[I may have gone too far this time]Crystal Beast Rainbow Quartz Wolf[Single Challenge 7/100]

[Ren✧]

Okay...so in my recent spree of Crystal Beast Supports, it was just a matter of time till I made an Xyz...so without further ado. Crystal Beast Rainbow Quartz Wolf.

 

[spoiler=Amongst the ordinary, is the extraordinary. Amongst the normal, is the special. Amongst the beasts, is the king.]

 

2 Level 4 or Level 3 "Crystal Beast" monsters

This card's Rank is treated as that of the Xyz Material Monsters. Xyz Material Monsters that are detached from this card are counted as being destroyed while in the Monster Card Zone. If this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard; Add "Rainbow Dragon" or "Rainbow Dark Dragon" from your Deck or Graveyard to your hand. This card gains 1 of the appropriate effects, depending on its Rank:

●3: Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material Monster from this card; Target 1 face-up "Crystal Beast" Continuous Spell Card. Increase this card's ATK equal to the ATK of the targeted monster until your opponent's next End Phase.

●4: You can detach 2 Xyz Material Monsters from this card; Place up to 2 different "Crystal Beast" monsters in your Deck in your Spell and Trap Card Zones as face-up Continous Spell Cards. 

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So yeah, there you have it. OCG help and CONSTRUCTIVE criticism is ALWAYS appreciated. REPS will be given to good/helpful reviews.

[Darkneptune]

i dont like that you used so much from my card to make this one, though i do understand how difficult it is to find good images, but still even the name ATK and summon clause?

 

as for the effect, i think simply being sent to the graveyard to search for the dragon it a bit strong, maybe make it, when it is destroyed by battle and sent to the graveyard.

 

the rank 3 effect is ok but you should make the increase last until the end phase, or, make it dissapear during the end phase of the turn it doesnt have any more xyz material

 

the rank 4 effect is a bit much, id say lower to 2 instead. also it should say that you choose the cards 'from' your deck not in it.

 

its not a bad card but i cant really say its very original... no offense :(

[Ren✧]

i dont like that you used so much from my card to make this one, though i do understand how difficult it is to find good images, but still even the name ATK and summon clause?

 

as for the effect, i think simply being sent to the graveyard to search for the dragon it a bit strong, maybe make it, when it is destroyed by battle and sent to the graveyard.

 

the rank 3 effect is ok but you should make the increase last until the end phase, or, make it dissapear during the end phase of the turn it doesnt have any more xyz material

 

the rank 4 effect is a bit much, id say lower to 2 instead. also it should say that you choose the cards 'from' your deck not in it.

 

its not a bad card but i cant really say its very original... no offense :(

 

 

I actually I hadn't even read your card's effect. Just its name, and I tried to change it a little by adding Rainbow to it...but I mean I already had this card in the works before I ever saw you card.

 

Woops, I meant to make the ATK gain temporary. Will change.

 

Yeah, I just realized that with the detachment of the cards going to the Spell and Trap Card Zone too that it would almost completely fulfill the requirements for dragon. I changed it so that it just has to be simply destroyed instead of sent. 

 

But as for originality, our cards are pretty different. Sure same pic and similar name, but the effects are different. 

[Darkneptune]

ooooohhhhh, in that case, i suppose great minds think alike.

still its nice to see someone else who doesnt spend their time verbally bashing crystal beasts and actually supports them

[Ren✧]

ooooohhhhh, in that case, i suppose great minds think alike.

still its nice to see someone else who doesnt spend their time verbally bashing crystal beasts and actually supports them

 

 

Well I will have to admit that Crystal Beasts don't stand much of a chance in the current format, but at one time they were quite competitive and it is lulzy to use Hamon and Dragon Queen with these guys. Anteatereatinggiantant is fun with them too. They are for more casual play now. 

[Darkneptune]

true but they are, oh, so fun!

[Ren✧]

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