i refuse to make a stoopid title to attract vooers...[Single Challenge 54/100]

[Ren✧]

DEF changed to 3000

2 Level 6 monsters

When this card is Xyz Summoned: You can flip it face-down. If this card is Flip Summoned: Switch its ATK and DEF, until the End Phase. Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material monster, flip this card face-down. If this Defense Position card does battle with an opponent's monster: Return the attacking monster to its owner's hand after Damage Calculation and inflict damage to your opponent for each card in their hand x400. This Defense Position card cannot be destroyed by an opponent's card effect.

 

This is result of my delusional mind at midnight last night. I am also pretty shaky on making generic monsters, that don't support an archetype, so have it...

[Zazubat]

I honestly think this card is pretty mediocre to be honest. It takes a while to get going, has not real protection besides it's DEF. The burn is kind of nice, though it probably won't happen as your opponent won't really want to attack this if they can't destroy it, but at the same time, they kind of need to unless they want a 2700 monster to deal with, but then again, you might as well pick something like Number 6 if you want power, or Photon Strike Bounzer for damage (plus a negate and hefty ATK). I would increase it's DEF so it can't be run over, and so it has a bit more power, cause as it stands now, I wouldn't pick this over other Rank 6s.

 

 

OCG fix:

When this card is Xyz Summoned: You can change this card to face-down. (You don't flip things face-down, only face-up, some old cards do it, but new cards don't, so use the new instead) If this card is Flip Summoned: Switch this card's ATK and DEF, until the End Phase. (you always refer to to "itself" as "this card") Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; flip this card face-down. (no semi-colon, and it's not called an Xyz Material Monster) If this Defense Position battles an opponent's monster: Return the attacking monster to its owner's hand after Damage Calculation and inflict 400 damage to your opponent for each card in their hand (no card uses the xnumber anymore, and neither should this card).

[Anozariel]

This effect somehow has an Idol Of Durand feeling, but over all, nice idea and as usual; very good image! :)

[Ren✧]

I honestly think this card is pretty mediocre to be honest. It takes a while to get going, has not real protection besides it's DEF. The burn is kind of nice, though it probably won't happen as your opponent won't really want to attack this if they can't destroy it, but at the same time, they kind of need to unless they want a 2700 monster to deal with, but then again, you might as well pick something like Number 6 if you want power, or Photon Strike Bounzer for damage (plus a negate and hefty ATK). I would increase it's DEF so it can't be run over, and so it has a bit more power, cause as it stands now, I wouldn't pick this over other Rank 6s.

 

 

OCG fix:

When this card is Xyz Summoned: You can change this card to face-down. (You don't flip things face-down, only face-up, some old cards do it, but new cards don't, so use the new instead) If this card is Flip Summoned: Switch this card's ATK and DEF, until the End Phase. (you always refer to to "itself" as "this card") Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; flip this card face-down. (no semi-colon, and it's not called an Xyz Material Monster) If this Defense Position battles an opponent's monster: Return the attacking monster to its owner's hand after Damage Calculation and inflict 400 damage to your opponent for each card in their hand (no card uses the xnumber anymore, and neither should this card).

 

Increase to like 3000? or more? I also thought of summoning it in face-down right off the bat, that way an experienced opponent wouldn't have a clue as to what it is. Should I make the ATK and DEF switch until your opponent's next End Phase? Perhaps protection from effect destruction while in defense position? 

 

Sorry about bombing you with all these questions, I was obviously very shaky on this card and I think my hesitation to keep from making it OP'ed, made it UP'ed.

 

 

 

This effect somehow has an Idol Of Durand feeling, but over all, nice idea and as usual; very good image! :)

 

Thanks! It took me awhile to settle on an effect that matched a 'gargoyle'-like card. 

[Zazubat]

Increase to like 3000? or more? I also thought of summoning it in face-down right off the bat, that way an experienced opponent wouldn't have a clue as to what it is. Should I make the ATK and DEF switch until your opponent's next End Phase? Perhaps protection from effect destruction while in defense position? 

 

Sorry about bombing you with all these questions, I was obviously very shaky on this card and I think my hesitation to keep from making it OP'ed, made it UP'ed.

 

 

 

 

Thanks! It took me awhile to settle on an effect that matched a 'gargoyle'-like card. 

There's a card which gains half the ATK from other Number Xyzs in the Graveyard, which can get it up to 2250 more ATK, and it already has 2600 ATK and 3000 DEF AND it's a generic Rank 6. This card is weak compared to that card. Anyway, Xyz Summoning in face-down is not possible right from the start, no card does that, at least without letting your opponent know first. It's also not that smart of a design choice TBH. I think that giving it a big bigger boost would help. Allowing it to be in both your turn and your opponent's can be kind of cheap, and if you're thinking of giving it destruction protection as well, I don't think that would be smart.

[Ren✧]

Changes made.