Noble Knight Perceval [Week 3/Card 3]

[Kyng's Old Account]

 
This card is treated as a Normal Monster while face-up on the field. While equipped with a "Noble Arms" Equip Spell Card, this card becomes an Effect Monster with this effect.
● Once per turn, during either player's turn, when a "Noble Arms" Equip Spell Card is equipped to a Warrior-Type Monster you control; you can add 1 "Noble Knight" Monster from your Deck to your hand.[hr]Though foolish, yet stood steadfast ready
Perceval had heart pure.
A blade drawn for the search of the Grail
He stood strong.
Savior of the Fisher King was he
and too legend

Week 3, Noble Week, with a new Noble Knight. This guy, who corresponds to Percival of Arthurian fables, is a well regarded Grail Knight, often entailed for his efforts with the Fisher King. He acts as another Normal Monster on the field, seeking a sword to wield.

[necrosim]

I'm not really sure how to critique cards, but I'll give it a try.

First off the artwork for this looks great, it really fits in with Noble Knights and seems realistic.

 

Second, the effect seems good too, giving you good search power whenever you equip an noble arms card to noble knight monster. But maybe you should switch the requirements around to allows for more options, since as it is your only search target within the archetype is Artorigus. Instead maybe it could say "Once per turn, during either player's turn, when a "Noble Arms" Equip Spell Card is equipped to a LIGHT monster you control; you can add 1"Noble Knight" card from your Deck to your hand." This way the requirements for his effect is less strict and you can search any Noble Knight monster, giving you much more versatility.

 

As for his ATK and DEF I can't really complain, in a Noble Knight deck it would be pretty easy to boost him up with equip spells or just use him as Xyz material to get him off the field.

 

Overall I'd say 8/10.

[Kyng's Old Account]

I'm not really sure how to critique cards, but I'll give it a try.
First off the artwork for this looks great, it really fits in with Noble Knights and seems realistic.
 
Second, the effect seems good too, giving you good search power whenever you equip an noble arms card to noble knight monster. But maybe you should switch the requirements around to allows for more options, since as it is your only search target within the archetype is Artorigus. Instead maybe it could say "Once per turn, during either player's turn, when a "Noble Arms" Equip Spell Card is equipped to a LIGHT monster you control; you can add 1"Noble Knight" card from your Deck to your hand." This way the requirements for his effect is less strict and you can search any Noble Knight monster, giving you much more versatility.
 
As for his ATK and DEF I can't really complain, in a Noble Knight deck it would be pretty easy to boost him up with equip spells or just use him as Xyz material to get him off the field.
 
Overall I'd say 8/10.

I am really happy with your review. Not only have you absolutely broken the mold on the stereotypical newbie response whom would not read the rules, you have also shown profound reviewing ability. That is very much appreciated by other Card Makers.

I am glad you enjoyed the flavour (which generally refers to the Card's more aesthetic qualities, such as picture, relevance to what it is based off (if applicable), picture, etc.) and I am more than happy to take your idea into consideration when adjusting this card.

Thank you, really. I am so happy to see members like you around!

[Kyng's Old Account]

Updated!

[necrosim]

I am really happy with your review. Not only have you absolutely broken the mold on the stereotypical newbie response whom would not read the rules, you have also shown profound reviewing ability. That is very much appreciated by other Card Makers.

I am glad you enjoyed the flavour (which generally refers to the Card's more aesthetic qualities, such as picture, relevance to what it is based off (if applicable), picture, etc.) and I am more than happy to take your idea into consideration when adjusting this card.

Thank you, really. I am so happy to see members like you around!

Thank you, I've been lurking on this forum for quite some time before I ever decided to post.