Careless Whisper Posted March 13, 2008 Report Share Posted March 13, 2008 [align=center]I have no purpose anymore. Everything is gone from my grasp. No more shall I see happiness. No more will I last. My future is now clear to me.Like crystal water in the spring.My Sorrow will drive me deeper.Into the abyss, as my life gives it's last ring. My heart is forever lost.My soul is gone forever.My sorrow is only the beginning.As I encounter this painfull endeavor. No more hope for tears.My eyes are already dry.Though some will miss my existance.Others will watch me die.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RiffMaster Alex Posted March 13, 2008 Report Share Posted March 13, 2008 Great poem. It brought a tear to my eye.... + rep to you... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted March 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 13, 2008 thanks. I wrote it a few minutes ago. Originally a bullitin on myspace. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HORUS Posted March 13, 2008 Report Share Posted March 13, 2008 The only thing sorrowful about this poem is the lack of originality and the number of cliches. Not a good poem. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VladAshram Posted March 13, 2008 Report Share Posted March 13, 2008 it was a good poem. and it was sorrowful Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dryad Posted March 13, 2008 Report Share Posted March 13, 2008 Kawai even if a bit emo, though this is coming from someone who wrote a couple of sorrowful poems as well :lol: Its a very nice poem :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted March 13, 2008 Report Share Posted March 13, 2008 Nice poem, its really telling, well done. ^_^8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joenorman Posted March 13, 2008 Report Share Posted March 13, 2008 nice poem... bit emo'ish Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zoloa37 Posted March 13, 2008 Report Share Posted March 13, 2008 yeah, great poem. no + rep from me because i had the reborn part from your banner before you did and you know it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted March 14, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 14, 2008 ...sorry Zoloa37, you didn't make the character "The Dragon Reborn" so, no you didn't lol...and I made my own banner using different images from deviantart and then using microsoft paint to combine then together and then added text. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted March 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 16, 2008 bump...I really want to share this to the world... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HORUS Posted March 16, 2008 Report Share Posted March 16, 2008 Don't. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted March 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 16, 2008 What's your problem HORUS...Do you not like poetry or something? Well here's a thing, if you don't like it, then ignore it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grayall Posted March 16, 2008 Report Share Posted March 16, 2008 Emm, i think i started cry.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SpazzeOut Posted March 16, 2008 Report Share Posted March 16, 2008 I love this poem :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mariojo2 Posted March 16, 2008 Report Share Posted March 16, 2008 That was deep. Make some more. 10/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted March 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 16, 2008 I will, but it'll probably be another Emo poem. I am quite good at dark depressing poems, not to brag or anything Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted March 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 23, 2008 I just remembered about this poem...bump... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lilly white Posted March 24, 2008 Report Share Posted March 24, 2008 Aww this poem touched me ;-;Its a great poem i love it althought its a little bit sadishBut sad poems are mostly the best i think You should make more poems like that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted March 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 24, 2008 Thank you Yuri12. I probably will try to write another poem pretty soon, anyone else have any comments? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
irishpenguin101123456789 Posted April 5, 2008 Report Share Posted April 5, 2008 cool peom relly is deprseing why have you made me feel like nothing!! i feel like nothing now! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HORUS Posted April 5, 2008 Report Share Posted April 5, 2008 What's your problem HORUS...Do you not like poetry or something? Well here's a thing' date=' if you don't like it, then ignore it.[/quote'] I quite enjoy poetry. I do not, however, enjoy your 'poetry'. Poetry is a form of art. Your writing is no art. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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