Michy10 Posted April 30, 2013 Report Share Posted April 30, 2013 Hi guys! Look at my card and rate it. [attachment=37390:createcard.jpg] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Iriq Posted April 30, 2013 Report Share Posted April 30, 2013 Welcome to YCM. For a 1st post, this was a very good attempt. Now, problem with the Summoning conditions is that, from the way it is phrased, you could also banish using monsters on your opponents side of the field as well. In my opinion, this card would be/is considered overpowered since not only is it easy to summon this card, you also get to destroy all other cards on the field. As for the OCG, I believe "summoned" is meant to begin with a capitalized S; for the last part of the effect, I think (im not 100% sure) it should say "except this card". Overall, good art, but bad balancing. Lower the attack to at least 3500, to be able to summon using your own monsters only, and lose the last effect, then I think it wont be as op'd. However, I noticed you were trying to give an effect related to the card and its name; so what you could do is lower it to ~ 3000 and be able to keep the last effect. You may want a second opinion. 5/10 --> 6/10(extra point for nearly flawless OCG for a 1st-timer) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blake Posted April 30, 2013 Report Share Posted April 30, 2013 You must post the card's effect separately from the card itself. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Michy10 Posted April 30, 2013 Author Report Share Posted April 30, 2013 I thank Iriq and Maribelle for the rating, i'll make better that card modifying the effect and rewriting it in the top of the post. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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