Derp Hell Dog

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My Seccond letter,

 

[L0SS]

Your second letter? It's also completely unrealistic, from the type, the OCG, and the relevance to the card game 'Yu-Gi-Oh!' What, for instance, is a 'scene'? Why did you need to inform us that 'This is Derp Hell Dog'? Surely that is evident from the card name. Why is his type 'Almost-Mega'?

Please, post this kind of stuff in Any Other Cards, or better, not at all.

[AGATHODAIMON BANGTAIL COW]

This has the problem of being a fake Type as your first one. http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Type is a list of Types that are used (the Divine-Beast one isn't realistic though, nor are others not on the first group of Types such as Immortal or Human).

 

I don't really understand the effect that well. I think you're using this to Special Summon that Demon Lord I posted on not too long ago? If so, it needs to be included in this thread (or at least give a link to it). If you are Special Summoning it, where is it coming from? Your hand? Deck? Graveyard? Banish Zone? Some of these choices makes it where you would need a cost (such as paying Life Points or discarding a card) in order to make it where it isn't overpowered.

 

You also have it as a Toon, which doesn't make sense since it doesn't have the lore that the other Toons have, and it doesn't really fit into that category anyway.