OCG Posted March 12, 2008 Report Share Posted March 12, 2008 This is my 4th card on this site:D [i do not own the artwork used for my cards. I only use them as a means of increasing the overall quality and effect of my work. I do not claim ownership of them.] deviantART Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yaden Yuki Posted March 12, 2008 Report Share Posted March 12, 2008 pretty good but not the best i see some errors but its ok for your 4th one 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OCG Posted March 12, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 12, 2008 Thanks I just want to know how to improve. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LewieGee Posted March 12, 2008 Report Share Posted March 12, 2008 ya, some errors, but for your 4th card ever, kewl. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted March 12, 2008 Report Share Posted March 12, 2008 Tis not bad, well done, just improve on your OCG a little; card is a little basic too. Also remove the signature from picture; i can do that, drop me a private message. 7.56/12.34 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SebastiaanZ Posted March 12, 2008 Report Share Posted March 12, 2008 Put a disclaimer on the picture if it is not yours. Some OCG and grammar errors, defense should be defence, I think. 6.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LewieGee Posted March 12, 2008 Report Share Posted March 12, 2008 IT DEPENDS WHERE YOU LIVE US = DEFENSEUK = DEFENCE (I THINK) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SebastiaanZ Posted March 12, 2008 Report Share Posted March 12, 2008 I don't live in either. I live in Holland and I use defence on my cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OCG Posted March 12, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 12, 2008 I live in the US Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LewieGee Posted March 12, 2008 Report Share Posted March 12, 2008 OK, whatever - all i know it that it's spelt DEFENCE in the UK and DEFENSE in the US. I'm not sure about anywhere alse. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parting Shot Posted March 12, 2008 Report Share Posted March 12, 2008 I do believe that OCG states "defense position" (see this page for confirmation). Anyway, I like the card, though it might sound better if you word it like this:"While this card is face-up on the field, all face-up monsters (except this card) are switched to Defense Position." overall - 12.82/13.69 ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OCG Posted March 12, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 12, 2008 Oh can I use that and fix the card?EDIT:fixed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gustavosuarez Posted March 12, 2008 Report Share Posted March 12, 2008 very good card for the 4TH. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Faded Posted March 12, 2008 Report Share Posted March 12, 2008 8/10 nice attempt [for your 4th] and your foreign so you must have to try extra hard to get the wording right. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OCG Posted March 12, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 12, 2008 Your right! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OCG Posted March 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 13, 2008 BUMP! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted March 13, 2008 Report Share Posted March 13, 2008 OCG - OCG errors.lol. good idea. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OCG Posted March 14, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 14, 2008 Thanks could you tell me where they are? I wanna know how to improve:) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OCG Posted March 15, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 15, 2008 bumpity bump bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OCG Posted March 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 16, 2008 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grayall Posted March 16, 2008 Report Share Posted March 16, 2008 how i hate bumping...The cards are good. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeroshot Posted March 16, 2008 Report Share Posted March 16, 2008 When this card is face-up on your side of the field all monsters excluding this monster are switched to DEF position. From my understanding of the effect that is how it could be worded better Im tired so im not really sure EDIT: Gray, you spammed the picture's artists signiture should be removed. It looks more professional and did you rate this thread 5 stars? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OCG Posted March 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 16, 2008 Nope I didn't must have been someone else wait the thread is rated 5 stars :evil: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeroshot Posted March 16, 2008 Report Share Posted March 16, 2008 Nope I didn't must have been someone else wait the thread is rated 5 stars :evil: good cause if you would of done it then that would of been just sad and sorry for the spam Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grayall Posted March 16, 2008 Report Share Posted March 16, 2008 Yeah, and i believed. Also i didnt spam...Look more... :DRating the thread in 5 is dumb too... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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