.:Blu:. Posted January 4, 2013 Report Share Posted January 4, 2013 Well, I made it originally for a 1v1 contest but someone else got the challenger spot before me so I might as well post this for some comments/creative criticisms. This card is support for "Chaos" monsters namely Chaos Sorcerer and Black Luster Soldier. [center][IMG]http://i812.photobucket.com/albums/zz46/wirespy/ChaosVoidSmall_zpsbf059c0b.png[/IMG] [i][b]Lore[/b]: Pay 1000 Life Points to activate 1 of these effects; • Send 1 LIGHT and 1 DARK monster from your hand or Deck to the Graveyard. • Add 1 “Chaos” monster from your Deck or Graveyard to your hand.[/i][/center] [b]Enjoy~[/b] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nathanael D. Striker Posted January 4, 2013 Report Share Posted January 4, 2013 So I get to pay 1000 Life Points for a BLS? That or a free Chaos Sorcerer in my hand knowing I have the material ready to Summon it? If I were you, I would add a clause that prevents you from Special Summoning the turn you use this card and that you can only activate this once per turn. Cause the way I see this, this will turn the game in your favor by simply playing it. By having the clause, it would give your opponent somewhat of a chance to respond because the effect is reading "Pay 1000 (or 2000 depending on if you use a second copy) Life Points; Special Summon 1 'Black Luster Soldier- Envoy of the Beginning' or 'Chaos Sorcerer' from your hand." You get what I'm saying? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Blu:. Posted January 4, 2013 Author Report Share Posted January 4, 2013 [quote name='Striker' timestamp='1357282201' post='6110757'] "Pay 1000 (or 2000 depending on if you use a second copy) Life Points; Special Summon 1 'Black Luster Soldier- Envoy of the Beginning' or 'Chaos Sorcerer' from your hand." You get what I'm saying? [/quote] lol that's about right. Thanks ^^ I'll wait to see if others have similar comments before making the change. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NoshpalStefan Posted January 4, 2013 Report Share Posted January 4, 2013 I agree with Striker, this card just makes the Game so unbalanced and in favor of one of the players that it's almost ridiculous. However, this can be fixed by simply adding another cost except the 1000 LP. For an example, you could say something like Pot of Duality's case, the turn you activate this card, you cannot special summon. I think that would balance this out. Also, I know this is meant for "Chaos" cards, but I can't help and think what this card could do like this in a Lightsworn deck with the first effect. I mean seriously, 1000 LP for a Wulf and a Plaguespreader or a Wulf and a Necro Gardna. Honestly, just too much for 1000 LP. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Althemia Posted January 4, 2013 Report Share Posted January 4, 2013 [quote name='Striker' timestamp='1357282201' post='6110757'] So I get to pay 1000 Life Points for a BLS? That or a free Chaos Sorcerer in my hand knowing I have the material ready to Summon it? If I were you, I would add a clause that prevents you from Special Summoning the turn you use this card and that you can only activate this once per turn. Cause the way I see this, this will turn the game in your favor by simply playing it. By having the clause, it would give your opponent somewhat of a chance to respond because the effect is reading "Pay 1000 (or 2000 depending on if you use a second copy) Life Points; Special Summon 1 'Black Luster Soldier- Envoy of the Beginning' or 'Chaos Sorcerer' from your hand." You get what I'm saying? [/quote] You can't get Black Luster Soldier because it isn't a "Chaos" monster. This card is pretty stupidly designed though. It will mainly be used for the first effect, just because it's a foolish burial on crack for decks like Lightsworn and Chaos Piper just because it sets you up for the rest of the game which isn't good [i]at all[/i]. One card set-up should be frowned upon and should be never be attempted, just like this card. Second effect is honestly just worse. Considering how the Chaos monsters can be some of the more imbalanced cards in the game, being able to get what Chaos monster you want seems stupid. Pay 1000 for a Chaos Sorcerer? Sure, that seems like perfectly fine design! Dunno how good it'd be in the actual game though, with Chaos Sorc @1. It'd be good just for the first effect in decks that need the mill power like crazy, but I think I rarely see the last effect ever being used. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nathanael D. Striker Posted January 4, 2013 Report Share Posted January 4, 2013 [quote name='Oh my Amaterasu!' timestamp='1357318057' post='6111020'] You can't get Black Luster Soldier because it isn't a "Chaos" monster. [/quote] >Black Luster Soldier in hand >Play this to set up Graveyard >??? >PROFIT That is basically the reasoning behind the 1000 Life Point BLS comment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Blu:. Posted January 4, 2013 Author Report Share Posted January 4, 2013 Point taken. Thanks for the advice. Just got back into cardmaking after quite some time so I need to get a feel for things again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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