Lordanius - The Fiarce (xyz)

[BatMed]

 

 

2 Level 6 monsters

In Battle-Phases, you can detach one xyz material from this card and all your monsters in your controle gain 500 ATK and DEF points till the next Standy-Phases. If this card is going to destroy result of battle, detach one xyz material and end the battle-Phases. If this card is the only monster in your controle, Destroy all the monsters in your opponent controle by detaching 2 xyz materials.

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Where do I start...

Use correct grammar, till isn't a word. Controle isn't a word either.

 

A 3250 beater for 2 level 6 monsters is broken as hell, no monster in this meta can kill that by battle so the next effect is totally useless.

And a Raigeki for 2 level 6 monsters is a TERRIBLE design, no, just no.

 

I'm not even gonna try to fix the OCG.

 

0/10.

[NoshpalStefan]

In Battle-Phases During either player's Battle Phase, you can detach one xyz material from this card and all your monsters in your controle gain 500 ATK and DEF points till the next Standy-Phases to have all monsters you control gain 500 ATK and DEF until your next Standby Phase. If this card is going to destroy result of battle, detach one xyz material and end the battle-Phases If this card destroys a monster as a result of battle, you can detach one xyz material to end the Battle Phase. If this card is the only monster in your controle, Destroy all the monsters in your opponent controle by detaching 2 xyz materials If this is the only monster on your side of the field, detach 2 xyz materials to destroy all monsters on your opponent's side of the field.

 

Whew, I don't know where to begin with this card - apart from the fact that the lore was, I'm sorry to say this, but the lore was horrible. :/

 

And I really have to point this out, I do not understand what you're trying to say with the second effect. If it's as I translated it, then it makes no sense, why would you want to end your BP? And the other option is if it would be destroyed by battle to detach one material and end the BP, but that doesn't correspond to a lot of the game mechanics, maybe make it so that you can detach one xyz material instead of destroying it?

 

And onto the effect - well, it's just too damn overpowered. I mean, there's basically no drawback to it and decks like Hieratics and Chaos Dragons can make it with ease. Especially the last effect, I mean it's just too damn much. :/ Add a drawback for the sake of balanced cards everywhere.

 

I'm sorry but no fiber in my body can possibly tell me to give this a high rating right now. :/ So, please change it to something that I suggested because currently I really can't give it anything good.

[forteller]

ok ill try to help you out here and maybe somone will correct me as my OCG isnt that good either but

This should like more like

2 Level 6 monsters

In Battle-Phases, you can detach one xyz material from this card and all your monsters in your controle gain 500 ATK and DEF points till the next Standy-Phases. If this card is going to destroy result of battle, detach one xyz material and end the battle-Phases. If this card is the only monster in your controle, Destroy all the monsters in your opponent controle by detaching 2 xyz materials.

This:

2 Level 6 monsters

During either Players Battle Phase you can detach one Xyz material from this card, to Increase the ATK and DEF of all monster you control by 500 until the next Standby Phase. If this card would be destroyed by battle, you can detach one Xyz material from this card instead.If this card is the only monster you control you can detach 2 Xyz materials from this card to destroy all other monsters on the field.

 

 

and as for the card its intresting with 2750 it beats most things and ill assume the first abillty could be used twice to boost everything by 1000 that could really kill someone quicky in the right combo easy OTK could be set up. that said the last abillty seems out of place consider remaking it ito something that involes battle like the rest of the card. i like this card i hope you continue to mkae cards ill be around to help as much as i can with the OCG have fun XD

[NoshpalStefan]

ok ill try to help you out here and maybe somone will correct me as my OCG isnt that good either but

This should like more like

2 Level 6 monsters

In Battle-Phases, you can detach one xyz material from this card and all your monsters in your controle gain 500 ATK and DEF points till the next Standy-Phases. If this card is going to destroy result of battle, detach one xyz material and end the battle-Phases. If this card is the only monster in your controle, Destroy all the monsters in your opponent controle by detaching 2 xyz materials.

This:

2 Level 6 monsters

During either Players Battle Phase you can detach one Xyz material from this card, to Increase the ATK and DEF of all monster you control by 500 until the next Standby Phase. If this card would be destroyed by battle, you can detach one Xyz material from this card instead.If this card is the only monster you control you can detach 2 Xyz materials from this card to destroy all other monsters on the field.

 

 

and as for the card its intresting with 2750 it beats most things and ill assume the first abillty could be used twice to boost everything by 1000 that could really kill someone quicky in the right combo easy OTK could be set up. that said the last abillty seems out of place consider remaking it ito something that involes battle like the rest of the card. i like this card i hope you continue to mkae cards ill be around to help as much as i can with the OCG have fun XD

 

 

I'm sorry, I know your intention is to be kind, but for once you need to admit that a card is too overpowered.

 

There is no drawback for this card, it can get to a 3250 beater, it prevents destruction, and it's essentially a Raigeki. You know the game already has a raigeki - the reason that no one plays it because it's banned. So, other than by an uncommon logic loop, why would this card not be banned if it was made?

 

Your OCG fix didn't necessarily improve on much other than the fact that you fixed the second effect - kudos on that.

 

Again, I know you're trying to be nice, but even you have to touch on the BS of some cards once in a while.

[forteller]

if it were my id remove the last effect all together i think its card could find i good home in a otk deck without the last effect at all.

[BatMed]

I'm sorry, I know your intention is to be kind, but for once you need to admit that a card is too overpowered.

 

There is no drawback for this card, it can get to a 3250 beater, it prevents destruction, and it's essentially a Raigeki. You know the game already has a raigeki - the reason that no one plays it because it's banned. So, other than by an uncommon logic loop, why would this card not be banned if it was made?

 

Your OCG fix didn't necessarily improve on much other than the fact that you fixed the second effect - kudos on that.

 

Again, I know you're trying to be nice, but even you have to touch on the BS of some cards once in a while.

thanks, both of u , really,.

cauz All the cards that I made are sucks (as this forum members said) but you guys are just wonderfull , it;s the first time when someone guide me to the right way . ^_^