight's effect is very unique. Never heard of the hero, but he looks awesome. I checked his super powers, and since face-down cards are dark. That's were the clever effect comes in. Excellent job though.

What software are you using to make those cards because this site's card maker is not working.

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In case you're wondering, I'm Xi-3. Unfortunately Facebook accounts are no longer linked. Fortunately I have now validated my original account. Now to continue where I left off.

It appears that "Beast Boy" does not take the ATK or DEF or the animal into which he's shifted. Or am I reading the effect wrong?

I like Green Arrow's ability to do different things based on what type of card you discard. It makes me think of his and Hawkeye's trick arrows. I'm not sure about the one for Trap Cards, though, because you made it so it cannot be negated or destroyed. I do not believe Green Arrow, being a non-meta, should have such an ability. Also, why make the names longer than they have to be? Do you plan on making another "Green Arrow" card, perhaps? Same with "Iron Man," I suppose. He does have enough different armours. Or did, before he had to melt them all down.

For Iron Man, and for all monsters in general I find blanket immunity to more than 1 type of card effect to be highly suspect. This is where I either choose 1 or include a 'cool down period' in the effect. I think I have mentioned that before. I have used 'once per turn,' 'every other turn,' and 'every 3 turns.' Another one I have used is where you discard a card from your hand, Deck, or maybe even choose between them to activate the negation effect. Iron Man's cool-down should really depend on which armour he's got, since they each do something different, and they all are at different levels of sophistication.

For "Black Panther," I think you need to get rid of the inaccurate second name, and give him an effect: T'Challa understands both technology and the arcane, and his Vibranium Daggers are extremely useful as weapons, being both powerful and versatile. He is a genius surpassing Tony Stark in some ways, and unlike Tony he learned his cunning on the streets -- beside Ororo Munroe, better known as Storm.

I like that "Moon Knight" has an effect that depends on him being in the Graveyard to use it. Perhaps, as well, you could find a way to bring in his multiple personalities, like changing his Type or swapping his ATK and DEF. Apparently the personalities let him do different tasks. I don't know much else about it.

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[quote name='Xi-1' timestamp='1357480911' post='6112858']
In case you're wondering, I'm Xi-3. Unfortunately Facebook accounts are no longer linked. Fortunately I have now validated my original account. Now to continue where I left off.

It appears that "Beast Boy" does not take the ATK or DEF or the animal into which he's shifted. Or am I reading the effect wrong?

[b]You're right, he doesn't otherwise that would make him WAY too overpowered. If he were to be made into a real card he would be used as Xyz Fodder, seeing as he can fulfill level requirements, attribute requirements, and type requirements fairly easily.[/b]

I like Green Arrow's ability to do different things based on what type of card you discard. It makes me think of his and Hawkeye's trick arrows. I'm not sure about the one for Trap Cards, though, because you made it so it cannot be negated or destroyed. I do not believe Green Arrow, being a non-meta, should have such an ability. Also, why make the names longer than they have to be? Do you plan on making another "Green Arrow" card, perhaps? Same with "Iron Man," I suppose. He does have enough different armours. Or did, before he had to melt them all down.

[b]That's just to make him more useful. In my eyes, non-metas are far superior to metas, just because they can save the day without powers. Green Arrow has trick arrows just the same as Hawk Eye does. The reason I said no card effects in response is so that your opponent cannot activate the card you were planning to destroy. Just makes him useful. As for the longer names, I think it gives them more characters. I've that with most of the names. 'Batman, the Dark Knight' 'Flash, the Fastest Man Alive' 'Spiderman, the Webcrawler'. It just makes them more interesting. [/b]

For Iron Man, and for all monsters in general I find blanket immunity to more than 1 type of card effect to be highly suspect. This is where I either choose 1 or include a 'cool down period' in the effect. I think I have mentioned that before. I have used 'once per turn,' 'every other turn,' and 'every 3 turns.' Another one I have used is where you discard a card from your hand, Deck, or maybe even choose between them to activate the negation effect. Iron Man's cool-down should really depend on which armour he's got, since they each do something different, and they all are at different levels of sophistication.

[b]I believe the summoning conditions make up for the lack of restriction on the immunity. If I do decide to make the other armors into cards, they will more than likely be Spell or Trap Cards that can go along with Iron Man. [/b]

For "Black Panther," I think you need to get rid of the inaccurate second name, and give him an effect: T'Challa understands both technology and the arcane, and his Vibranium Daggers are extremely useful as weapons, being both powerful and versatile. He is a genius surpassing Tony Stark in some ways, and unlike Tony he learned his cunning on the streets -- beside Ororo Munroe, better known as Storm.

[b]I understand that he is incredibly intelligent and an awesome fighter. But so are a lot of super heroes. Every set needs a good Normal Monster. As for the secondary name, I got it from here [/b]http://marvel.com/universe/Black_Panther_(T'Challa)

I like that "Moon Knight" has an effect that depends on him being in the Graveyard to use it. Perhaps, as well, you could find a way to bring in his multiple personalities, like changing his Type or swapping his ATK and DEF. Apparently the personalities let him do different tasks. I don't know much else about it.

[b]It's a good idea. But I'm finding that if you try to incorporate too many different effects in a card you either get one that is stupidly broken, underpowered, or unusable. [/b]
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Thanks for the comment.

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