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[quote]When your opponent Summons a monster(s): You can Special Summon this card (from your hand).  If this card is Special Summoned: You can Set 1 Quick-Play Spell Card from your Deck.  You can only control 1 face-up "Crimson Brigadier".  During the turn this card is Special Summoned: You cannot activate Spell Cards.[/quote]

 

Designed this in a similar manner to Chaos Hunter and the other LV7 monsters that are starting to see some play due to Big Eye and what-not.  Of course, I wanted to make this one somewhat balanced while being viable at the same time.  In a sense, it's a solid way to grab an MST or a Lance while also having low enough ATK points to not make it inherently broken.

 

I made it's stats Beast-Warrior with WIND Attribute so it could get the Fire Formation support without being FIRE to get that support directly, etc. things like Blaster.

 

So yeah, I'm content with it.  It's my first card in a while.

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Well let's start with aesthetics of the card. 

 

The name is nice, fitting and has a higher level of word choice that is endearing. Now, I am not loving the picture too much. The woman herself isn't very attractive(I don't mean that in a sexual kind of way, but more of actual appeal) and the background fades from darkness to chaos, which is a bit offputting. Of course, these are just minor things.

 

 

As you said, it is a nice searcher for Quick-Plays, proving to be quite useful. I think it could probably use a little nerfing, restricting the kind of summon(either Normal or Special) but otherwise I think it is a pretty good card. 

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If it's your first card in a while, remember that "When your opponent Summons a monster(s): You can Special Summon this card (from your hand)," does not make any sense and don't do it again. You're putting both an Effect Summon (that starts a chain) and an Inherrent Summon (that doens't start a chain, typically Extra Deck monsters work this way, also Normal/Tributes). This effect is impossible as an Inherrent Summon as it triggers when your opponent Summons a monster, so take out "(from your hand)" and put in "from your hand" instead. For the effect itself, pretty balanced, allows you to play any Quick-Play directly from your Deck (think there's a card that does that already), but also keeps itself balanced by only being able to activate it the turn after. The card does however only have 2K, so it's pretty meh and is gonna get destroyed quickly, I suggest boosting it a little so you can keep this alive for a turn longer, and the "only control 1" is not needed, just make it so only 1 can be Summoned per turn instead. The art looks more like a Warrior, I don't really see the "beast" part, but it's not important really.

 

OCG fix:

 

OCG fix: When your opponent Summons a monster(s): You can Special Summon this card from your hand (not Inherrent).  If this card is Special Summoned: You can Set 1 Quick-Play Spell Card directly (term borrowed from FF) from your Deck. You can only control 1 face-up "Crimson Brigadier".  During the turn this card is Special Summoned, you cannot activate Spell Cards. (not an effect, a condition, does not have a colon).

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