Way too overdue [Kyngle]

[Kyng's Old Account]

It's long overdue since I made a card again, but I wanted to get a beautiful Card Template to do so. Well, now I have found and, after multiple tinkering, perfected my grasp over the wonderful Zextra's Custom Card Template, and will be using this one for the foreseeable future.

This card is, hopefully, to kick me back into gear in terms of Custom Card Creation, and also expresses my adoration for the Arthurian Noble Knights, whom I tend to main often. This Field Spell meets their needs quite well, however I dread it being in a potential overpowered grade.[hr]

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You can Normal Summon 1 LIGHT Normal Monster in addition to your Normal Summon/Set. Once per turn: you can activate one of the following effects: • You can add 1 "Noble Knight" monster from your Deck to your hand instead of conducting your normal draw. • You can target 1 face-up Equip Card you control and 1 card your opponent controls; destroy both targets.[hr]

[Kyng's Old Account]

Bump!

[Kyng's Old Account]

Bump.

[Sora1499]

In my opinion, the card does a little too much for too little.  You can put pieces on the board, search, and pop, all off of a single card which is searchable itself.  This is acceptable in context because it supports Noble Knights, an under-meta and rather cool archetype, but design-wise it seems a bit questionable to me.  I'm not entirely sure what fixes to give it though.  Maybe you could cut out one of the effects altogether?  I dunno.

[Kyng's Old Account]

In my opinion, the card does a little too much for too little.  You can put pieces on the board, search, and pop, all off of a single card which is searchable itself.  This is acceptable in context because it supports Noble Knights, an under-meta and rather cool archetype, but design-wise it seems a bit questionable to me.  I'm not entirely sure what fixes to give it though.  Maybe you could cut out one of the effects altogether?  I dunno.

Thank you so much for the review.

I hear what you're saying. I suppose having three individual effects do, in fact, give it an issue in terms of overpowering. After all, it is only a Field Spell. Do you reckon adding a "You must control 1 face-up "Noble Knight" " clause in order to use the last two effects might sort it out? If not, I think I'll simply have to remove the Searching ability.

[Sora1499]

You could do that or remove the search effect, it's up to you really.

[TRUE RULER^(Imper.Di )]

Reading the third effect I did believe it to be a bit much, For the third effect maybe you could create a separate Continuous Spell[even a normal spell]for it. There's a lot of S/T hate, but if you get to use the effect once or twice a duel you can be certain that it is not overpowered in the sense that it's impending doom is heightened. Otherwise I do like that its a positive resource to the Noble Knights, and Normal [LIGHT] monsters in general.