Veyron the Speed Queen [Week 4/Card 3]

[Kyng's Old Account]

 
2 or more Level 4 Monsters
If this card is in face-up Attack Position at the beginning of your Battle Phase, it must attack first. If this card attacks, your opponent cannot activate Spell/Trap Cards until the end of the Damage Step. You can only control 1 "Veyron the Speed Queen". When this card destroys a monster by battle and sends it to the Graveyard: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; inflict damage to your opponent equal to the ATK of the destroyed monster.[hr]No monster moves faster than the Speed Queen! She'll quash evil-ocity with a swift, hard kick, and force her foes into submission! She's so fast, magic can't detect her attacks! She's so quick, Traps can't spot her! When she strikes her foe, her Momentum Burst thrashes out and deals additional damage! All hail the Speed Queen!

I'm not sure about how balanced she is. Veyron is very good early game, and can cripple out lower level monsters while inflicting significant damage, but I'm still unsure about how good it is. So, give me a hand with your much appreciated critique!

[Zazubat]

I must say, I have looked around and I couldn't find anything that attacks first, so that's a first *gets punched* Anyway, the card is alright, it makes annoying effects that might screw up locked down, and it kinda reminds me of my card I made not too long ago actually, but this does a bit more, and in another way. The fact that it can do a 1900 burn is quite powerful in my opinion, though there's many cards that kinda do the same, and it is still kinda low. It's not a big deal I don't think so.

 

Anyway, a little OCG fix. I don't know how you would write the first part about the "first attack" since it is something I havn't seen before, though you can choose to write it the your way or my way:

 

If you conduct your Battle Phase, this card must attack first. If this card attacks, your opponent cannot activate Spell/Trap Cards until the end of the Damage Step. You can only control 1 "Veyron the Speed Queen". When this card destroys a monster by battle and sends it to the Graveyard: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; inflict damage to your opponent equal to the ATK of the destroyed monster.

[Kyng's Old Account]

I must say, I have looked around and I couldn't find anything that attacks first, so that's a first *gets punched* Anyway, the card is alright, it makes annoying effects that might screw up locked down, and it kinda reminds me of my card I made not too long ago actually, but this does a bit more, and in another way. The fact that it can do a 1900 burn is quite powerful in my opinion, though there's many cards that kinda do the same, and it is still kinda low. It's not a big deal I don't think so.

 

Anyway, a little OCG fix. I don't know how you would write the first part about the "first attack" since it is something I havn't seen before, though you can choose to write it the your way or my way:

 

If you conduct your Battle Phase, this card must attack first. If this card attacks, your opponent cannot activate Spell/Trap Cards until the end of the Damage Step. You can only control 1 "Veyron the Speed Queen". When this card destroys a monster by battle and sends it to the Graveyard: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; inflict damage to your opponent equal to the ATK of the destroyed monster.

Thanks for the OCG fix Zazu, I'll update her with the fixed OCG when I can. Also, as always I appreciate your insightful review. I'm glad you like the card! ^^

[necrosim]

I think this card is balanced. And I could see her being really useful in locking your opponent into a tight corner really early in the game and keeping from making any advances for a few turns. And the stats a good too, this card would wreak havoc in a warrior xyz deck with solidarity.

As for you its first attack effect, Ultimate Tyrrano has the same effect so you can just use that. I'd give you a link but I'm on my phone. Sorry.

Conclusion: 8/10

[Kyng's Old Account]

I think this card is balanced. And I could see her being really useful in locking your opponent into a tight corner really early in the game and keeping from making any advances for a few turns. And the stats a good too, this card would wreak havoc in a warrior xyz deck with solidarity.

As for you its first attack effect, Ultimate Tyrrano has the same effect so you can just use that. I'd give you a link but I'm on my phone. Sorry.

Conclusion: 8/10

Thanks for the review. I am glad you like the card, and I am even more grateful you found the link between this and Ultimate Tyrrano. Thanks a lot!

[Kyng's Old Account]

This card's effect has been updated!

[Zazubat]

Thanks for the review. I am glad you like the card, and I am even more grateful you found the link between this and Ultimate Tyrrano. Thanks a lot!

Oh, I remember that card, it's one of the only cards I have actually owned... but the wording on it is old as fuck, so I wouldn't suggest using it. Oh, and I can't really see what has changed, maybe there's something I'm not seeing right :/

[L0SS]

You've made the card interesting and flavoursome. The speed thing has been executed really well, and it has a nice effect, that is potentially quite powerful.

 

Of course, the major issue is the low attack; but as a first turn Xyz, this could be formidable.

I think It would work well against something that emphasises low level stuff early game, such as Bujins or Firefists. 

 

The ability to use unlimited monsters is quite cool and all, although I'm not sure it would see more than two, as the bulk of it's effect is in the first clause.

Nonetheless, It looks decent, and accomplishes what it set out to do. A diverse and tactful use of it could be powerful; and it feels balanced, at least in my eyes.

[Kyng's Old Account]

You've made the card interesting and flavoursome. The speed thing has been executed really well, and it has a nice effect, that is potentially quite powerful.
 
Of course, the major issue is the low attack; but as a first turn Xyz, this could be formidable.
I think It would work well against something that emphasises low level stuff early game, such as Bujins or Firefists. 
 
The ability to use unlimited monsters is quite cool and all, although I'm not sure it would see more than two, as the bulk of it's effect is in the first clause.
Nonetheless, It looks decent, and accomplishes what it set out to do. A diverse and tactful use of it could be powerful; and it feels balanced, at least in my eyes.

Thanks for the review, much appreciated as per usual, Plainview ^^

[Junkwarriordude]

Wow I am amazed by your cards Kyng. They are awesome, Keep up the good work.

[Kyng's Old Account]

Wow I am amazed by your cards Kyng. They are awesome, Keep up the good work.

Thanks for your two cents!

[Therrion]

A very interesting straight forward card. I like the "Speed" aspect of it attacking first and being able to strike so fast your opponent can't respond. Although, Speed is more for Synchro Monsters, but whatever.

As for the burn, it is rather deadly, and demands an answer. Powering it up with Solidarity, and making it untargetable with perhaps Safe Zone would be a good combo to an extent.

8.2/10

[Kyng's Old Account]

A very interesting straight forward card. I like the "Speed" aspect of it attacking first and being able to strike so fast your opponent can't respond. Although, Speed is more for Synchro Monsters, but whatever.
As for the burn, it is rather deadly, and demands an answer. Powering it up with Solidarity, and making it untargetable with perhaps Safe Zone would be a good combo to an extent.
8.2/10

I am glad you like Veyron, thanks for the review; I'm glad you find it both strong and flavourful.