Ren✧ Posted February 18, 2013 Report Share Posted February 18, 2013 Well as requested, I have made some more Crystal Beast Support. This time a tuner. I realize there is no Crystal Beast exclusive Synchro monsters...but who's to say that won't change *wink*wink*. Can be Special Summoned(from Hand) if you control 1 or more face-up Continuous Spell Cards. Cannot be used as an Xyz Material Monster. Once per turn: You can send the top card of your Deck to the Graveyard; this card's Level becomes equal to the number of face-up Continuous Spell Cards you control, until the End Phase. If you do not control any face-up Fusion, Synchro, or Xyz Monsters, you can use "Crystal Beast" cards in your Spell and Trap Card Zone as Synchro Material Monsters with this card. Honestly the effect seems a bit awkward to me. It seems to cluttered. Any ideas on how to organize it better? Is there anything unneeded in the effect? As always, OCG help and CONSTRUCTIVE criticism are always appreciated. REPS will be given to good/helpful reviews. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkneptune Posted February 19, 2013 Report Share Posted February 19, 2013 ok, lets start with the name and image. excellent choice for both. very nice. now for effects cannot be used as xyz material: pretty good since you made it a tuner, which mean its purpose is solely for synchro summoning. sending 1 continuous spell to your deck really doesnt help the crystal beast theme. also since you get rid of 1 and his level becomes the same as the remaining, it would mean you would need a good amount of spells active. what i would do is, either increase his level by the level of the remaining spells, or send the top card of your deck so its level becomes the level of the remaining spells the last efect i think it ok, just instead of saying on your side of the field you might wanna try on your spell/trap zone my OCG isnt very good so all i can really do to help is to suggest you go check other cards with similar effects so you have an idea how to write it. for example Dragon Queen of Tragic Endings can be special summoned when there are continuous spell cards on the field. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ren✧ Posted February 19, 2013 Author Report Share Posted February 19, 2013 ok, lets start with the name and image. excellent choice for both. very nice. now for effects cannot be used as xyz material: pretty good since you made it a tuner, which mean its purpose is solely for synchro summoning. sending 1 continuous spell to your deck really doesnt help the crystal beast theme. also since you get rid of 1 and his level becomes the same as the remaining, it would mean you would need a good amount of spells active. what i would do is, either increase his level by the level of the remaining spells, or send the top card of your deck so its level becomes the level of the remaining spells the last efect i think it ok, just instead of saying on your side of the field you might wanna try on your spell/trap zone my OCG isnt very good so all i can really do to help is to suggest you go check other cards with similar effects so you have an idea how to write it. for example Dragon Queen of Tragic Endings can be special summoned when there are continuous spell cards on the field. Alright I edited the effect, I made it so it sends the top card of your deck. The reason there is so much to do with Continuous Spell Cards, is because the Crystal Beasts in your S/T card zones are counted as Continuous Spell Cards, so yeah. But you were right, it is better to keep it this way. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkneptune Posted February 19, 2013 Report Share Posted February 19, 2013 i know, i am a gigantic crystal beast freak, even though im not doing card games anymore. still anytime i see a card game i ask if it has anything similar to crystal beasts, if not, it most likely sucks, lol...ok not as far as it sucks, but i always ask Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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