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Hmm, it's interesting.

 

I don't know of any relevant decks that have the capability to make this, although I do know that debris dragon is a card.  Perhaps disaster dragon?  I dunno.

 

Now, onto the design aspect of the card:

 

The +1 revival seems a bit iffy to me, akin to the Karakuri duo, and we all know what shenanigans they can cause given the opportunity.  If I were you, I'd negate the summoned monster's effects and prevent it from attacking during that turn.  I'd also put some sort of power cap on the monsters it can grab, such as level 4 or lower.  In addition, making this guy's effect only usable once per turn would be the better design choice, although it's not absolutely necessary.

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Hmm, it's interesting.

 

I don't know of any relevant decks that have the capability to make this, although I do know that debris dragon is a card.  Perhaps disaster dragon?  I dunno.

 

Now, onto the design aspect of the card:

 

The +1 revival seems a bit iffy to me, akin to the Karakuri duo, and we all know what shenanigans they can cause given the opportunity.  If I were you, I'd negate the summoned monster's effects and prevent it from attacking during that turn.  I'd also put some sort of power cap on the monsters it can grab, such as level 4 or lower.  In addition, making this guy's effect only usable once per turn would be the better design choice, although it's not absolutely necessary.

 

Wow, thanks again man! I'll have it updated in just a moment.

 

 

 

mJiMFau.jpg

 

 

 lore:

 

1 Dragon-Tuner + 1 or more Dragon type monsters.
Once per turn, you can pay 2000 LP, to Special Summon one level 4 or lower Dragon type monster from your graveyard; It's effects are negated and cannot declare an attack the turn it is Special Summoned this way. If you activate this effect, this card's ATK is halved at your End Phase.

Better?

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Wow, thanks again man! I'll have it updated in just a moment.

 

 

 

mJiMFau.jpg

 

 

 lore:

 

1 Dragon-Tuner + 1 or more Dragon type monsters.
Once per turn, you can pay 2000 LP, to Special Summon one level 4 or lower Dragon type monster from your graveyard; It's effects are negated and cannot declare an attack the turn it is Special Summoned this way. If you activate this effect, this card's ATK is halved at your End Phase.

Better?

Now it's perfectly fine, although I feel like you could get away with nixing the last clause.

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1 Dragon-Type Tuner + 1 or more Dragon-Type monsters
Once per turn: You can pay 2000 LP; Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower Dragon-Type monster from your Graveyard. Its effects are negated and cannot declare an attack the turn it was Special Summoned this way. If you activate this effect, this card's ATK is halved at your End Phase.

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I think you can get away with getting rid of the last effect. You already have to pay 2000 LP, which is nothing to sneeze at. Overall, it is a fairly blande card, nothing eye catching or particularly interesting about it. It does its job...but otherwise...meh. 6.5/10

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Better?

 

 

 

 

 

 

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1 Dragon-Tuner + 1 or more Dragon type monsters.
Once per turn, you can pay 1500 LP, to Special Summon one level 4 or lower Dragon type monster from your graveyard; It's effects are negated and cannot declare an attack the turn it is Special Summoned this way. During the turn you activate this effect; you cannot activate Traps this turn.

LORE:  

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