Will-O-Wisp[Single Challenge 1/100]

[Ren✧]

Destroy 1 FIRE monster on your field or in your hand; Target up to 2 face-down cards your opponent controls. Look at the Targeted cards and select 1 of them. The selected card cannot be activated until the End Phase. Cards cannot be activated in response to this effect. The effect of "Will-o-Wisp" can only be activated once per turn.

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Well I haven't made realistic cards in awhile, but I am hoping to change that. I am going to be taking a challenge, taking place the rest of the year, in which I make 100 Singles by 2014. The card probably needs a lot of work, but I think it supports the play style of at least some of the recent FIRE archetypes released. I am sure my OCG could use some work as well. 

 

As always CONSTRUCTIVE criticism is ALWAYS appreciated. REPS will be given to GOOD reviews.

[Ren✧]

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So that bad huh? Help? Please...

[Ren✧]

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[jarkono41]

It's literally this. Like, No joke, it is quite literally

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1/10, good grammar, no originality.

[Ren✧]

It's literally this. Like, No joke, it is quite literally

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1/10, good grammar, no originality.

 

 

Okay well how about some constructive criticism...instead of just criticism. You offered no help what so ever. 

 

I agree that it is similar to those three cards, and probably quite a few others, it is different and you can pretty much relate any card created on this site to an actual Yu-Gi-Oh card. So how about some help?

[Gredious AKA. Solomon409]

Love the Image, really has a "Classic" Yugioh feel to it.
10/10 For Pic

Effect is nice, I could care less about seeing the cards, however its nice i can paralyze any trap holes or such to give me an opening. I have never used FIRE decks before, simply because I prefer my Banishing deck, so I don't understand the synergy this card may have with the recent Fire Archetypes.
7/10 for Effect

Grammar is perfect as far as i can tell, so 10/10

So overall I would give it a 9/10.

[magemeek22]

I am going to say that this card has the potential to be incredibly overpowered, which wouldn't be too good since those Garunix decks would become incredibly overpowered with this card. Often times, FIRE decks rely on destroying their own cards, especially the Fire Avatar decks, and their effects proc in the Graveyard. Thus this card would have a very limited cost - if you see what i'm saying - and would allow for crazy combos that would be too overwhelming for the opponent since their face-downs would be rendered useless. I would suggest changing the effect so only ONE spell/trap can be blocked instead of two, or remove the entire "blocking concept" and just have the card give vision of your opponent's face-downs.

 

Thus, the card needs balancing issues, especially since certain Decks can exploit it beyond compare. Regardless, I really do like the concept of the card and the artwork is fantastic. Plus, the OCG is near flawless, so props for that. I just would recommend thinking over the potential of this card in Avatar decks and somehow make it so that it doesn't lead to a win-win situation. But still, good job!

[Ren✧]

@Gredious: The reason I let you see is to better fit the idea of a Will-O-Wisp, which is a ghostly light so I just tried to tie that in. It fits with the Fire Types because with the recent release of the Fire Avatars, you want your monsters to be destroyed by card effects.

 

@magemeek: Will do some nerfing. Editing will commence immediately. Thanks for the review.

 

 

EDIT: Edited it slightly. I kept you being able to look at both the card's, but then you can only block one. Also, only 1 Will-o-Wisp to be activated per turn.